Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and coherent: remove unclear phrase (“Get galleries”), correct word choice (use “memories” not “memorial”), and keep within 3–4 sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (taste, texture, family occasions) using linking words like “because” or “and”.

예시: I absolutely love dumplings because they are a traditional family dish. They taste comforting and have a soft texture, and I also cherish them for the warm family memories we create when we eat them together.

제안: Good direct answer and specific details. To improve further, add a brief linking phrase to connect childhood habit to a reason or result, and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., “sweets” or “treats”). Keep it concise and natural.

예시: I had a sweet tooth as a child, and I loved chocolates and candies. For example, I often ate chocolate bars after school because they were a special treat that cheered me up.

제안: Correct minor grammar (“taste have” → “tastes have” or “my tastes changed”) and be more specific about what “light” means (salads, cold dishes). Use linking words (“for example”, “in contrast”) to structure the answer and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed as an adult. For example, in winter I prefer hearty soups and dumplings to stay warm, while in summer I usually eat lighter meals like salads and cold noodles.

제안: Strong, clear answer with specific supporting details. To reach a higher band, combine sentences to sound more fluent and add a brief linking phrase to show contrast or continuity (e.g., “and that hasn’t changed because…”).

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed; I still love dumplings because of their delicate flavour, soft texture and the huge variety of fillings and regional styles that keep them interesting.

× Get galleries.

✓ It brings back memories.

The phrase 'Get galleries.' is a fragment and does not make sense in context. This is a sentence structure error (fragment). Replace with a complete clause that expresses the intended idea. Suggestion: 'It brings back memories.' or 'It reminds me of family gatherings.'

× I enjoy them not only for the taste and comforting texture, but also for the family memorial.

✓ I enjoy them not only for the taste and comforting texture, but also for their family significance.

'Family memorial' is incorrect word choice and sounds unnatural; this is an incorrect use of adjectives/nouns. The intended meaning is that dumplings have family significance or sentimental value. Use 'family significance' or 'sentimental value' to convey this clearly.

× Yes, my taste have changed since I became an adult.

✓ Yes, my tastes have changed since I became an adult.

'Taste' used here refers to preferences and should be plural 'tastes' to agree with the plural verb 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement/number issue. Alternatively, keep singular with singular verb: 'Yes, my taste has changed.'

× I now prefer sweeter foods more often.

✓ I now prefer sweeter foods.

The phrase 'prefer ... more often' is redundant and awkward: 'prefer' already expresses a comparative preference, while 'more often' suggests frequency. This is a sentence structure/style issue. Use 'I now prefer sweeter foods.' or if you mean frequency: 'I now eat sweeter foods more often.'

× For example, in winter I tend to eat hearty soups and dumplings to stay warm, while in summer I choose light.

✓ For example, in winter I tend to eat hearty soups and dumplings to stay warm, while in summer I choose lighter foods.

'Choose light' is incomplete; 'light' is an adjective that needs a noun, e.g., 'light foods' or the comparative adjective 'lighter' modifying 'foods'. This is a sentence structure error. Use 'choose lighter foods' or 'choose light meals.'