Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu; trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng với câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ: "surprise and loving", "the most food"). Nên nói: nêu món yêu thích, giải thích lý do và có thể mô tả một chi tiết cụ thể (thành phần hoặc lúc nào ăn).

예시: My favourite food is pizza. I love it because of the combination of crispy crust, melted cheese and fresh toppings. For example, I often choose a Margherita pizza with tomato, basil and mozzarella, which I find simple but very satisfying.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp về thì và động từ (ví dụ: "when I was young"); trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể (ai hay cho bạn ăn, nơi bạn thường ăn). Hạn chế tiếng thừa như "uh" và tránh cấu trúc lủng củng.

예시: When I was young, I liked burgers. I enjoyed them because they were quick and tasty, and my parents often bought them as a treat after weekend outings. I especially remember eating cheeseburgers at a local diner with my family.

제안: Tổ chức ý mạch lạc hơn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, rồi dùng liên từ (because, so, for example) để giải thích. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "boring" thay vì "molding", "frequently" thay vì "often" nếu cần). Tránh lặp ý và chỉnh câu cho tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I do. I tend to eat lighter and fresher foods in summer, like salads and fruit, and heartier meals in winter, such as stews and roasted vegetables. For example, in summer I often have cold noodle salads, while in winter I prefer warm soups.

제안: Sửa ngữ pháp, từ vựng và trình tự ý: dùng thì quá khứ cho thói quen trước đây và hiện tại để so sánh. Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa ("sourdoughed", "strain it"); giải thích rõ lý do thay đổi khẩu vị với ví dụ. Giữ câu ngắn tối đa 3–4 câu.

예시: When I was a child, I loved sweet foods, especially honey and candies. However, as I learned more about nutrition, I started to avoid too much sugar for health reasons. Now I prefer savory snacks and fruits instead of sweets.

× Well I have so many favorite food but the most food make me surprise and loving is pizza the fast food famous really popular in USA.

✓ Well, I have so many favorite foods, but the food that surprises me and that I love most is pizza; it is a famous fast food and very popular in the USA.

'Food' should be plural 'foods' when referring to many favorites. 'The most food' is ungrammatical; use 'the food that ... most' or 'the thing I love most'. Verb agreement and word choice corrected: 'make me surprise and loving' -> 'surprises me and that I love'. Added articles and punctuation for clarity.

× The kind of food that I was like when I were young is burgers.

✓ The kind of food that I liked when I was young was burgers.

Use past tense 'liked' for a past preference and 'was' (not 'were') for first/third person singular. 'Is' should be 'was' to match past time reference. 'Burgers' is plural and appropriate.

× I like, uh, their fast food.

✓ I liked their fast food.

Pronoun 'their' is odd here because the referent (fast-food restaurants) is unclear; keeping 'their' is acceptable if referring to a group but tense should match: 'liked'. For clarity, use 'I liked fast food from them' or 'I liked their fast food' with context.

× Of course yes, I always eat different foods at different times of the year because I think if I eat just molding and often foods at the different times of the year I will feel more boring and don't want to eat it.

✓ Of course. I always eat different foods at different times of the year because I think if I eat the same old foods all the time, I will feel bored and not want to eat them.

Use present simple 'eat' for habitual actions (kept). 'Molding and often foods' is incorrect; use 'the same old foods' or 'repeated foods'. 'Feel more boring' should be 'feel bored' (adjective describing the person). Use 'not want to eat them' to match plural 'foods'.

× So I think change your food at your different times is the best way to.

✓ So I think changing your food at different times of the year is the best way.

Use gerund 'changing' after 'think'. 'Your different times' is unclear; use 'different times of the year'. Remove unnecessary 'to'.

× A sin I was a child, I really loved the sweet food because I think sugar is a valuable, valuable spice that I like most.

✓ Since I was a child, I really loved sweet foods because I thought sugar was a valuable ingredient that I liked most.

'A sin' is a misspelling of 'since'. Use past tense 'thought' and 'was' to match past reference. 'Sweet food' should be 'sweet foods' when speaking generally. 'Spice' is inaccurate; 'ingredient' is better for sugar.

× But after I was sourdoughed, I was think that honey is not good for health.

✓ But after I developed a sour stomach, I thought that honey is not good for my health.

'Sourdoughed' is incorrect; likely meant 'had a sour stomach' or 'developed acid reflux'. Use past tense 'thought' (not 'was think'). Add 'my' before 'health'.

× So I I will strain it and now I'm not like a sweet food.

✓ So I stopped eating it, and now I don't like sweet foods.

'I will strain it' is incorrect; likely meant 'I stopped' or 'I avoid it'. Use simple past 'stopped' for the change and present 'don't like' to describe current preference. 'Not like a sweet food' -> 'don't like sweet foods'.