Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, add one or two specific supporting details using linking words, and avoid repetition and grammar mistakes. Mention why you like pizza (taste, convenience, occasions) and give a brief example. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: My favourite food is pizza because I love its combination of cheese, tomato sauce and crispy crust. Also, it’s very convenient to order for parties or gatherings, so I often share one with friends on weekends. For instance, last month we ordered a large pizza for a movie night and everyone enjoyed it.

제안: Use past tense consistently and organize the answer: begin with a past topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons or memories using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'when I was young' and 'I preferred') and avoid vague phrases like 'prohibited for me' without explanation.

예시: When I was young, I preferred hamburgers because they tasted exciting and I loved ketchup and mayonnaise. Also, they were considered a treat at home since we rarely had fast food; I remember asking my parents for a burger on special occasions.

제안: Answer clearly with a topic sentence and use linking words for contrast. Be specific about examples of seasonal dishes and correct repetition and grammar errors. Keep sentences concise and include one concrete example to illustrate the point.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer light meals such as salads and grilled fish, while in winter I enjoy hearty stews with meat and root vegetables because they keep me warm.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the change, then explain reasons and give a specific example. Use correct tense and avoid repeating words. Mention what you eat now and why (health, taste, lifestyle).

예시: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. I used to prefer sugary snacks and fast food, but now I choose healthier options like whole grains, salads and grilled fish because I’m more health-conscious and want to feel energetic.

× I think my favorite food is a pizza because it's delicious and it's nearly fast food, but I think it's healthy too.

✓ I think my favorite food is pizza because it's delicious and it's nearly fast food, but I think it's healthy too.

Use no article before general uncountable or category nouns like 'pizza' when speaking about it in general. 'A pizza' implies a single whole pizza; here the speaker means pizza as a type of food.

× I and it's easy to order in a party and friends gathering, that's all.

✓ It's easy to order at a party or a friends' gathering, that's all.

The original has incorrect pronoun order ('I and it's') and wrong prepositions/articles. Use 'It's' as the subject. Use preposition 'at' for events and article 'a' before 'party'. Use possessive 'friends' gathering' and 'or' for alternatives. Also remove extraneous 'I'.

× When I was a young, I prefer hamburger because it's fast food and it's prohibited for me and it's not homemade and I wanna eat it and I like ketchup and mayonnaise too.

✓ When I was young, I preferred hamburgers because they were fast food and were prohibited for me; they weren't homemade, but I wanted to eat them, and I liked ketchup and mayonnaise too.

Multiple issues: 'a young' incorrect article—use 'young' without article in this context. Tense should be past ('preferred','were','wanted','liked') because referring to past habits. Use plural 'hamburgers' when speaking generally. 'Prohibited for me' is awkward but acceptable; keep past tense. Replace informal 'wanna' with 'wanted'.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

This sentence is correct and fits the present simple used for habitual actions. No correction needed.

× Yeah, my food choice depends on the weather conditions.

✓ Yeah, my food choices depend on the weather conditions.

Subject-verb agreement: 'food choice' singular with 'depends' is possible but the speaker refers to various choices, so plural 'choices' with 'depend' is more natural. This fixes agreement.

× I choose light meal like salad in the summers, but in the winter I like vegetables and meat meals which which more heavy than the salads because it keeps me warm.

✓ I choose light meals like salad in the summer, but in winter I like vegetable and meat dishes, which are heavier than salads because they keep me warm.

Use plural 'meals' and 'dishes' for general statements. Use 'in the summer' or 'in summer' consistently; often 'in summer' and 'in winter' are used without 'the'. Remove duplicate 'which'. Use comparative 'heavier' and ensure verb agreement 'which are heavier' and 'they keep me warm' to match plural noun.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

This question is correctly formed: present perfect 'has...changed' with 'since' referring to a past point is appropriate. No correction needed.

× Yes, of course my favorite food has changed since childhood.

✓ Yes, of course my favourite food has changed since childhood.

Sentence is correct; minor spelling: use consistent British or American spelling. No grammatical correction required. Kept present perfect for change from past to now.

× I prefer more sugar, sugary snacks and candy and the fast food.

✓ I preferred sugary snacks and candy and fast food more.

Referring to childhood preferences requires past tense 'preferred'. Avoid 'the fast food'—use 'fast food' without 'the'. Also 'prefer more sugar' is awkward; rephrase to 'preferred sugary snacks and candy and fast food more'.

× But nowadays as an adult, I prefer much healthier options because because of my health condition.

✓ But nowadays, as an adult, I prefer much healthier options because of my health condition.

Remove duplicate 'because'. Present tense 'prefer' is correct for current habits. Add comma after 'nowadays' for clarity. 'Because of my health condition' is the correct prepositional phrase.