Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Reduce fillers (umm, uh) and correct basic grammar (e.g. 'I love eating food' → 'I've loved food since childhood'; 'I like eating pasta because of its sauces and toppings'). Aim for 3–4 well-structured sentences and include a specific example of a pasta dish to make the answer more vivid.

예시: My favourite food is pasta. I eat it almost every day because I enjoy the variety of sauces and toppings. For example, I often have spaghetti with a tomato and basil sauce and roasted vegetables, which is quick to make and very satisfying.

제안: Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and state a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences. Provide one or two specific examples and explain briefly why you liked them, using a linking word (e.g. 'because' or 'so'). Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: When I was young, I preferred simple but special foods. For example, I loved plain rice with a little soy sauce because it felt comforting and my family often cooked it for me. This simplicity made me enjoy meals without complicated flavours.

제안: Answer directly and give clear, relevant seasonal examples. Replace vague phrases ('depends on my mind') with specific reasons (e.g. 'because I prefer cold foods in summer'). Use correct vocabulary ('have dinner' not 'drink dinner') and provide 2–3 coherent sentences linked with words like 'for example' and 'in contrast'.

예시: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer cold treats such as ice cream with fruit toppings because they are refreshing. In autumn I usually choose warm, hearty meals like soups or stews because the weather is cooler.

제안: Give a direct yes/no response and then explain specifically how and why your tastes changed, with one or two concrete examples. Use clear linking words (e.g. 'because', 'for example', 'so') and correct collocations ('eating patterns' not 'eat pattern'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, my favourite foods have changed as I grew older because my tastes developed. For example, I preferred plain foods as a child but now I enjoy more complex flavours like spicy or sour dishes, so I try new recipes regularly.

× Exactly. Since childhood I was a person who loves eat food and is really umm, It's really hard for me to choose my favorite food, but umm, my daily food is the pasta. I like eating pasta because uh, with umm, with uh, a lot of sauces and other add in.

✓ Exactly. Since childhood I have been a person who loves to eat food and it is really hard for me to choose my favorite food, but my everyday meal is pasta. I like eating pasta with a lot of sauces and other additions.

Multiple issues: 'Since childhood I was' should use present perfect 'have been' to show a state that started in the past and continues to now (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'loves eat' is missing the infinitive marker 'to' (Verb + -ing/infinitive issue; ID 8). 'is really umm, It's really hard' is redundant and has incorrect punctuation; use 'it is really hard'. 'my daily food is the pasta' is unnatural — use 'my everyday meal is pasta' (article word choice and word order; IDs 22 and 26). 'with umm, with uh, a lot of sauces and other add in' — 'add in' is incorrect; use the noun 'additions' or 'add-ins' and place 'with' before them. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing past-to-present states, include 'to' before verbs like 'eat' when required, simplify filler words, and choose natural collocations like 'everyday meal' and 'additions.'

× When I were young, I prefer food, umm, I prefer something simple and special at the same time.

✓ When I was young, I preferred food that was simple and special at the same time.

'When I were young' should be 'When I was young' (subject-verb agreement; Grammar Problem Type ID 27). 'I prefer' is present tense but talking about the past; use past tense 'I preferred' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). Also clarify the object by using 'food that was simple...'. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference and ensure singular subject takes 'was.'

× Because how I said earlier, it's hard to pick a single favorite.

✓ Because, as I said earlier, it was hard to pick a single favorite.

The phrase should be 'as I said earlier' (correct conjunction/phrase; Grammar Problem Type ID 16). If referring to childhood preferences, use past tense 'it was hard' to keep tense consistent (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). Suggestion: use 'as I said earlier' and ensure tense matches the time frame mentioned.

× And yes, umm, I like to say that I like umm, something simple and special for me.

✓ And yes, I would say that I liked something simple and special.

The speaker is recounting past preference, so 'I liked' is appropriate (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'I like to say that I like something simple and special for me' is repetitive and awkward; use 'I would say that I liked...' Also 'for me' is unnecessary. Suggestion: remove redundancy and match tense to context.

× Umm, I'm not sure about it, umm, but I think, uh, it's, uh, it depends on my mind because for instance, uh, in the summer, I'd like to eat umm, ice cream with different toppings, the toppings.

✓ I'm not sure about it, but I think it depends on my mood because, for instance, in summer I like to eat ice cream with different toppings.

'It depends on my mind' is incorrect collocation; use 'depends on my mood' (Incorrect use of prepositions/phrases, ID 11). 'I'd like to eat' is acceptable but present habitual preference should be 'I like to eat' (Present tense issue, ID 6). Remove redundant words 'the toppings.' Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'depends on my mood' and keep tense consistent for habitual actions.

× But uh, in the autumn, at autumn, I like to drink dinner.

✓ But in autumn I like to have a warm dinner.

'At autumn' is incorrect preposition; use 'in autumn' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). 'I like to drink dinner' is incorrect verb collocation — you 'have' or 'eat' dinner, not 'drink' it (Sentence structure / verb choice, ID 26). Suggestion: use 'have' or 'eat' with 'dinner' and remove redundant 'the' or 'at.' Add descriptive word like 'warm' if intended.

× Absolutely yes, because in my opinion, umm, uh, we are changing uh, all our life.

✓ Absolutely yes, because in my opinion, we change throughout our lives.

'We are changing all our life' is awkward; use simple present 'we change' for general truth (Present tense issue, ID 6) and 'throughout our lives' is the natural phrase (plural and possessive, IDs 1 and 11). Suggestion: use simple present for general statements and correct plural possessive phrasing.

× So it's really, it's normal, It's normal thing that we are growing up and our eat pattern are changing and uh, it's, it's OK.

✓ So it is really normal. It is a normal thing that as we grow up our eating patterns change, and that's okay.

Multiple problems: redundant repetition 'it's really, it's normal' — combine into 'it is really normal' (sentence structure, ID 26). 'It's normal thing' needs the article 'a normal thing' (Article errors, ID 22). 'we are growing up' can be 'as we grow up' for clarity and tense (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'our eat pattern are changing' has noun form and agreement errors — use 'eating patterns change' to correct noun form and subject-verb agreement (Singular/plural and agreement, IDs 1 and 27). Suggestion: use correct articles, pluralize 'patterns', use 'eating' as the noun form, and ensure verb agrees with plural subject.