Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Отвечайте полно и связно: начните с одного главного ответа (например, назовите одно блюдо), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных причин или деталей, используя связки (because, and, for example). Избегайте междометий («uh») и неструктурированных перечислений; держите ответ в 2–3 предложениях и конкретизируйте, почему вам нравятся эти блюда.

예시: My favourite food is pasta because I enjoy its comforting flavours and variety of sauces. For example, I often choose tomato-based sauces with fresh basil, and sometimes I enjoy a creamy carbonara when I want something richer.

제안: Уточняйте и исправляйте ошибки: начните с чёткого топик‑предложения, называющего конкретное блюдо или тип кухни, и добавьте подробность о том, почему вам это нравилось (memories, taste, family). Проверьте лексику (слово «race» неверно) и используйте связки (when I was young, because, for example).

예시: When I was young, I loved rice dishes because my family cooked them every day. For example, my mother made fried rice with vegetables and chicken, which I always enjoyed after school.

제안: Давайте ясный развернутый ответ: начните с короткого прямого ответа (Yes/No), затем объясните причину и приведите конкретные примеры сезонных блюд или изменений в рационе, используя связки (but, however, for example). Избегайте противоречивых фраз; здесь «No, I eat different foods» не согласуется — исправьте логику.

예시: Not really — I tend to eat similar foods all year, but I do include more soups and stews in winter for warmth, and more salads and fresh fruit in summer for refreshment.

제안: Ответ должен быть логичным и понятным: начните с прямого утверждения (Yes/No), затем объясните, как и почему изменились предпочтения, с конкретными деталями. Избегайте бессмысленных слов («trees») и обеспечьте связность предложений с помощью because, so, now, when. Поддерживайте 2–3 предложения макс.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred very sweet snacks, but now I prefer healthier dishes like grilled fish and vegetables because I care more about nutrition and feel better after eating them.

× My favorite food is uh, pasta, pizza, sushi, and uh. And the. Cakes.

✓ My favorite foods are pasta, pizza, sushi, and cake.

The student lists multiple items, so use plural 'foods' or keep 'food' with an uncountable sense; consistency is needed. Also articles and pluralization: 'cakes' is odd when listing food types; use singular 'cake' or 'cakes' only if referring to cake as a category. Additionally remove filler words and correct punctuation. Suggestion: say 'My favorite foods are...' or 'My favourite food is pasta.'

× When I was young, I loved race.

✓ When I was young, I loved racing.

The noun 'race' is incorrect here for expressing a childhood hobby or activity; use the gerund 'racing' or a clearer phrase such as 'I loved to race' or 'I loved running races.' The past tense 'loved' is correct but needs appropriate verb form after it. Suggestion: use gerund after 'loved' or 'loved to + verb'.

× No, I eat different foods.

✓ No, I don't eat different foods.

The examiner asked 'Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?' The student intended a negative answer. In present simple negative, use auxiliary 'do not' + base verb: 'I don't eat.' The original 'I eat different foods' is affirmative and does not match intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'No, I don't' or 'No, I eat the same foods.'

× Yes, I love trees. I don't like it now.

✓ Yes, I used to love them, but I don't like them now.

The student likely means their favourite foods changed: they 'used to' like something in the past. 'I love trees' is unrelated and uses wrong noun. Also pronoun agreement: 'it' doesn't match plural 'trees' (or 'them'). Use 'used to' for past habits and 'them' for plural. Suggestion: say 'I used to like it, but I don't like it now' (for singular) or 'I used to like them, but I don't like them now' (for plural).