Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak in correct sentence structure and be clear. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the food, then add one or two concise reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unrelated phrases.

예시: My favourite food is chocolate cake because I love its rich, sweet flavour. Also, it reminds me of happy celebrations, so I often have it with coffee.

제안: Use past tense consistently and give a short explanation or example. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or memory with a linking word.

예시: When I was young, I liked chocolate and candy. For example, I often ate sweets after school because they made snack time fun.

제안: Answer directly and provide a specific example. Use linking words (for example, in summer/ during winter) and correct noun phrases. Avoid repeating words and include a brief reason.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I usually have potato soup because it is warm and comforting, while in summer I prefer salads because they are light.

제안: Give a clear yes/no answer and explain how and why it changed with specific details. Use past and present tense correctly and organize ideas with linking words like 'now' or 'when I was a child'.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. When I was little, I preferred sweets and pizza, but now I enjoy more comforting foods like soups and tea because I appreciate simple flavours.

× I favorite food is chocolate cake.

✓ My favorite food is chocolate cake.

The sentence uses 'favorite' as if it were a noun; it is an adjective modifying 'food' and needs a possessive determiner 'my' before it. Use 'My favorite food is chocolate cake.' to show possession and correct adjective placement.

× It's were it's were happy it's only were make coffee.

✓ I feel happy when I make coffee.

This sentence has multiple structural errors and incorrect verb forms ('it's were' is ungrammatical). The intended meaning is likely that making coffee makes the speaker happy. Use a subject 'I', present simple 'feel' and a subordinate clause 'when I make coffee' for clear, grammatical expression.

× When I go young and I like chocolate and candy.

✓ When I was young, I liked chocolate and candy.

The context asks about the past. 'When I go young' is incorrect; use the past tense 'was' for the state of being young. Also use past simple 'liked' to describe past preferences. Add a comma after the time clause for clarity.

× Ah yes, different a different time of year.

✓ Ah yes, at different times of the year.

The original phrase repeats words and lacks correct preposition and pluralization. Use the preposition 'at' and plural 'times' to express 'on various occasions in the year.'

× For example, I birthday I birthday a potato soup.

✓ For example, on my birthday I eat potato soup.

The sentence repeats 'I birthday' and lacks a verb. Use the prepositional phrase 'on my birthday' and the verb 'eat' to indicate what happens. 'Potato soup' does not need an article in this general context, but 'eat potato soup' is natural.

× Yes, my favorite food may change in two and you drop the more comfort food than pepperoni and tea.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed over time and I prefer comfort foods like pepperoni pizza and tea.

The original mixes modal 'may' with confusing phrases. The question asks about change since childhood, so use present perfect 'has changed' to describe change over time. Clarify 'comfort foods' and specific examples; 'pepperoni' alone is unclear, so 'pepperoni pizza' is clearer. Use 'prefer' for current preference.

× Yes, my favorite food may change in two and you drop the more comfort food than pepperoni and tea.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed over time and I prefer comfort foods like pepperoni pizza and tea.

The original uses 'you' incorrectly instead of 'I' and has unclear pronoun reference. Replace with 'I' to refer to the speaker. Also rephrase to convey the intended meaning clearly using correct tense and noun phrases.