Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然但有语法与用词小错误、部分句子冗长。建议：1) 注意单复数和冠词（例如 all kinds, many brands on the market）；2) 主句要更直接，使用一到两句主题句并用最多两句支持细节；3) 用连接词简洁衔接（for example, therefore）。练习时可把答案限制在3–4句内并纠正小语法错误以显得更地道。

예시: I like all kinds of food, but my favourite at the moment is chocolate. I’ve tried many brands on the market, and I prefer milk chocolate because it’s creamy and not too bitter. Therefore, it’s a perfect treat after a busy day.

제안: 回答存在严重语法和用词错误（如 'When you were young' 应为 'When I was young'；'I would have a Tuesday' 完全不合逻辑）。建议：1) 直接用主题句回答问题；2) 避免模糊或错误的表达，提供具体例子；3) 用连词如 'also' 或 'however' 简洁衔接。练习时把句子读出来，检查是否通顺并有逻辑。

예시: When I was young, I loved sweet foods like candies, cakes and ice cream. I ate them often, but my parents always warned me not to have too many sweets because I might get a stomachache or become overweight.

제안: 内容清晰但有语法和搭配问题（'it fresher' 应为 'they are fresher'; 'force grows' 用词不当）。建议：1) 使用正确的主谓一致和名词复数形式；2) 提供一两个更具体的例子并用连接词如 'for example' 或 'also'；3) 简化最后一句以避免不必要的推断。

예시: Yes, I usually eat seasonal foods because they are fresher and more nutritious. For example, I prefer kiwifruit in autumn and root vegetables in winter. I also avoid out-of-season produce because it is often treated with more chemicals.

제안: 多处时态、语法和拼写错误（如 'When was child', 'cannot' 与时态不一致，'silver' 不合适）。建议：1) 使用正确时态表达过去与现在的对比（e.g. 'When I was a child ... but now I ...'）；2) 用一到两句支持性细节并用连接词如 'however'；3) 注意拼写和固定搭配（e.g. 'pay attention to my health'）。

예시: Yes, my favourite foods have changed a lot. When I was a child I couldn’t resist sweets like candy and cake and I ate them almost every day. However, now I pay more attention to my health and rarely eat sugary foods.

× To be honest, I like all kind of food, however, currently I prefer chocolate.

✓ To be honest, I like all kinds of food; however, currently I prefer chocolate.

原句中“all kind of food”使用了错误的量词搭配。英语中表示“各种各样的……/所有种类的……”应使用复数形式“all kinds of”。此外，句子较长建议用分号或句点连接转折词“however”。改为“all kinds of food; however, currently I prefer chocolate.” 更符合英语表达。

× I have tried many brands of chocolate in the market and I found that the milk chocolate is so delicious because it's very creamy and not too bitter, which makes it a perfect treat after a busy day.

✓ I have tried many brands of chocolate on the market and I found that milk chocolate is so delicious because it's very creamy and not too bitter, which makes it a perfect treat after a busy day.

“in the market”在此处习惯用法应为“on the market”。“the milk chocolate”若指一般的牛奶巧克力，应去掉定冠词“the”，改为“milk chocolate”。另外保持“many brands”与复数一致。

× When you were young, I think every child cannot resist sweet food like candy, cakes, ice cream and so on.

✓ When I was young, I think every child could not resist sweet foods like candy, cakes, ice cream and so on.

原句开头使用了“You”与说话者不一致，应为“I was young”。此外谓语时态和情态要一致，描述过去习惯可用“could not”。“sweet food”用于列举可改为复数“sweet foods”。

× I was no exception.

✓ I was no exception.

该句语法正确，无需修改。保留原句。

× Moreover, my parents always warned me not to eat too many sweets or I would have a Tuesday or become overweight.

✓ Moreover, my parents always warned me not to eat too many sweets or I would become overweight.

原句中“have a Tuesday”是错误表达，应删除。正确表达为“become overweight”。这是词汇使用错误，不在量词列表中，但需修改为正确含义。父母的警告描述用“warned me not to”是正确的。

× Yes, I usually eat seasonal food because it fresher and more nutritious.

✓ Yes, I usually eat seasonal food because it is fresher and more nutritious.

句子缺少系动词“is”。形容词比较级“fresher”和“more nutritious”需与系动词连用，完整形式为“it is fresher”。

× For instance, I prefer Kiwi in autumn and root vegetables in winter.

✓ For instance, I prefer kiwifruit in autumn and root vegetables in winter.

“Kiwi”作水果名应写作“kiwifruit”或小写“kiwi”作为普通名词。此处将“Kiw i”改为“kiwifruit”并小写以符合通用写法。

× And I avoid products growing out of season because farmers may use more harmful chemicals to force grows.

✓ And I avoid products grown out of season because farmers may use more harmful chemicals to force growth.

“growing out of season”应改为过去分词短语“grown out of season”作后置定语。短语“force grows”是不正确的搭配，应为“force growth”或“force them to grow”，根据上下文“force growth”更自然。这里修改为“force growth”。

× Yes, it's changed a lot.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot.

描述从过去到现在的变化，应使用现在完成时“has changed”或“it has changed”。原句“It’s changed”可以缩写为“it has changed”，但书写时建议用完整形式以免与“It is”混淆，这里明确为现在完成时。

× When was child I cannot resist sweet food like candy, cakes and so on.

✓ When I was a child, I could not resist sweet foods like candy, cakes and so on.

原句语序错误且时态不当。正确语序为“When I was a child,”，并用过去习惯“could not resist”。“sweet food”改为复数“sweet foods”。

× I used to eat them every day but now I have grown up I dislike sweet food anymore.

✓ I used to eat them every day, but now that I have grown up I dislike sweet foods.

句子需加逗号分隔两部分；“now I have grown up I dislike”应改为“now that I have grown up, I dislike”。“dislike... anymore”在肯定句中不常用，改为简单现在态“I dislike sweet foods”。

× I pay more attention on my health and my body shape so I silver eat them.

✓ I pay more attention to my health and my body shape, so I seldom eat them.

介词搭配应为“pay attention to”，不是“on”。“silver”是拼写错误，应为“seldom”。句中加逗号更清晰。