Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more specific and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, add one or two brief supporting details (why you like it, flavors or occasions), and use linking words. Avoid generic phrasing like “Asian cuisine” without elaboration and correct small grammar points (e.g., “favorite” spelling is fine here but ensure consistency).

예시: I particularly enjoy Asian food, especially chicken noodle soup. I like it because the broth is comforting and mildly spiced, and the noodles make it filling. For example, I often have it when I feel cold or need something light and warming.

제안: Use past tense consistently and give a clear topic sentence, then one specific reason and a brief example. Replace vague praise with precise reasons (taste, texture, convenience). Limit to 2–3 sentences and add a linking word.

예시: When I was younger, I preferred crispy foods. For instance, I often ate KFC or McDonald's because I liked the crunchy texture and it was convenient after school. However, now I choose healthier options more often.

제안: Avoid filler words like “Wow” and correct small grammar (use articles and seasons: “in winter/in summer”). Provide one clear example for each season and use linking words (e.g., “for example” or “in contrast”). Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I do. In winter I usually eat hot soups and stews to keep warm; for example, I like beef stew. In contrast, in summer I prefer cold salads or iced drinks to stay cool.

제안: Make a clear, grammatical topic sentence (use past vs present) and explain change or continuity with specific detail. Avoid unclear phrases (“slight Sam the fast food”). Use one linking word to compare past and present (e.g., “although” or “however”) and give an example of what remains or has changed.

예시: Not completely — I still enjoy fast food occasionally. Although I liked it a lot as a child for its taste and convenience, now I eat it less often and try to choose healthier options like a grilled chicken burger instead of fried foods.

× When I was younger I prefer crispy food, for example Kentucky Fried Chicken or McDonald's because of the fast food is very good to eat.

✓ When I was younger I preferred crispy food, for example Kentucky Fried Chicken or McDonald's, because fast food was very tasty.

The sentence refers to past time 'When I was younger', so verbs should be in past tense (preferred, was). Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'fast food' and replace 'very good to eat' with 'very tasty' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× On winter I prefer something hot to warm me up.

✓ In winter I prefer something hot to warm me up.

We use the preposition 'in' with seasons (in winter, in summer), not 'on'. Change 'On' to 'In' to be correct. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Wow. On the on summer I prefer something cold to cool me down.

✓ In summer I prefer something cold to cool me down.

Use 'in' with seasons and remove extra words 'the' and duplicated 'on'. Also keep present simple 'prefer' for habitual action. ' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Not all as I know I love fast food when I was younger and now I still the slight Sam the fast food.

✓ Not at all; as far as I know, I loved fast food when I was younger and now I still like fast food a little.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Not at all' expresses negation; 'as far as I know' is the correct phrase. Use past tense 'loved' for the younger period and present 'like' for current habit. Replace 'the slight Sam the fast food' with 'like fast food a little' to convey the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 26