Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar and improve coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, fix subject-verb agreement and singular/plural forms, and reduce redundancy. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas and provide a specific detail (e.g., a filling you like or a memory). Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences).

예시: My favourite food is dumplings. They remind me of family weekend gatherings because we all help make them together. I especially like pork and chive dumplings because the meat is juicy and the filling is well seasoned. Making them as a family is fun and creates warm memories.

제안: Fix grammar, pronunciation errors (e.g., "when I was young", "favorite food"), and complete incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence stating past preference, then give specific supporting details (why you liked them, who you made them with) using linking words like "because" or "also". Avoid repetition of the same points already mentioned in other answers; add a new detail instead.

예시: When I was young, my favourite food was dumplings because I liked their shape and flavour. I enjoyed filling them with minced pork and cabbage, and I often made them with my friends after school. That repeated activity made the food even more special to me.

제안: Remove the repeated examiner question and answer directly. Improve word choice ("thin foods" is unclear — maybe "simple meals"), grammar ("provide same food" → "sell the same foods"), and add a brief specific example of a seasonal change or lack thereof. Use a linking word like "because" to explain your reason.

예시: No, I don't change my diet much during the year; I usually eat simple meals because I'm very busy. For example, I often cook quick stir-fries or salads year-round since local supermarkets sell similar ingredients all year.

제안: Make the response more natural by using correct verb forms ("has not changed") and avoid repeating the same information. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific contrasting detail or brief reason why it hasn’t changed, using a linking word like "because" or "so".

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since childhood because dumplings still remind me of family weekends. I still prefer the same pork-and-cabbage filling my parents used to make, which is why they remain my favourite.

× My favorite foods is dumplings.

✓ My favorite food is dumplings.

The subject 'favorite foods' is plural while the verb 'is' is singular; this is a singular/plural mismatch. Use the singular form 'food' with 'is' because 'favorite food' is an uncountable or singular concept referring to a type of food. Suggestion: use 'My favorite food is dumplings.'

× Making dumplings good together your family is also a fun activity.

✓ Making dumplings together with your family is also a fun activity.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and a missing preposition; 'good' is misplaced. This is a sentence structure and preposition problem. Use the phrase 'together with your family' to indicate who participates. Suggestion: reorder words and include the preposition 'with.'

× They really taste good and you can put a lot of things inside.

✓ They really taste good, and you can put a lot of things inside them.

The pronoun referring to 'dumplings' is missing; adding 'them' clarifies the object. This is a sentence structure/pronoun reference issue related to present tense statements. Suggestion: include the object pronoun 'them' after 'inside.'

× When I years young my favorite voodoo was dumplings.

✓ When I was young my favorite food was dumplings.

Multiple errors: 'years young' is incorrect word order and form; 'voodoo' is a misspelling of 'food.' This is a sentence structure and vocabulary error. Use 'When I was young' and 'favorite food.' Suggestion: correct to 'When I was young my favorite food was dumplings.'

× I enjoy the taste and shape and I enjoyed putting a lot of things inside such as meat or vegetables.

✓ I enjoyed the taste and shape and I enjoyed putting a lot of things inside, such as meat or vegetables.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence mixes present 'I enjoy' with past 'I enjoyed.' Because the context is past (when young), use past tense consistently: 'I enjoyed.' Suggestion: keep past tense throughout this sentence.

× Additionally, making dumplings with my friend was.

✓ Additionally, making dumplings with my friend was fun.

The sentence lacks a complement after 'was,' making it incomplete. This is a sentence structure error. Add an adjective like 'fun' to complete the predicate. Suggestion: 'was fun.'

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year? No, I don't do that.

✓ No, I don't.

The student repeated the examiner's question at the start of their answer; this is pragmatic/redundant error. Also 'I don't do that' is awkward for this context. Use a concise negative response 'No, I don't.' Suggestion: answer directly without repeating the question.

× I usually eat thin foods throughout the year because I'm very busy and I want to make my life simple.

✓ I usually eat light foods throughout the year because I'm very busy and I want to keep my life simple.

'Thin foods' is incorrect collocation; 'light foods' or 'simple meals' is appropriate. Also 'make my life simple' is awkward; use 'keep my life simple.' This is an incorrect use of quantifiers/collocation and slight word choice issue. Suggestion: use 'light foods' or 'simple meals' and 'keep.'

× Well, local supermarkets provide same food.

✓ Well, local supermarkets provide the same food.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'same food.' This is an article usage error. Suggestion: use 'the same food' to indicate specific items provided by local supermarkets.

× No, my favorite food has not been changed since I was a child.

✓ No, my favorite food has not changed since I was a child.

'Has not been changed' uses unnecessary passive voice and is awkward. Use the present perfect active 'has not changed' to express an unchanged state. This is a sentence structure and passive/active voice issue. Suggestion: use 'has not changed.'

× Dumplings always remind me of family gatherings during weekends.

✓ Dumplings always remind me of family gatherings on weekends.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'weekends' rather than 'during' in this context. This is an incorrect use of prepositions combined with present tense usage. Suggestion: say 'on weekends.'