Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer mentions biryani and personal feeling, which is good, but it is unclear and contains repetition, hesitations and inaccurate phrases. To improve, give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar, add one or two specific details (ingredients, occasions) using linking words, and keep to 3–4 polished sentences. Focus on smooth phrasing (e.g., 'It’s a spicy rice dish made with...').

예시: I love biryani; it’s a famous spicy rice dish in my country made with fragrant basmati rice, meat, and aromatic spices. I usually eat it on special occasions like weddings and festivals because my family prepares it then. It always reminds me of good times with relatives and the rich flavors make it my favorite.

제안: The answer is direct but repetitive and has some incorrect phrasing. Improve by combining short sentences into a cohesive response, correcting grammar, and adding a specific example of a dish or reason why you liked it. Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep response concise (3–4 sentences).

예시: As a child I especially liked chicken, which was my favorite food because it was versatile and easy to eat. My mother often cooked different chicken dishes, such as roasted chicken and chicken curry, so I had it almost every day. I liked it because of the comforting flavors and simple preparation.

제안: You answer the question but it is vague, contains hesitations and grammar errors. Improve by stating clearly that you change foods by season, give specific seasonal examples, use linking words (for example, in summer..., whereas in winter...) and explain why (weather, traditions). Keep to 3–4 clear sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer lighter foods like salads and fruit to stay cool, whereas in winter I eat richer, warming dishes such as stews and rice-based meals. I also follow traditional foods during festivals and family celebrations because they suit the season and the occasion.

× My favorite food is biryani, it is famous dish in my country.

✓ My favorite food is biryani; it is a famous dish in my country.

Missing definite/indefinite article before 'famous dish'. Use 'a' to indicate one example of many. Also replace comma splice with a semicolon or period to join independent clauses. Suggestion: Use 'a famous dish' and separate clauses correctly.

× Rice is spicy and full of rice and uh fair government spicy.

✓ The rice is spicy and full of flavor.

Redundant phrase 'full of rice' is incorrect and 'fair government spicy' is nonsensical. Add definite article 'the' with specific noun and use the adjective 'spicy' and noun 'flavor' to make sense. Suggestion: Say 'The rice is spicy and full of flavor.'

× Usually eat on a special occasion with my family and friend because it's just amazing and remind me of family.

✓ I usually eat it on special occasions with my family and friends because it's amazing and reminds me of family.

Missing subject 'I' and incorrect singular/plural 'occasion/occasions' and 'friend/friends'. Verb 'remind' needs third-person singular 'reminds' to agree with 'it'. Suggestion: Include subject, match plural nouns, and use correct verb form.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? Student: When I was young, I loved chicken. It was my favorite food.

✓ When I was young, I loved chicken. It was my favourite food.

Tense usage here is correct (past simple). Correction only standardizes spelling 'favourite' if British English is preferred; otherwise keep 'favorite'. No grammatical change required. Suggestion: Maintain past simple for past habits.

× My mother opened me different chicken dishes for me.

✓ My mother offered me different chicken dishes.

Verb 'opened' is incorrect collocation. Use 'offered' or 'made' to express that the mother provided dishes. Also drop redundant 'for me' if 'offered me' is used. Suggestion: Use verbs like 'offered', 'served', or 'made'.

× So I ate it almost every day because I found it delicious and easy to eat.

✓ So I ate it almost every day because I found it delicious and easy to eat.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses past simple consistently for past habits. Suggestion: Keep as is.

× And my mother also provided every day, every day.

✓ And my mother also provided it every day.

Repetition 'every day, every day' is redundant. 'Provided' needs an object (what she provided); adding 'it' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary repetition and include the object.

× Yeah, obviously I usually eat uh, different type of food and especially summer food, uh, different on winter food.

✓ Yeah, obviously I usually eat different types of food, especially summer foods, which are different from winter foods.

Use plural 'types' for variety and plural 'foods' when comparing seasons. 'Different on winter food' is incorrect; use 'different from'. Suggestion: Use 'different from' for comparisons and pluralize when appropriate.

× It's depend on the occasions.

✓ It depends on the occasion.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires 'depends' (third person singular). 'Occasions' can be singular 'occasion' or keep 'occasions' but ensure consistency. Prefer singular 'occasion' here. Suggestion: Use 'depends' and choose singular/plural consistently.

× So I try to maintain and I try to follow the traditional food.

✓ So I try to maintain traditions and I try to follow traditional foods.

'Maintain' needs an object—'traditions' fits. 'the traditional food' is awkward; plural 'traditional foods' is more natural. Suggestion: Specify what you maintain and pluralize when speaking generally.

× It's very amazing and uh, delicious.

✓ They are very delicious and amazing.

Pronoun 'It' is unclear referring to foods (plural) so use 'they' or 'it' with singular. Also reorder adjectives 'delicious and amazing' sounds more natural. Suggestion: Use correct pronoun agreement and natural adjective order.