Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then 1–2 supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (articles, verb forms). Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' correctly. For example, say what is your main favourite and then mention others briefly.

예시: My favourite food is pasta because I enjoy the rich tomato sauces and herbs. I also like fresh salads with tomatoes and cucumber for a light contrast, and sometimes I enjoy ice cream or a simple sandwich as a treat.

제안: Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence and give specific examples with reasons. Avoid contradictory or unclear statements and remove fillers. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain why you liked them.

예시: When I was young, I loved ice cream sandwiches, especially a brand called Kenzie, because they felt special and sweet. I also ate simple salads sometimes, but I preferred sweets and snacks most of the time.

제안: Answer directly, then give seasonal examples using clear linking phrases ('in summer', 'in autumn') and reasons why you choose those foods. Keep sentences complete and avoid trailing words.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. In summer I prefer cold treats like ice cream and light sandwiches because they keep me cool, while in autumn I enjoy fresh salads and warm pasta dishes as the weather becomes cooler.

제안: Use past and present tenses correctly to show change, and give a brief reason or example for the change. Keep it concise: one topic sentence about change plus one supporting detail with a reason using linking words like 'because' or 'now'.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to dislike vegetables, but now I enjoy salads and pasta because I appreciate healthier flavours and feel better after eating them.

× My favorite food is a pasta and a salad with tomatoes and cucumber and I'm really like ice cream and. Sandwiches.

✓ My favorite foods are pasta and a salad with tomatoes and cucumber, and I really like ice cream and sandwiches.

Errors: incorrect article 'a pasta' (use no article with uncountable or plural 'pasta'), inconsistent list and punctuation, wrong verb form 'I'm really like' (mixing 'be' with verb). Also singular/plural agreement: 'food' can be plural 'foods' when listing multiple items. Suggestion: remove 'a' before 'pasta', use plural 'foods' or rephrase 'My favorite food is pasta and salad', and use 'I really like' for preferences.

× When I was young, I really love Kenzie ice cream sandwiches, salad, and that's all because, uh, I don't like it when I was young.

✓ When I was young, I really loved Kenzie ice cream sandwiches and salad, and that was all because I didn't like other foods then.

Errors: tense mismatch — main clause refers to past ('When I was young') but uses present 'really love'; negative clause 'I don't like it when I was young' mixes present and past. Use past tense 'loved' and 'didn't like'. Also unclear phrasing 'that's all' better 'that was all'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout past-time description and simplify sentence.

× Of course, I eat different foods at different times of the year because. At the summer I like ice cream and candy and sandwiches.

✓ Of course, I eat different foods at different times of the year. In the summer I like ice cream, candy, and sandwiches.

Errors: stray 'because.' incomplete clause; incorrect preposition/article 'At the summer' should be 'In the summer'. Also punctuation and list commas. Suggestion: remove the unfinished 'because', use 'In the summer', and separate items with commas.

× At autumn I like fresh salad and pasta or.

✓ In autumn I like fresh salad and pasta.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'At autumn' should be 'In autumn'; trailing 'or.' is incomplete. Suggestion: use 'In autumn' and finish the list clearly without dangling conjunctions.

× Of course, I changed my favorite food, food, uh, when I was a child because, uh, when I was a child, I don't like, uh, eat and when I, and now I really like it.

✓ Of course, my favorite food has changed since I was a child because when I was a child I didn't like certain foods, and now I really like them.

Errors: tense and aspect issues — 'I changed my favorite food' is awkward; better 'my favorite food has changed' to show change over time. Mixed tenses 'when I was a child, I don't like' should be past 'didn't like'. Repetition and unclear pronouns 'it' unclear — use 'them' for plural foods. Suggestion: use present perfect to describe change since childhood and past tense for past preferences, and clarify what 'them' refers to.