Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and specific: give one clear favourite food and a concise reason. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (use singular/plural correctly and proper articles). Use a linking phrase to add a supporting detail. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is steamed rice because I find it comforting and inexpensive. In addition, I like it with many dishes such as stir-fries and curries, which makes it very versatile.

제안: Answer the question directly without irrelevant phrases. State the type of food you liked, give a brief specific example, and a reason or memory. Avoid filler words and unclear expressions. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

예시: When I was young I loved sweet snacks, especially candy and cotton candy. I remember getting them at fairs, which made those days feel special.

제안: Structure the answer: start with a clear yes/no or general statement, then give specific examples linked to times of year using linking words (for example, "for" or "during"). Correct names and reduce hesitations. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, my food choices change during holidays. For example, during Lunar New Year we usually have dim sum and other family dishes, while at Christmas we often eat pudding and roast meals.

제안: Give a direct answer and clarify your meaning: if you have many favourites explain that briefly and give an example or contrast. Use a linking word to expand slightly. Keep to 1–2 sentences.

예시: No, my favourite foods haven't really changed because I have always enjoyed a variety of dishes. For instance, I still like rice and sweet snacks from my childhood.

× My favorite food is anything because they are so delicious, yummy and tasty.

✓ My favorite foods are anything because they are so delicious, yummy, and tasty.

The sentence uses singular 'food' with plural pronoun 'they', causing pronoun-antecedent mismatch. Change 'food' to plural 'foods' to agree with 'they', and add commas for clarity. Alternatively, replace 'they' with 'it' if keeping 'food' singular. Ensure subject and pronoun agree in number.

× And then the fresh rice is my the best favorite food because it's the cheap and not expensive.

✓ Fresh rice is my favorite food because it is cheap and inexpensive.

The original has redundant and incorrect articles ('the fresh rice', 'my the best favorite') and awkward adjectives. Remove unnecessary articles: use 'Fresh rice' or 'The fresh rice' only if specific. 'My favorite food' is sufficient; 'best' and 'favorite' together are redundant. Use 'cheap' or 'inexpensive' (not both 'the cheap and not expensive'). Also use 'it' (singular) to refer to 'rice'.

× Where are y'all? I like to eat some sweet candies and so some cotton candies and so umm so snack whatever is it hit my with childhood.

✓ When I was young, I liked to eat sweet candies, cotton candy, and other snacks that I enjoyed during my childhood.

The original begins with an irrelevant question 'Where are y'all?' and has disordered fragments and incorrect word order ('whatever is it hit my with childhood'). Reframe to past tense and a clear sequence: 'When I was young' sets context, use past tense 'liked', list items correctly ('sweet candies' and 'cotton candy'—'cotton candy' is uncountable), and use 'snacks that I enjoyed during my childhood' to express the intended meaning.

× I like to eat some sweet candies and so some cotton candies and so umm so snack whatever is it hit my with childhood.

✓ I liked to eat sweet candies, cotton candy, and other snacks during my childhood.

The original uses 'some' redundantly and mixes countable and uncountable nouns incorrectly ('cotton candies' should be 'cotton candy'). Use 'other snacks' instead of 'whatever' and place quantifiers appropriately. Match tense to past ('liked').

× So in different year and different times we have New year at Christmas holiday.

✓ At different times of the year we celebrate New Year and Christmas holidays.

Word order and prepositions are incorrect ('in different year and different times' is awkward). Use 'At different times of the year' and the correct names 'New Year' and 'Christmas holidays'. Ensure plural 'holidays' if referring to both events.

× So whatever. So inelia will is some some dim sum with it.

✓ During Chinese New Year we usually eat dim sum.

The original contains unclear pronouns and nonstandard words ('inelia will is'). Clarify meaning: if referring to a specific festival (e.g., Chinese New Year), state it and use 'we usually eat dim sum.' Use simple present for habitual actions.

× So and some Christmas we will eat some pudding.

✓ At Christmas we eat pudding.

Use 'At Christmas' to indicate the holiday and simple present 'eat' for habitual actions. Remove redundant 'some' unless emphasizing amount. 'We will eat' implies future; since this is a habitual action, simple present is more appropriate.

× No, because my favorite food is so many so I don't care about it.

✓ No, my favorite foods are many, so I do not care which one is the best.

The original mixes singular and plural ('favorite food is so many') and uses vague 'it'. Change to 'favorite foods are many' to match plural and clarify meaning with 'which one is the best.' Use 'do not' for formality and clarity.