Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không rõ ý; cần trả lời trực tiếp, đầy đủ và tự nhiên. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu món ăn yêu thích, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (tại sao, hương vị hoặc hoàn cảnh ăn). Tránh tiếng ồn (uh, well) quá nhiều và đảm bảo tối đa 5 câu.

예시: My favourite food is chicken soup. I love it because it’s comforting and full of flavour, especially when my family makes it at home.

제안: Câu trả lời rối và thiếu mạch lạc; cần tổ chức ý theo cấu trúc: câu chủ đề nêu loại thức ăn, sau đó giải thích hoặc đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh từ sai hoặc không phù hợp (ví dụ “Avengers” không liên quan). Dùng liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết về hương vị, người nấu hoặc kỷ niệm.

예시: When I was young, I liked simple homemade food. For example, my grandfather often made chicken soup and steamed rice cakes, which were warm and comforting.

제안: Ý chính tốt nhưng phát âm và từ dùng sai gây khó hiểu (ví dụ “slap”, “hurting still steals in rostow”). Cần dùng từ vựng chính xác cho mùa và liên từ để mạch lạc. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về món ăn mùa hè và mùa đông sẽ giúp câu cảm thấy hoàn chỉnh.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and fresh fruits like watermelon to stay cool, while in winter I enjoy hearty stews and roasted vegetables for warmth and comfort.

제안: Ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu lủng củng và nhiều lỗi từ (ví dụ “Swiss”, “This is such a real fish and salt”). Cần nói rõ món trước và sau, giải thích lý do thay đổi bằng từ vựng chính xác và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ câu súc tích, không lặp từ và tránh tiếng ồn.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to love sweets like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer strawberries because they are fresher and healthier.

× Well, the.

✓ Well, I like simple homemade food.

The original fragment lacks a verb and object, making it an incomplete sentence. Provide a subject and verb to form a complete response relevant to the question. Suggestion: use 'I like' plus a noun phrase (e.g., 'simple homemade food').

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> I love simple homemade this is Avengers and especially my grandfather. Chicken soup and steamed rice cake later.

✓ When I was young, I loved simple homemade dishes, especially the ones my grandfather made, such as chicken soup and steamed rice cakes.

The student mixed present tense 'love' with a past-time question. Use past tense 'loved' to match 'when you were young'. Also sentence structure was fragmented and contained irrelevant words. Suggestion: use past tense verbs and connect clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes I do eat different foods depending on the season. For example in the summer I prefer light slap and fresh fruits like a watermelon to stay cool.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in the summer I prefer light soups and fresh fruits like watermelon to stay cool.

The verb 'do eat' is acceptable but unnecessary; use 'I eat'. The word 'slap' is incorrect; likely intended 'soup' or 'salad'. Use uncountable 'watermelon' without 'a'. Suggestion: choose correct noun ('soup' or 'salad') and use proper article or none for uncountable nouns.

× Well in winter I enjoy hurting still steals in rostow vegetable for warmed and comfort.

✓ In winter I enjoy hearty stews and roasted vegetables to feel warm and comfortable.

The original contains many incorrect words ('hurting', 'still steals', 'rostow', 'for warmed and comfort') and wrong word forms. Use appropriate adjectives ('hearty'), correct nouns ('stews', 'roasted vegetables') and infinitive 'to feel' plus adjectives 'warm and comfortable'. Suggestion: learn common collocations like 'hearty stews' and 'roasted vegetables' and use 'to feel warm and comfortable'.

× Yes uh, that's my favorite food has changed since since childhood. Uh, used to love simple Swiss like candy and chocolate but now I prefer strawberry. This is such a real fish and salt because they feel healthier and more.

✓ Yes, my favorite foods have changed since childhood. I used to love sweets like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer fruit such as strawberries because they feel healthier and fresher.

Mix of tenses and grammar errors: 'that's my favorite food has changed' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'have changed' or simple past with 'since childhood' context; here 'have changed' is correct. 'Used to love' is correct for past habit. 'Swiss' incorrect word; should be 'sweets'. 'Strawberry' should be plural 'strawberries' when speaking generally. 'This is such a real fish and salt' is nonsensical; replaced with 'such as' to give examples and 'fresher' to complete comparative idea. Suggestion: use 'have changed', 'used to', 'sweets', plural for general preference, and 'such as' for examples.