Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetitions, and give one or two specific details about the dish (name, key ingredients, why you like it). Use simple linking words to connect ideas. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is Indian cuisine, especially paneer butter masala. It’s a creamy curry made with paneer (cheese), butter and spices, and I love its rich texture and mild, savory flavour.

제안: Answer directly with past tense and reduce repetition. Give one clear reason why you liked it (e.g., taste, family tradition) and use a linking word to add that reason. Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct tense usage.

예시: When I was young, my favourite dish was paneer butter masala. I liked it because the creamy texture and mild spices reminded me of family meals, and I enjoyed the rich flavour.

제안: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and two contrasting examples for summer and winter. Use linking words (for example, however) and avoid hesitations. Be specific about types of foods or drinks you choose in each season.

예시: Yes. In summer I prefer light and cooling foods, such as salads, yogurt-based dishes and cold drinks, because the heat makes spicy food uncomfortable. In contrast, during winter I enjoy hot, spicy meals like stews and curries to keep warm.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and explain how and why your tastes changed with specific examples. Use correct tense and concise sentences (2–3). Mention particular foods or experiences that influenced the change and use linking words like because or as a result.

예시: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. As a child I mostly ate homemade dishes like paneer butter masala, but now I try many cuisines—such as Italian and Thai—because I go to restaurants and travel with friends, which has broadened my tastes.

× If I talk about the favorite one, uh, I, I like the most is Indian food And uh, if I talking about the dish I like the most is a kind of Curry with the cheese and butter.

✓ If I talk about my favorite food, the one I like most is Indian food. And if I am talking about the dish I like the most, it is a kind of curry with cheese and butter.

Run-on and incorrect verb forms: 'If I talking' is ungrammatical (missing auxiliary) and the sentence structure is disordered. Use 'my favorite' (possessive) and 'the one I like most' for clarity. For the second clause, use present continuous 'am talking' or simple present 'talk' and complete the clause with 'it is'. Also use lowercase 'curry' and remove redundant words. Suggestion: Break into two sentences, use correct possessive and auxiliary verbs, and keep consistent capitalization.

× When I was young, the favorite favorite food is uh, paneer butter masala actually is a kind of Curry with the, uh, butter and the spice and the texture is good and I like it very much.

✓ When I was young, my favorite food was paneer butter masala. It is a kind of curry with butter and spices; the texture is good and I liked it very much.

Tense inconsistency: the clause begins in the past ('When I was young') so the main verb should be past tense ('was'). Also 'is' can remain in present for defining the dish ('It is a kind of curry'), but personal preference should be past ('liked'). 'Spice' should be plural 'spices'. Suggestion: Match past context with past tense for feelings and use present for general facts about the dish.

× At that time, I enjoy to eat, eat spices too much, so this is my favorite one.

✓ At that time, I enjoyed eating spicy food a lot, so it was my favorite.

Incorrect verb and gerund use: 'enjoy to eat' is incorrect in English; 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund ('enjoy eating'). Also 'eat spices' is awkward; use adjective 'spicy' + noun ('spicy food'). Tense should match past ('enjoyed', 'was'). Suggestion: Use 'enjoyed eating' and 'spicy food' to express habitual past preference.

× Yes, I prefer different food in different, uh, times.

✓ Yes, I prefer different foods at different times.

Count noun error: 'food' can be uncountable but when referring to different kinds use plural 'foods'. Also preposition 'at different times' is correct instead of 'in different times'. Suggestion: Use 'different foods' and 'at different times'.

× For example, in the summer, I love to eat uh, that food that are not too much spicy because the weather is too hot.

✓ For example, in the summer I like to eat foods that are not too spicy because the weather is very hot.

Relative clause and adjective placement: 'that food that are' is ungrammatical; 'food' vs 'foods' and verb agreement with 'are' is wrong. 'Too much spicy' is incorrect; use 'too spicy' or 'very spicy'. Suggestion: Use 'foods that are not too spicy' or 'food that is not too spicy'.

× So I prefer the cold beverages and cold, cold, uh, things.

✓ So I prefer cold beverages and other cold items.

Unnecessary definite article: 'the cold beverages' is acceptable but repetitive 'cold, cold' and 'things' is vague. Use 'other cold items' for clarity. Remove duplicate words. Suggestion: Be concise and use specific nouns rather than 'things'.

× So if I talk about in winter, so I prefer hot and more spicy food as compared to some.

✓ If I talk about winter, I prefer hot and spicier food compared to summer.

Redundant 'so' and awkward comparative 'more spicy' and incomplete comparison 'as compared to some'. Use comparative 'spicier' and specify the comparison target (e.g., summer). Suggestion: Remove filler words, use 'spicier', and state what you are comparing to.

× Yes, definitely the choices of the food is change as compared when I was child.

✓ Yes, definitely my food choices have changed compared to when I was a child.

Tense and agreement errors: 'is change' is incorrect; use present perfect 'have changed' to indicate change up to now. 'the choices of the food' is awkward; use 'my food choices'. Also add article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: Use 'have changed' and natural possessive phrasing.

× In the child there are limited kind of food like for example we are not hanging out, we were not hang out with the friends.

✓ When I was a child there were limited kinds of food; for example, we did not hang out with friends.

Multiple errors: 'In the child' should be 'When I was a child'. Use past tense 'were' for 'there were limited kinds of food'. 'We were not hang out' is ungrammatical; use past simple 'we did not hang out'. Suggestion: Use 'When I was a child' and past simple for past habits.

× But now we tried different food in different different restaurant When I I was with my friends and we did parties together.

✓ But now we try different foods in different restaurants when I am with my friends and we have parties together.

Tense inconsistency and repetition: 'tried' (past) conflicts with ongoing habit; use present simple 'try' for habitual action. Use plural 'foods' and 'restaurants'. Remove duplicate 'different' and duplicate 'I'. Use 'when I am with my friends' and 'have parties' for habitual present. Suggestion: Use consistent tense for habits (present simple), correct plurals, and remove repeated words.

× So I think my taste is.

✓ So I think my taste has changed.

Incomplete sentence lacking a complement. 'My taste is' requires further description; context suggests 'has changed'. Use present perfect to indicate change over time. Suggestion: Complete the sentence with 'has changed' or another appropriate description.