Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và chính xác hơn; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm tên món ăn; dùng liên từ hợp lý. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (“My favourite food is…”). (2) Tránh lặp từ như “extremely keen” quá nhiều; dùng từ phù hợp như “I enjoy” hoặc “I love”. (3) Sửa tên các món ăn (Phở, Bún mì → phở hoặc bún mì) và nêu một lý do cụ thể vì sao thích. (4) Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu, không lan man.

예시: My favourite food is Vietnamese phở because of its aromatic broth and fresh herbs. I also enjoy trying new fruits and dishes from other countries, but phở is the dish I choose most often as it is comforting and flavorful.

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp và ngắt câu hợp lý. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (“When I was a child, I liked…”). (2) Tránh sai ngữ pháp như “I extremely keen on” — dùng “I was very fond of” hoặc “I loved”. (3) Nêu chi tiết cụ thể (tên món ăn, hương vị, thành phần) và lý do cảm xúc ngắn gọn. (4) Dùng liên từ như “because” để liên kết lý do.

예시: When I was a child, I loved eating bún mì, which is a popular Vietnamese dish. I liked it because it had a mix of spices, fresh herbs and tender meat, and eating it always made me feel comforted and relaxed.

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần chặt chẽ theo câu hỏi (mùa/giai đoạn trong năm), tránh lặp từ và lỗi từ vựng. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp “Yes, I do” hoặc “Not really”. (2) Nếu có thay đổi theo mùa, nêu ví dụ cụ thể (mùa hè, lễ hội) và thức ăn tương ứng. (3) Sửa lỗi từ như “fighting” → “trying”; “Thailand cuisines” → “Thai cuisine”. (4) Giữ 2–4 câu, dùng từ liên kết như “for example” hay “during” để rõ ràng.

예시: Yes, I do. In summer I prefer light, refreshing foods like mangoes and salads, while in winter I eat more spicy soups and noodle dishes. I also enjoy trying foreign cuisines, for example Thai or Indian food, when I have free time.

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần mạch lạc, dùng thì đúng và tránh từ ngữ lặp; nêu rõ sự thay đổi kèm lý do. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (“Yes, it has changed.”). (2) Dùng thì quá khứ cho quá khứ (“was simple”), hiện tại cho hiện tại (“is more varied”). (3) Thay “Thai foods” nếu ý muốn là “my tastes” hoặc “my food choices” để rõ nghĩa. (4) Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và lý do (ví dụ: thích đồ cay, thích thử món mới).

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I preferred simple dishes like plain rice and boiled vegetables, but now I enjoy more complex and spicy foods such as Thai curries and Indian dishes because I like stronger flavours and variety.

× Actually, I'm extremely keen on experiencing new fruit, but my favorite food is the Vietnamese food such as Phar or Bunmi.

✓ Actually, I'm extremely keen on trying new fruits, but my favorite foods are Vietnamese dishes such as phở or bún mì.

'new fruit' should be plural 'new fruits' or 'new fruit' with uncountable use; 'experiencing' is awkward — use 'trying'. 'the Vietnamese food' is incorrect article use — use 'Vietnamese food' or 'Vietnamese dishes'. 'Phar or Bunmi' are misspellings and should be 'phở' and 'bún mì'. Ensure plural agreement for 'foods' if listing multiple dishes. Suggestion: Use 'try' for tasting experiences and use correct articles and plural forms.

× Well, when I was a child I extremely keen on but my which is one of the most famous traditional food in Vietnamese.

✓ Well, when I was a child I was extremely keen on it, which is one of the most famous traditional Vietnamese foods.

Missing verb 'was' required for past tense: 'I was extremely keen on'. The sentence fragment 'but my' is incorrect; replace with 'it' referring to the food. Word order and article use: 'traditional food in Vietnamese' should be 'traditional Vietnamese foods'. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently for childhood statements and ensure pronouns clearly refer to the noun.

× I love it because it's has a variety of spice and it tastes very delicious.

✓ I love it because it has a variety of spices and it tastes very delicious.

Remove extra contraction 'it's has' — correct is 'it has'. 'spice' should be plural 'spices' when referring to many kinds. Adverb 'very' is acceptable but you might prefer 'really delicious' for naturalness. Suggestion: Do not combine 'it is' with 'has'; use 'it has'. Use plural nouns when indicating multiple items.

× That's make me feel very relaxed.

✓ That makes me feel very relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement: 'That' is singular, so the verb must be 'makes' not 'make'. Suggestion: Ensure the verb agrees with the singular subject.

× Oh absolutely yes I I says.

✓ Oh, absolutely yes, I do.

'I I says' is ungrammatical. Use the auxiliary 'do' to respond affirmatively: 'I do.' 'says' is incorrect here. Suggestion: Use simple short responses like 'I do' or 'Yes, absolutely.'

× I extremely keen on experiencing new food so when I have free times I also spend time in fighting new cuisine such as such as Thailand cuisines or Indian cuisines as I want to taste some new spice.

✓ I'm extremely keen on trying new foods, so when I have free time I also spend time finding new cuisines, such as Thai or Indian, because I want to taste new spices.

Missing verb 'am' for present continuous: 'I'm extremely keen'. 'new food' should be plural 'new foods' or 'new food' as uncountable; 'free times' incorrect — use 'free time'. 'spend time in fighting' is wrong; should be 'spend time finding'. 'Thailand cuisines' should be 'Thai cuisine' or 'Thai cuisines'. 'some new spice' should be 'new spices'. Suggestion: Use 'try' or 'find/finding' for new foods, correct adjective forms (Thai), and use 'free time' singular.

× Well absolutely yes. When I was a child, my type of food is extremely simple.

✓ Well, absolutely yes. When I was a child, my type of food was extremely simple.

Tense mismatch: 'When I was a child' requires past tense 'was' not present 'is'. Suggestion: Keep the past tense throughout sentences describing childhood.

× But when I grow up, my Thai foods, umm, are more complicated as I want something new.

✓ But when I grew up, my tastes in Thai food became more varied because I wanted something new.

Tense mismatch: 'when I grow up' should be past 'when I grew up' to match 'became'. 'my Thai foods are more complicated' is awkward: use 'my tastes in Thai food became more varied'. Also change 'want' to past 'wanted'. Suggestion: Use 'tastes' or 'preferences' for what you like, and keep past tense for past changes.

× Uh, we get something more spicy and flavors.

✓ Uh, we had food that was spicier and more flavorful.

Unclear subject 'we get' and tense/word form errors. 'more spicy' is acceptable but 'spicier' is better; 'flavors' is a noun while needed adjective 'more flavorful'. Use past tense 'had' to describe past experience. Suggestion: Use comparative adjectives ('spicier', 'more flavorful') and correct tense and subjects when describing past experiences.