Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "it makes me feel more comfortable" and "a sense of harmony").

예시: My favourite food is soup. I especially enjoy it on cold or rainy days because it warms me up and is easy to digest. For example, a hot bowl of chicken soup makes me feel cozy and relaxed.

제안: Remove fillers and correct verb forms. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details and link them. Use correct possessives and plural/singular agreement.

예시: When I was young, I liked homemade meals. Eating together helped our family bond, and I learned basic cooking skills from my parents, such as making soup and simple desserts.

제안: Answer directly and use time expressions correctly. Avoid vague phrases like "in fast few decades." State seasonal differences if asked, or explain change in habits with reasons and linking words.

예시: Yes, I do. A few years ago I ate mostly homemade meals, but now I often eat fast food because I have less free time. As a result, I tend to choose quick meals on weekdays and cook more at weekends.

제안: Give a clear statement about change and provide specific examples and reasons. Fix tense and phrasing ("changed since I was a child", "ready-to-eat food"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" and "however."

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to prefer homemade dishes, but because I now have less free time I often buy ready-to-eat meals; however, in summer I try to eat fresh vegetables and salads.

× Actually my favorite food is soup.

✓ Actually, my favorite food is soup.

Missing comma after introductory adverb 'Actually'. This is punctuation rather than tense, but keeps present tense 'is' appropriate. Suggest adding comma to improve clarity: 'Actually, my favorite food is soup.'

× It depends on changing weather, especially when raining or windy or cold.

✓ It depends on the changing weather, especially when it is raining, windy, or cold.

Use definite article 'the' with 'changing weather' (Article errors, ID 22) and complete clause for 'when raining' requiring subject and verb. Also add commas in a list. Correct tense remains present continuous 'is raining'. Suggest: 'the changing weather' and 'when it is raining'. (IDs 6 and 22)

× I prefer the soup because it makes more comfortable.

✓ I prefer soup because it makes me more comfortable.

Pronoun 'me' is required as the object of 'makes'. Also omit definite article 'the' before a general category 'soup'. 'Makes me more comfortable' correctly expresses effect. (IDs 12 and 22)

× Also sense of harmony.

✓ Also, it gives me a sense of harmony.

Fragment lacking verb and subject; convert to full sentence by adding 'it gives me'. Maintain present tense. Suggest: 'Also, it gives me a sense of harmony.' (ID 23/26)

× When I was young, uh, I used to like uh, homemade meals, uh, because eating together help me finally bonding.

✓ When I was young, I used to like homemade meals because eating together helped me bond.

Sequence of past events requires past tense 'helped' not present 'help', and 'bond' (base verb) follows 'helped' rather than 'bonding'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary 'finally'. Suggest: 'helped me bond.' (ID 5)

× Also, I enjoyed learning a lot of uh, cooking skill from their parents.

✓ Also, I enjoyed learning a lot of cooking skills from my parents.

Pronoun 'their' is incorrect because subject is 'I'; use 'my'. 'Cooking skill' should be plural 'cooking skills'. Remove filler 'uh'. (IDs 12 and 14)

× OK, in fast uh, few decades, I used to eat more homemade meals.

✓ OK, in the past few decades, I used to eat more homemade meals.

Phrase should be 'in the past few decades' (article and word choice). 'Fast' is wrong; use 'past'. Keep past reference with 'used to'. (IDs 22 and 26)

× Unfortunately, my eating habits has been completely changed nowadays because I don't have uh, enough free time and also trying more fast food, it's a quick uh.

✓ Unfortunately, my eating habits have completely changed nowadays because I don't have enough free time and I also try more fast food because it's quick.

Subject 'habits' is plural so use 'have' not 'has' (ID 27). Use active 'have changed' rather than passive 'has been changed'. Insert subject 'I' before 'also try'. Remove fillers. 'It's quick' better than fragmented phrase. Maintain present perfect 'have changed' for recent change. (IDs 5 and 27)

× Yeah, my, uh, favorite food changes since I was child because, uh, I have no free time, uh, so I often buy ready to eat food and after eat, uh, in summer time I actually, I'm trying to try fresh food, so some vegetables.

✓ Yeah, my favorite food has changed since I was a child because I have no free time, so I often buy ready-to-eat food; in summer, I try to eat fresh food, like vegetables.

Use present perfect 'has changed' for change from past to present (ID 7 could apply but primary is present tense/perfect; treat as Present tense issue ID 6). Include article 'a child'. Use 'ready-to-eat' with hyphens and prefer 'try to eat' or 'eat'. Simplify 'trying to try' to 'try to eat'. Use commas properly. Suggestions: use 'has changed', 'a child', 'ready-to-eat', and 'in summer, I try to eat fresh food, like vegetables.' (IDs 6,22)