Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more specific and combine ideas into a coherent short answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, and use linking words. Avoid sentence fragments like “Cheese and vegetables too.”

예시: I love pizza, especially thin-crust Margherita, because of the gooey cheese and fresh tomato flavor. Also, I often add vegetables like bell peppers for extra crunch and nutrition.

제안: Use past tense correctly and add a brief explanation or example. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give a specific example and a reason why you liked it, using a linking word.

예시: When I was young, I liked eating meat dishes, particularly grilled chicken and beef stew, because they tasted rich and my family cooked them often.

제안: This answer is good but can be slightly improved by adding a linking word and a short reason for each preference. Keep it concise and natural, with correct articles and small adjustments to word choice.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I prefer fresh fruit and natural juices because they are refreshing, whereas in winter I like eating hot soups to stay warm.

제안: Make the timeline and tense clear, correct typos, and give a concise explanation of how and why your preference changed. Use one clear topic sentence, a linking word, and a specific reason or example.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I liked pizza, but now I prefer sushi because I enjoy the delicate flavors and variety of fresh fish.

× Cheese and vegetables too.

✓ I also like cheese and vegetables.

The original is a sentence fragment missing a subject and finite verb. It should be a complete clause to match previous statement. Use 'I also like ...' to provide subject and verb and connect to previous sentence. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× When I was young, I like the food with meat.

✓ When I was young, I liked food with meat.

The time expression 'When I was young' sets the sentence in the past, so the verb should be past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like'. Also 'the food with meat' is unnatural; use 'food with meat' without the definite article. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× For example in summer I prefer the fresh fruit and natural juice, and in the winter I like eating soup.

✓ For example, in summer I prefer fresh fruit and natural juice, and in winter I like to eat soup.

Use no definite article before general plural/uncountable nouns like 'fresh fruit' and 'natural juice'. Add commas for clarity. 'In the winter' can be shortened to 'in winter' when speaking generally. Use 'like to eat soup' or 'like eating soup' for parallel structure; here 'like to eat' matches 'prefer'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 22

× Yes, because when I was chill my favorite food. It was pizza and actually is sushi.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, my favorite food was pizza, but now it is sushi.

'chill' is a misspelling of 'child'. The sequence describes past preference and present preference, so use past tense 'was' for the past and present 'is' for the current. The original also contains sentence fragments; combine into a clear complex sentence using 'but now' to show the change. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5