Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct word choice and reduce hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and include one specific supporting detail. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "savory" not "sorry").

예시: My favourite food is Italian cuisine because I love savory dishes like pasta and risotto. For example, I took a cooking class in Palermo two years ago where I learned to make authentic tomato sauce, and since then I enjoy cooking these dishes at home.

제안: Fix tense consistency and complete thoughts; avoid vague endings. Give one clear topic sentence, then a specific example with linking words. Reduce hesitations and repetition.

예시: As a child, I loved traditional Austrian food, especially hearty, meaty dishes like schnitzel and goulash. My grandmother used to cook for the whole family, so we always looked forward to weekend dinners when she made her famous goulash.

제안: Avoid repeating ideas and trailing off. Use linking words to compare seasons and give specific examples of dishes and reasons. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and eliminate fillers.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods by season. For instance, in summer I prefer light meals such as chilled salads or gazpacho because they are refreshing, whereas in winter I choose warming dishes like goulash or beef stew to stay warm.

제안: Be specific about how tastes changed and give clear reasons using linking words. Replace vague phrases with concrete examples and correct collocations ("nutrients" not "nutritions"). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed: I now prefer healthier options such as grilled fish, steamed vegetables and whole-grain pasta. For example, I still enjoy Italian and Asian cuisines, but I opt for lighter preparations to get more nutrients and feel more energetic.

× Even though I'm known for my sweet tooth, I'm really into sorry food like Italian dishes.

✓ Even though I'm known for having a sweet tooth, I'm really into savory food like Italian dishes.

The student used 'sorry' instead of the correct adjective 'savory' to describe flavorful food; also 'known for my sweet tooth' is commonly expressed as 'known for having a sweet tooth.' Use 'having' to indicate possessing a trait. Suggestion: replace 'sorry' with 'savory' and say 'known for having a sweet tooth.'

× I also did an Italian cooking class when I visited Italy, umm, I think it was umm Palermo two years ago and learned a lot there.

✓ I also took an Italian cooking class when I visited Italy; I think it was Palermo two years ago, and I learned a lot there.

Use 'took' rather than 'did' for attending classes or courses in past tense; add appropriate punctuation and include the past tense 'learned' which is correct but benefit from clearer clause separation. Suggestion: use 'took' for classes and separate clauses with punctuation for clarity.

× Umm, I really enjoy cooking Italian food too.

✓ I really enjoy cooking Italian food, too.

This sentence is mostly correct grammatically; only punctuation and filler 'Umm' can be removed for clarity. Keep present simple 'enjoy' for habitual action. Suggestion: remove fillers and add a comma before 'too.'

× When I was a child, I was really into all those traditional Austrian dishes.

✓ When I was a child, I was really into traditional Austrian dishes.

The phrase 'all those' is informal and redundant; removing it improves clarity. Tense 'was' correctly indicates past preference. Suggestion: use 'traditional Austrian dishes' without 'all those.'

× Most of them are really fatty and umami and meaty dishes.

✓ Most of them are really fatty, umami, and meaty dishes.

This sentence lists three adjectives; they should be separated by commas. Also 'umami' is a noun used here adjectivally — acceptable but better as 'have an umami flavor.' Suggestion: use commas and consider 'have an umami flavor' for clarity.

× My grandmother was such a good cook when she was still alive.

✓ My grandmother was such a good cook when she was alive.

'When she was still alive' is wordy; 'when she was alive' is simpler. Tense 'was' correctly indicates past. Suggestion: simplify phrasing to avoid redundancy.

× She always cooks for the whole family and everyone was looking forward to the.

✓ She always cooked for the whole family, and everyone looked forward to it.

Mixed tenses: 'always cooks' is present while 'was looking' is past continuous; since grandmother is referred to in past, both verbs should be past: 'cooked' and 'looked forward to it.' Also the sentence was incomplete ('to the' missing object); add 'it.' Suggestion: maintain past tense throughout and include the object 'it.'

× In the summer when it's hot outside, I really enjoy cold dishes like a good salad or, umm, something refreshing.

✓ In the summer, when it's hot outside, I really enjoy cold dishes like a good salad or something refreshing.

Sentence is grammatically fine; remove filler 'umm' and add a comma after 'summer' for clarity. Present tense 'enjoy' correctly expresses habitual preference. Suggestion: omit fillers and add minor punctuation.

× But in the winter months I really enjoy eating a soup or goulash or something that warms you up from inside.

✓ But in the winter months I really enjoy eating a soup or goulash or something that warms me up from the inside.

Pronoun 'you' is generic but inconsistent with first-person narration. Use 'me' to keep perspective consistent. Also add 'the' before 'inside' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use first-person pronouns when speaking about personal experience.

× But I can eat the salad in the.

✓ But I can eat the salad in the summer.

The sentence was incomplete, missing the time phrase; likely intended 'in the summer.' Maintain present tense 'can eat.' Suggestion: complete the sentence by adding the missing season.

× Umm I'm now really into healthier foods.

✓ I'm now really into healthier foods.

Remove filler 'Umm.' Present continuous 'am now really into' is acceptable to indicate current preference. Suggestion: avoid fillers for clearer speech.

× I also like Italian food and I also like Asian food.

✓ I also like Italian food, and I also like Asian food.

Grammatically correct; add comma before conjunction for clarity and consider varying wording to avoid repetition of 'I also like.' Suggestion: combine ideas or use synonyms to reduce repetition (e.g., 'I also enjoy Italian and Asian cuisines').

× But most of the time I'm eating healthy versions because it just fills my body with good nutritions and vitamins and I feel better after.

✓ But most of the time I eat healthier versions because they just fill my body with good nutrients and vitamins, and I feel better afterward.

Multiple issues: 'I'm eating' (present continuous) is acceptable but present simple 'I eat' better for habitual actions. 'Healthy versions' is okay, but 'fills my body' should match plural 'they ... fill.' 'Nutritions' is incorrect plural — 'nutrients' is correct. 'After' used alone is informal; use 'afterward.' Suggestion: use present simple for habits, correct 'nutrients,' ensure subject-verb agreement ('they fill'), and use 'afterward.'