Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give two specific supporting details (what you like about it and when you eat it). Reduce hesitation and correct grammar (e.g., "all kinds of food", "traditional foods"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example" to connect ideas.

예시: My favourite food is Mexican dishes such as quesadillas and tacos. I especially like them because the fillings are flavorful and the salsa adds a fresh, spicy kick. For example, I often eat tacos with salsa and lime on weekends when I socialise with friends.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about childhood favourites, then give specific examples and a brief reason or memory. Correct grammar ("there were not many choices", "my favourite was"). Avoid trailing off; finish sentences and use linking words like "so" or "because".

예시: When I was young, I mostly ate simple home-cooked meals because there were not many choices. My favourites were rice pudding and curried fritters with rice, and sometimes I ate them with tortillas. I remember my family making these dishes every Sunday, which made them special to me.

제안: Give a direct answer first (yes/no) and then give two clear reasons or examples. Reduce hesitation and repetition, correct grammar ("different kinds of food", "I don't like to take risks", "exotic"). Use linking words such as "however" or "because" to organise contrastive ideas.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and cold dishes, while in winter I choose warming, spicy meals such as curries. However, I avoid very exotic dishes because they can be expensive and I worry I might not enjoy them.

× Well I like all kind of foods even though my traditional food Mexican food, Italian and English food as well.

✓ Well, I like all kinds of food, including my traditional Mexican food, Italian, and English food as well.

The phrase 'all kind of foods' uses the wrong quantifier and pluralization. Use 'all kinds of' with plural noun 'food' (or 'kinds of food'). Also streamline 'my traditional food Mexican food' to 'my traditional Mexican food' and separate items with commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'all kinds of' + singular 'food' or 'kinds of foods' rarely; keep parallel structure when listing items.

× But my favorite is the quesadilla and tacos with salsa and side sauces.

✓ But my favorites are quesadillas and tacos with salsa and side sauces.

The sentence mixes singular/plural and article usage. 'The quesadilla and tacos' is inconsistent; if referring generally, use plural nouns without 'the' or make both singular. 'Favorite' should agree with plural subject: 'favorites are'. Suggestion: Keep number consistent: 'my favorite is the quesadilla' (singular) or 'my favorites are quesadillas and tacos' (plural).

× It is a Mexican food so I love it when it's.

✓ They are Mexican dishes so I love them.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'It is a Mexican food' is incorrect for plural 'quesadillas and tacos'. The sentence ends with 'when it's' which is incomplete. Replace with a clear plural subject and pronoun: 'They are Mexican dishes so I love them.' Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match the noun number and avoid sentence fragments.

× Well, when I was young there was no many choices regarding food items, but my favorite was rice pudding and fritter Curry with rice, sometimes with the tortillas and.

✓ Well, when I was young there were not many choices regarding food items, but my favorite was rice pudding and fritters or curry with rice, sometimes with tortillas.

'There was no many choices' is ungrammatical: use 'there were not many choices' (plural subject). Also fix item names and articles: 'fritter' -> 'fritters', 'Curry' -> 'curry' (lowercase), remove the trailing 'and' which makes a fragment. Use 'tortillas' plural without 'the' for general reference. Suggestion: Use 'there were not many choices' for plural nouns and keep lists complete.

× And this was my favorite meal and.

✓ That was my favorite meal.

The original is a fragment with an extra conjunction 'and' at the end. Replace with a complete sentence 'That was my favorite meal.' Suggestion: Avoid dangling conjunctions and ensure each sentence has a subject and predicate.

× Definitely yes, because I love to try different kind of foods, but I, even though I don't like to take a risk because, umm, ex exotic foods are really expensive and whenever we don't like our, there's a multiple chances that we can, uh, waste our money.

✓ Definitely yes, because I love to try different kinds of food, but I don't like to take risks because exotic foods are really expensive, and if we don't like them, there is a high chance that we will waste our money.

Multiple issues: 'different kind of foods' should be 'different kinds of food' (quantifier and noun form). 'I don't like to take a risk' -> 'take risks' (general habit). 'ex exotic' has a filler word and typo; remove filler and use 'exotic'. 'whenever we don't like our' is incomplete; use 'if we don't like them'. 'there's a multiple chances' is incorrect; use 'there is a high chance' or 'there are multiple chances'. Also adjust tense for future consequence: 'we will waste our money.' Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements, remove fillers, complete clauses, and choose appropriate expressions for likelihood.

× But uh, but umm, yeah, I do like to try different cuisines like Mexican.

✓ Yes, I do like to try different cuisines, such as Mexican.

Repetitive fillers 'but uh, but umm, yeah' are unnecessary and break fluency. Use 'such as' for examples instead of 'like' in formal speech. Ensure sentence is concise. Suggestion: Eliminate fillers for clarity and use 'such as' or 'for example' when giving examples.