Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (umm, uh), correct small errors, and add one specific detail about why you like it. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: My favourite food is dosa served with two chutneys and sambar. I like it because the crispy texture and the tangy chutneys create a great contrast, and the sambar adds warmth and protein, making it a satisfying breakfast.

제안: Avoid repeating phrases and use correct tense. Start with a clear statement about childhood preference, give a specific example and a brief reason. Remove hesitation and redundant clauses.

예시: When I was young, I loved eating ice cream. I remember choosing it on family outings because I enjoyed its sweet taste and the different flavours available.

제안: Speak more clearly and organize the answer: give a direct yes/no response, explain why with specific examples, use linking words (for example, in summer/ in winter), and avoid filler words. Use correct names for foods and simple grammar.

예시: Yes, I do. I change what I eat according to seasonal vegetables: for example, in summer I enjoy light salads and dishes with ridge gourd and okra, while in winter I prefer hearty vegetables like carrots and winter squash because they feel warming.

제안: Give a clear statement about change, use correct grammar (have/has, singular/plural), avoid fillers, and provide a specific example comparing past and present choices. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I preferred junk food like chips and sweets, but now I choose healthier meals such as grilled fish and steamed vegetables because they help me stay fit.

× My favorite food is dosa that's come with umm, 2 sauces along with sambar.

✓ My favorite food is dosa that comes with two sauces and sambar.

Article and verb agreement: 'dosa that's come' is ungrammatical. Use 'that comes' because dosa (singular) requires third person singular verb 'comes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 2 and 27). Also use 'two' instead of numeral '2' in formal writing and replace 'along with' with 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: write 'My favorite food is dosa that comes with two sauces and sambar.'

× Uh, it is a great source of protein and carbs.

✓ It is a great source of protein and carbohydrates.

Word choice and register: 'carbs' is informal; use 'carbohydrates' in formal responses. No article error per se but adjust for clarity. Suggestion: use full word 'carbohydrates'.

× Uh, it's good for the breakfast.

✓ It's good for breakfast.

Article error (Grammar Problem Type ID 22/17): English usually omits the definite article before 'breakfast' when speaking about the meal in general. Suggestion: say 'good for breakfast.'

× Honestly, I didn't remember what kind of food I liked when I was young, but I think I ate ice cream.

✓ Honestly, I don't remember what kind of food I liked when I was young, but I think I ate ice cream.

Tense problem (Grammar Problem Type ID 6 and 5): 'didn't remember' suggests a past-time denial, but the speaker refers to a present lack of memory about past preferences, so 'I don't remember' is correct. Keep 'liked' and 'ate' in past tense when referring to childhood. Suggestion: use 'I don't remember' to express current lack of memory.

× I always fascinated towards ice cream.

✓ I was always fascinated by ice cream.

Preposition and verb form error (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 8/9): The correct structure is 'be fascinated by' and when referring to past preference use past tense 'was'. Suggestion: use 'I was always fascinated by ice cream.'

× Whenever I go for out, whenever I went to outing with my family members, I prefer to eat ice cream.

✓ Whenever I go out or go on outings with my family, I prefer to eat ice cream.

Preposition and verb tense consistency (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 6): 'go for out' is incorrect; use 'go out'. 'Went to outing' is awkward; use 'go on outings'. Also maintain present simple 'I prefer' for habitual actions. Suggestion: 'Whenever I go out or go on outings with my family, I prefer to eat ice cream.'

× Yes, umm, I I prefer to eat different foods in different time of the years that specially uh, based on the vegetables that umm, that comes on, on the different weathers.

✓ Yes, I prefer to eat different foods at different times of the year, especially based on the vegetables that come with different seasons.

Multiple errors: time expression and prepositions (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 6) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27). Use 'at different times of the year' not 'in different time of the years'. 'Especially' instead of 'specially'. 'Vegetables that come with different seasons' uses plural verb 'come' to match plural 'vegetables' and correct noun 'seasons' instead of 'weathers'. Suggestion: simplify and use standard collocations: 'at different times of the year' and 'come with different seasons.'

× Like in the summer I prefer to eat with the grout and Lily finger on the other side during winter I prefer to eat carrot umm.

✓ For example, in summer I prefer to eat gourd and lady's finger, while in winter I prefer to eat carrots.

Word choice and sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 26 and 13): 'grout' and 'Lily finger' are incorrect; likely intended 'gourd' and 'lady's finger' (okra). Use parallel structure and plural 'carrots' for general preference. Also add a comma or conjunction to connect clauses. Suggestion: 'in summer I prefer gourd and lady's finger; in winter I prefer carrots.'

× I'm very choosy, uh, regarding to choose food.

✓ I'm very choosy when it comes to choosing food.

Verb and preposition usage (Grammar Problem Type ID 11 and 12): 'regarding to choose' is ungrammatical. Use the fixed expression 'when it comes to choosing' or 'about choosing.' Suggestion: 'I'm very choosy when it comes to choosing food.'

× Yes, definitely my choices is changed from a children childhood.

✓ Yes, definitely my choices have changed since childhood.

Subject-verb agreement and article errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 and 22): 'choices' is plural so use 'have changed'. 'from a children childhood' is ungrammatical; use 'since childhood'. Suggestion: 'my choices have changed since childhood.'

× Now I prefer to eat healthy meals, uh, that help me to stay Hale and hearty.

✓ Now I prefer to eat healthy meals that help me stay hale and hearty.

Capitalization and infinitive usage (Grammar Problem Type ID 6): 'Hale' should be lowercase 'hale'; omit 'to' after 'help' in this construction: 'help me stay'. Suggestion: 'help me stay hale and hearty.'

× Apart from this, uh, when I was a child, I always prefer to eat junk food.

✓ Apart from that, when I was a child, I always preferred to eat junk food.

Tense inconsistency (Grammar Problem Type ID 5): 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'preferred' not present 'prefer'. Also use 'apart from that' for cohesion. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits: 'I always preferred.'

× So it's really changed.

✓ So it has really changed.

Verb tense and auxiliary omission (Grammar Problem Type ID 7 and 26): To describe a change from past to now, use present perfect 'has changed' rather than bare 'changed' or contraction 'it's changed' which can be ambiguous; 'it's really changed' is informal but can be 'it has really changed.' Suggestion: 'So it has really changed.'