Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more accurate, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the dish, give one or two specific distinguishing details, and avoid repetition. Use correct vocabulary (name of the dish) and reduce filler words. Also keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is a traditional Indian rice pudding called kheer. Unlike Western rice pudding, kheer is cooked with condensed milk and flavored with cardamom and saffron. I especially enjoy its creamy texture and subtle sweetness.

제안: Organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence about liking spicy food, then provide specific examples and reasons using linking words. Use accurate vocabulary for spices and avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

예시: When I was young I loved spicy food because my parents cooked traditional Indian meals. For example, dishes often used spices like cumin, coriander, cinnamon and chili. Because I grew up eating those flavours, I developed a strong preference for spicy food.

제안: Make the answer more specific and fluent. Start with a direct yes/no sentence, then give clear seasonal examples and reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and vague phrases like 'food that includes more water'.

예시: Yes. In summer I prefer hydrating foods such as watermelon, cucumbers and leafy salads because they keep me cool. In winter I eat heartier dishes like lentil soups and roasted vegetables to stay warm.

제안: Answer directly and correct factual errors (ghee is clarified butter, not rice pudding). State clearly that it hasn't changed, name the dish correctly, and give one concise reason with a linking word. Reduce repetition and filler words.

예시: No, it hasn't changed. I still love a traditional rice pudding called kheer because of its creamy texture and sweet flavor, which I have enjoyed since childhood.

× My favorite food is from traditional Indian dishes.

✓ My favorite food is a traditional Indian dish.

The original uses incorrect article and plural/singular form. 'Food is from traditional Indian dishes' is ungrammatical. Use the indefinite article 'a' with the singular countable noun 'dish' to say one item. Also 'favorite food' can be followed by 'is' + noun phrase. Suggestion: use 'a traditional Indian dish' to be clear.

× It's a rice pudding.

✓ It is a rice pudding.

Contraction 'It's' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity written form 'It is' is preferred; grammatically the sentence is correct. No tense error; this suggestion is stylistic rather than mandatory. (If kept, no change is required.)

× It's called key.

✓ It's called 'kheer'.

The word 'key' is likely a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'kheer', a specific Indian rice pudding. Use the correct noun to avoid confusion. This is a lexical correction rather than grammar, but it affects clarity.

× It's a little bit different from Western rice pudding because of the factors.

✓ It is a little different from Western rice pudding because of the ingredients and methods used.

'Because of the factors' is vague and ungrammatical here. Use a noun phrase that explains the cause: 'ingredients and methods used' clarifies why it differs. Also 'a little bit different' can be simplified to 'a little different'.

× They are like making that cuisine with the milk.

✓ It is made with milk.

Subject 'They' does not agree with singular 'that cuisine'. Passive voice 'is made' fits better to describe how the dish is prepared. Also 'with the milk' should be 'with milk' (no article). Use 'It is made with milk.'

× What kind of food did you like when you were young?

✓ (No change needed)

The question is already correct in past tense. No grammatical correction required.

× When I was young, I used to like spicy food because of my traditional factors.

✓ When I was young, I used to like spicy food because of my cultural traditions.

'Traditional factors' is unnatural; use 'cultural traditions' or 'family traditions'. 'Because of my traditional factors' is ungrammatical. This fixes word choice while keeping past habitual 'used to'.

× My parents used to like that as well.

✓ My parents liked that as well.

Both 'used to like' and 'liked' are acceptable. Keep 'used to like' if emphasizing past habit. The original is acceptable; this suggestion simplifies to 'liked'.

× And then even though we are in India, the spices are from their own origin from India.

✓ Even though we live in India, the spices originate in India.

'They are in India' mismatches tense and pronoun use; 'we are in India' is fine but better 'we live in India'. 'The spices are from their own origin from India' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'the spices originate in India' or 'the spices come from India.'

× That's why I like that as well.

✓ That's why I like it as well.

Use the pronoun 'it' to refer back to the dish rather than 'that'. 'That' is acceptable in speech but 'it' is more natural here.

× All of the food are made-up of the different different spices.

✓ All of the food is made up of different spices.

'Food' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is'. Remove hyphen in 'made up' and avoid repeating 'different'. Use 'made up of different spices.'

× For example, cinnamons and then caramel and then other spices out.

✓ For example, cinnamon, cardamom, and other spices.

'Cinnamons' should be 'cinnamon' (uncountable or mass noun); 'caramel' is not typically a spice—likely 'cardamom' was intended. 'Other spices out' is ungrammatical; list items with commas. Use correct spice names.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

✓ (No change needed)

The question is correct in the present simple. No correction required.

× Yes, I eat different foods at different time of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Pluralize 'time' to 'times' because 'different times' refers to multiple occasions. Subject-verb and tense are fine.

× For example, during the summer I love to eat the food that includes more water inside for for example, the green vegetables and the watermelon, the fruit in fruit.

✓ For example, during the summer I like to eat foods that contain a lot of water, for example, green vegetables and watermelon.

Ungrammatical phrases 'includes more water inside' and repeated 'for for example' and 'the fruit in fruit' should be corrected. Use 'foods that contain a lot of water' and list examples clearly. Use plural 'foods' to match 'green vegetables'.

× And then in winter season I'm adding little bit of different food.

✓ In winter I eat slightly different foods.

Use simple present to describe habitual actions: 'In winter I eat slightly different foods.' Avoid 'I'm adding' and 'little bit of'—use 'slightly' and plural 'foods'.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ (No change needed)

The question is correct in present perfect. No correction required.

× No, not at all.

✓ (No change needed)

Appropriate short answer; no correction needed.

× I told you already that I used to like a traditional rice pudding, which is called ghee.

✓ I told you already that I used to like a traditional rice pudding, which is called ghee.

Minor factual issue: ghee is clarified butter, not rice pudding; the intended dish may be 'kheer'. Grammatically the sentence is acceptable, but correct the dish name for accuracy: 'which is called kheer.'

× And then till now as well, I'm liking that.

✓ And even now, I still like it.

'I'm liking' (present continuous) is incorrect for stative verbs like 'like'. Use simple present 'I still like it.' Also use 'it' to refer to the dish.

× It's my favorite dish because of the sweetness in in in that, because of the way they are making it.

✓ It's my favorite dish because of its sweetness and the way it is made.

Remove repeated words 'in in in'. Use possessive 'its sweetness' and passive 'the way it is made' to describe preparation. 'They are making it' is awkward; use 'it is made.'

× That's why I like that.

✓ That's why I like it.

As before, use 'it' instead of 'that' to refer to the dish for natural English.