Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more precise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific details (why you like it, when you eat it), and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words for coherence (for example, because, so). Also correct the regional inaccuracy: Biryani is more commonly associated with South Asian cuisine (Indian/Pakistani), not only South Indian. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is biryani because I love its rich aromas and complex spices. For example, my family cooks a chicken biryani on special occasions, and I especially enjoy the saffron fragrance and tender meat. Because of these flavors, it always feels festive and comforting.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide one or two specific examples and a reason. Use correct past tense forms and natural collocations (e.g., “when I was a child,” “I liked sweet foods such as…”). Keep it concise and complete the thought.

예시: When I was a child, I liked sweet foods. For instance, I often ate sweet flatbreads and raw sugar as snacks because I had a strong sweet tooth. Those treats remind me of family gatherings and festivals.

제안: Clarify and organize your answer: start with a direct yes/no sentence, then give specific seasonal examples with linking words (for example, in winter…; in summer…). Avoid unclear or incorrect words (e.g., “stick season”) and use correct pluralization and prepositions. Provide one or two concrete examples and a short reason.

예시: Yes. In my country we eat different foods each season. For example, in winter people prefer hot, hearty meals like stews and roasted vegetables, while in summer we eat many fresh fruits and cold salads to stay cool. Therefore seasonal availability strongly influences our meals.

제안: Make the time reference and comparison clear: state directly whether your favourite food has changed, then explain how and why with specific details. Use correct tenses and avoid repetition. Give an example contrasting childhood preferences with current tastes and a reason for the change.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. When I was young I preferred sweet and simple foods, but over time I developed a liking for spicy dishes. For example, I used to enjoy sugary snacks, whereas now I often choose spicy biryani or chili-based curries because I enjoy bold flavours and spices.

× When I was the childhood I would like to sweet types of food like raw sugar and sweet pita and especially the sugar.

✓ When I was a child I liked sweet types of food like raw sugar and sweet pita, especially sugar.

The phrase 'the childhood' uses an incorrect article; use 'a child' for a person at that age (Grammar problem type ID 22). Also 'would like to' is incorrect for past habitual preference; use past tense 'liked' (Past tense issue, ID 5). Combined corrections: replace 'the childhood' with 'a child' and 'would like to' with 'liked' to match past time reference.

× When I was childhood I always.

✓ When I was a child, I always liked sweet things.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object (Sentence without a verb/structure issue, IDs 23 and 26). Also 'When I was childhood' is ungrammatical; use 'When I was a child'. Provide a complete clause 'I always liked sweet things' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, of course in our country there are stick season and every season we got different type of foods like winter seasons, pizza, summer seasons, fruit, different kind of fruit.

✓ Yes, of course in our country there are distinct seasons and in each season we get different types of food, for example in winter we eat pizza and in summer we eat different kinds of fruit.

'stick season' is incorrect word choice; likely 'distinct seasons' is intended (preposition/word choice, ID 11). 'Every season we got' mixes tense and uses informal 'got'; use 'in each season we get' or 'we get' for habitual present (Present tense issue, ID 6). Also 'different type of foods' should be plural 'different types of food' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Clarify examples with correct prepositions 'in winter' and 'in summer'.

× That's why we eat different seasonal dishes.

✓ That's why we eat different seasonal dishes.

This sentence is already correct. It uses plural 'dishes' appropriately to match 'different', so no change is needed (Grammar problem type ID 1 noted for confirmation).

× I guess my my taste about always changing after many years later.

✓ I guess my taste has always been changing over the years.

The original mixes incorrect word order and time expressions: 'after many years later' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use present perfect progressive 'has been changing' to show change from past to present (Present tense issue, ID 6). Remove duplicate 'my' and place 'always' correctly.

× When I was young I would like to see the type of food, but now I prefer spicy food.

✓ When I was young I liked that type of food, but now I prefer spicy food.

'Would like to' is incorrect for describing a habitual past preference; use the simple past 'liked' (Past tense issue, ID 5). Also 'see the type of food' is unclear; 'that type of food' clarifies meaning.