Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence naming your favourite food (eggs), then give one brief reason and an example. Use correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid redundant phrases.

예시: My favourite food is eggs. I love them because they are versatile and quick to cook. For example, I often have an omelette with tomatoes and cheese for breakfast.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and a clear, concise supporting detail about the past. Use correct tense and natural expressions (e.g., 'when I was young'). Add a short explanation or example to make it specific.

예시: When I was young, I liked eggs a lot. My parents used to give me boiled eggs every morning, so I grew up eating them and still enjoy them now.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide a brief reason. Use smoother phrasing and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement). You can add one example to illustrate your habit.

예시: Not really. I prefer simple meals and tend to eat the same basic ingredients year-round. For instance, I usually have eggs, rice and vegetables regardless of the season.

제안: Be concise and avoid hesitation. Start with a clear direct response (No, it hasn't changed), then give one or two specific supporting reasons in grammatically correct sentences. Remove filler words.

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed. I have loved eggs since childhood because they taste good and are easy to prepare, so I still enjoy dishes like scrambled eggs or omelettes.

× I enjoy fruits make up with eggs.

✓ I enjoy fruits made with eggs.

The original sentence uses 'make up with' incorrectly. The correct passive/participle form is 'made with' to indicate ingredients. Use of pronouns is not the main issue but the verb form and phrase were wrong; this fits under 'Incorrect use of pronouns' per provided list only when referring to pronoun forms. Clear suggestion: use 'made with' to describe foods containing eggs.

× I really love eggs, so anything produced from eggs, I love it.

✓ I really love eggs, so I love anything made from eggs.

The sentence repeats subject and object awkwardly ('anything... I love it'). Move the subject 'I' before the verb and use 'made from' to describe items. Suggestion: place 'I' before 'love' and avoid redundant pronoun 'it'.

× I remember it was still egg.

✓ I remember it was still eggs.

The speaker refers to eggs in general, which should be plural. This is a singular/plural mismatch; listed here as Past tense issue because of 'was' context. Suggestion: use plural 'eggs' when speaking about the food in general.

× I have really enjoyed eggs from my little age so until now I still love it and I will eat every day.

✓ I have really enjoyed eggs since I was little, so I still love them and I eat them every day.

Multiple problems: 'from my little age' is incorrect — use 'since I was little'; pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' for eggs; 'I will eat every day' mismatches ongoing habit — use present simple 'I eat them every day'. Suggestion: use 'since' with past reference and present simple for habitual actions.

× Not really, because I'm not the person who care about the variety of foods so I prefer it almost simple and the same ingredients every day, so that's why I say no.

✓ Not really, because I'm not the kind of person who cares about the variety of foods, so I prefer things to be simple and use the same ingredients every day; that's why I say no.

Errors: 'person who care' should be 'person who cares' (subject-verb agreement); 'prefer it almost simple' is unnatural — say 'prefer things to be simple'; pronoun 'it' is vague. Suggestion: correct verb agreement and rephrase for natural English.

× As shall we know, I have learn I I always love eggs, as I mentioned before, so add, uh, anything produce from egg is really umm, attracted me and uh, it's always the sense.

✓ As you may know, I have learned that I have always loved eggs, as I mentioned before, so anything produced from eggs really attracts me and it always feels that way.

Many problems: 'As shall we know' is incorrect — use 'As you may know'; 'I have learn' should be present perfect 'I have learned'; 'I I' duplicate; 'I always love' in past context should be 'I have always loved'; 'anything produce from egg' needs passive participle 'produced from eggs'; 'attracted me' wrong tense/form — use present 'attracts me'; 'it's always the sense' is unclear — rephrase 'it always feels that way'. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary/modal forms, present perfect for continuing states, passive participles, and correct verb agreement.