Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief reason or example. Use correct tense and singular/plural forms, and avoid filler words like 'etcetera'.

예시: My favourite food at the moment is Chinese cuisine, especially Hakka noodles and vegetable Manchurian. I like them because they are flavorful and easy to share when I eat out with friends.

제안: Use the past tense for past habits and correct word choices. Give a concise comparison between past and present with a linking phrase like 'but now' and one reason for the change.

예시: When I was young, I mainly ate homemade meals made by my mother because we preferred home-cooked food. But now I often choose fast food like pizza and burgers because they are convenient and popular with my friends.

제안: Produce a clear, structured answer: state whether you do, then give two specific seasonal examples with correct vocabulary and avoid unclear items (e.g., 'Spanish' unclear) and incorrect foods ('beers'). Use present simple/past appropriately and linking words like 'for example' or 'in winter'.

예시: Yes, I change my diet with the seasons. For example, in summer I eat more fresh vegetables such as carrots and radishes to stay cool, while in winter I prefer warm, hearty dishes like soups and stews.

제안: Answer directly with a clear statement about change, use correct tenses and avoid repetition. Give one brief reason why your tastes changed and a linking phrase like 'because' or 'since'.

예시: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. When I was younger I preferred homemade meals, but now I enjoy foods like pizza and burgers because I eat out more and like trying different flavours.

× It change only time to time but now I like Chinese food like Hakka noodles, manchurian and spring roll etcetera.

✓ It changes only from time to time, but now I like Chinese food such as Hakka noodles, Manchurian, and spring rolls.

Subject-verb agreement requires the third person singular 'it' to take the verb form 'changes' (Grammar Problem Type 6 and 27). Also 'from time to time' is the correct idiom. Use 'such as' for examples and pluralize 'spring rolls'. Capitalize proper nouns like 'Manchurian'. Suggestion: practice subject-verb agreement with third person subjects and common idioms.

× When I was young I like only homemade food with my mother head but now I like fast food more like pizza, burger.

✓ When I was young I liked only homemade food made by my mother, but now I prefer fast food like pizza and burgers.

The clause 'When I was young' sets a past-time context, so the verb should be past tense 'liked' (Grammar Problem Type 5). 'With my mother head' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'made by my mother' (Sentence structure error, Grammar Problem Type 26). Use 'prefer' to express current preference and pluralize 'burgers'. Suggestion: match verb tenses to time adverbials and use clear passive or agent phrases like 'made by'.

× Yes, definitely according to season my me, my diet is change different. Like uh, in this summer I eat uh carrots, radish, Spanish, etcetera. And in the winter I ate beers.

✓ Yes, definitely. According to the season, my diet changes. For example, in summer I eat carrots, radishes, spinach, etc. And in winter I eat pears.

Several tense and form errors: 'my diet is change different' should be 'my diet changes' to use present simple for habitual actions (Grammar Problem Type 6). 'In this summer I eat' should be 'in summer I eat' or 'this summer I ate' depending on time; present habitual uses 'in summer I eat' (Grammar Problem Type 6). Pluralize vegetables: 'carrots' and 'radishes'. 'Spanish' is incorrect for a vegetable; likely intended 'spinach'. 'I ate beers' mixes past tense 'ate' with a beverage; for habitual present use 'I drink beer' or if meaning 'pears' use 'I eat pears' — corrected to 'I eat pears' assuming fruit. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual seasonal habits, pluralize countable nouns, and check vocabulary for correct word choice.

× As I share literally it change from when I was younger I eat only homemade food, but I am now now I like pizza, burger etcetera.

✓ As I said, it changed: when I was younger I ate only homemade food, but now I like pizza and burgers.

Mixes tenses and has redundancy: 'As I share literally' should be 'As I said' (incorrect word choice). The change occurred in the past, so use past 'changed' and 'ate' for the younger period (Grammar Problem Type 5). For current preferences use present 'like'. Remove duplicate 'now now' and pluralize 'burgers'. Suggestion: organize sentences to state the change clearly (past for the past state, present for current state), avoid repetition, and choose appropriate verbs like 'said' instead of 'share' in this context.