Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid unclear words and repetitions, and give one or two specific reasons using correct vocabulary. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words (because, and, also). Pronunciation and word choice need attention (e.g., ‘Nihari’, ‘juicy’, ‘made by my mom’).

예시: My favourite food is my mother’s Nihari. I especially enjoy it because my mother slow-cooks the meat until it is very tender and juicy, and she seasons it with fragrant spices. Because of this rich flavour, I prefer her homemade Nihari to restaurant versions.

제안: Make a direct topic sentence, remove fillers (uh, so), correct tense and word forms, and give one specific detail about why you liked it (taste, memories). Use linking words like “because” or “and”.

예시: When I was young, I really liked the biryani they served at my boarding school. The school chef cooked it with aromatic spices and tender meat, and I remember eating it with my friends after classes because it tasted homemade and comforting.

제안: Answer directly with a clear statement (Yes or No), avoid repetition, and give a specific reason or example. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and linking words (but, however, because).

예시: No, I usually eat the same kinds of food throughout the year. For example, my family enjoys dishes like Nihari, biryani and dals in all seasons because we prefer home-cooked meals regardless of the weather.

제안: State your answer clearly, correct tense and reduce hesitation. Give one or two specific reasons for the change and use linking words (because, but, now). Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. When I was younger I preferred fast food from outside, but now I prefer my mother’s home-cooked meals because they are healthier and remind me of family gatherings.