Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or brief detail to enrich the answer. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: My favourite food is Bangladeshi cuisine, especially biryani, pulao and chicken korma. I particularly enjoy biryani because of its fragrant spices and tender meat, which remind me of family gatherings.

제안: Reduce hesitations and correct vocabulary; give one specific example and a brief reason. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid filler words. Also keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

예시: When I was young I loved street food, especially chatpoti and muri makha, because they were cheap and full of flavour. Although I knew they were unhealthy, I enjoyed them for their spicy and tangy taste.

제안: Be concise and remove hesitations; state the main idea first, then give one specific seasonal example using a linking word (for example, in winter). Limit to 2–3 sentences and use specific vegetable or dish names.

예시: Not really — our meals are similar year-round. However, in winter we get more seasonal vegetables like spinach and gourds, so my family cooks dishes such as mixed-vegetable curry, which I now also prepare.

제안: Make the contrast clearer and avoid hesitations; give a brief reason for the change and one specific detail about current habits. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like but or because.

예시: Yes. As a child I preferred noodles, but now I prefer biryani because I enjoy its rich spices. I also like to cook biryani on my days off and share it with my family.

× I love Bangladeshi cuisine, so I love to eat biryani, pulao and chicken korma.

✓ I love Bangladeshi cuisine, so I enjoy eating biryani, pulao, and chicken korma.

Using 'love to eat' is not wrong but 'enjoy eating' is more natural; corrected to use the gerund 'eating' after a verb expressing preference. Also added a comma before the final item in the list for clarity.

× When I was young, I had a great interest in street food.

✓ When I was young, I had a great interest in street food.

Sentence is acceptable; no preposition error. No change needed.

× Uh, I know that that's not healthy for our health, but still I had a great festation for foods like fuchsia, Chatpoti, Murimakha.

✓ I know that it's not healthy, but I still had a great fascination with foods like fuchka, chotpoti, and muri-makhana.

Replaced awkward phrase 'not healthy for our health' with 'not healthy'; corrected 'festation' to 'fascination' (spelling/word choice) and used the correct preposition 'fascination with'. Fixed local food names to more common spellings and added commas. 'With' is the correct preposition after 'fascination'.

× We all know that umm, Bangladesh is very, uh, rich at this street food.

✓ We all know that Bangladesh is very rich in street food.

Use 'rich in' rather than 'rich at' to indicate abundance of something. Removed filler words for clarity.

× There are so many.

✓ There are so many varieties.

The original sentence is vague and lacks an object. Adding 'varieties' clarifies what 'so many' refers to (varieties of street food).

× Not really, actually. My family follows the same food routine, uh, all over the year, but uh, in Bangladesh, we get some more vegetables in winter season.

✓ Not really. My family follows the same food routine throughout the year, but in Bangladesh we get more vegetables in the winter.

Replaced 'all over the year' with 'throughout the year' for natural phrasing; removed filler words. Used 'in the winter' instead of 'in winter season' to be idiomatic.

× So that time, uh, my family makes some, uh, uh, tasty foods using those vegetables and now I also cook them in winter.

✓ At that time my family makes tasty dishes with those vegetables, and now I also cook them in winter.

Rephrased for fluency: 'So that time' -> 'At that time'; 'tasty foods using' -> 'tasty dishes with'; removed extra fillers. Sentence structure preserved and verb forms appropriate.

× Yes, when I was a child my favorite food was noodles but now my favorite food is biryani uh for its spicy taste.

✓ Yes. When I was a child my favorite food was noodles, but now my favorite food is biryani because of its spicy taste.

Added conjunction 'because of' to clearly link reason; added commas and periods for clarity. Tenses are correct (past for childhood, present for now).

× I love to cook in my uh day offs at home and I enjoy with my family.

✓ I love to cook on my days off at home, and I enjoy it with my family.

Use 'on my days off' (correct preposition and plural) and 'enjoy it with my family' to indicate enjoying cooking (or meals) together. Added comma for clarity.