Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer but natural answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or details (taste, ingredients, occasions) using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences and avoid simple yes/no style. Also use varied vocabulary (e.g., spicy, communal, broth, variety of ingredients).

예시: My favorite food is Chinese hot pot because I love its spicy and savory broths. For example, I enjoy dipping thinly sliced meat and fresh vegetables into the bubbling soup, which makes meals feel very social and fun.

제안: Correct grammar and tense, and be more specific. Start with a topic sentence in the past tense, then contrast with the present using a linking word such as "but" or "however." Provide brief reasons for the change. Avoid informal errors like 'got' and inconsistent tense.

예시: When I was young, I loved sweet snacks like candies and sour strips because they were convenient and tasted exciting. However, now I prefer less sugary foods because I try to eat healthier and avoid too much sugar.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use a topic sentence stating yes or no, then give a specific example or reason using a linking word (for example, "however" or "for instance"). Correct fragmented and repeated words and avoid filler sounds. Mention seasonal foods if relevant.

예시: Not usually — I tend to eat the same kinds of food all year because my local markets sell the same items. However, in winter I sometimes eat more soups and hot dishes to stay warm, while in summer I prefer light salads and cold drinks.

제안: Give a clear, grammatically correct response with reasons. Start with a topic sentence (Yes/No), then explain why with specific details and one linking word. Avoid unclear words like 'hapa' and fillers. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: No, my favourite food has not changed because I have always loved hot pot — its rich flavors and variety of ingredients appeal to me. For example, sharing a hot pot with friends makes the meal memorable, so it remains my favourite.

× When I'm young I love sweet foods such as candies and sour strips, but now I don't got any interested in sweet food and sour food.

✓ When I was young I loved sweet foods such as candies and sour strips, but now I'm not interested in sweet or sour foods.

Error types: present tense used for past (use past 'was', 'loved') and incorrect verb form 'don't got' and incorrect adjective/verb combination 'got interested'. Use correct negative present continuous/state: 'I'm not interested in'. Also plural consistency: 'sweet or sour foods'. Suggestion: use past tense to describe childhood and use 'be interested in' for current preferences. Grammar problem type's ID:6

× I don't really eat different food in different time of the year because I think foods are you can eat eat it, umm, every year and which time?

✓ I don't really eat different foods at different times of the year because I think foods can be eaten every season.

Errors: wrong preposition 'in different time' should be 'at different times'; incorrect singular/plural 'different food' -> 'different foods'; awkward clause 'foods are you can eat eat it' should be passive 'can be eaten'; 'which time?' is unnecessary and unclear. Suggestion: use 'at different times of the year' and passive or active infinitive 'can be eaten' to express general truth. Grammar problem type's ID:11

× I think my favorite food doesn't change because hapa is one of my umm food that I taste best of my life and it's my favorite 1 so.

✓ I think my favorite food hasn't changed because Hapa is one of the best-tasting foods I have ever had, and it's my favorite.

Errors: tense mismatch 'doesn't change' should be present perfect 'hasn't changed' to refer from past to present; unclear word 'hapa' treated as a food name should be capitalized; phrase 'one of my umm food that I taste best of my life' is ungrammatical—use 'one of the best-tasting foods I have ever had'. Remove extraneous '1 so'. Suggestion: use present perfect to describe a change since childhood and clear adjective phrase 'best-tasting'. Grammar problem type's ID:26

× My favorite food is Chinese hot pot.

✓ My favorite food is Chinese hot pot.

Sentence is grammatically correct. Subject 'My favorite food' and verb 'is' agree, and noun phrase 'Chinese hot pot' is appropriate. No change needed. Grammar problem type's ID:27