Food— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
What is your favourite food?
수험생
Well, my favorite food is dumplings. You can make different things inside like meat, vegetables, or even a coin. People always say if you find the coin you, you will be lucky next year. And I especially enjoy making dumplings with my family because it's fun and.
시험관
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
수험생
When I was a kid, I like eating sweets like candies or chocolates. Sometimes my parents give me some sweets if I do well in school or get high grade in the competition. And I also looked forward to eating cake in the birthday party.
시험관
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
수험생
Yes, I eat different food on different time. For example in the winter I prefer hot pot or soups to keep warm, but in the summer I I'd like to eat cold noodles or salads. Also in during the special holidays such as spring festivals, I eat dumplings with my family.
시험관
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I think my favorite food has change. Why was a kid I enjoying candies and chocolates but now I prefer sorcery food such as noodles or spices dishes. So I think my favorite food has changed with growth.
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Part 1
What is your favourite food?
점수: 72.0제안: 回答总体清楚且有内容，但存在语法错误、冗长和句子未完成的问题。建议：1) 用简洁的主题句开头直接回答，例如“I like dumplings.” 2) 用一至两句补充具体细节并使用连接词（for example, because），避免重复。3) 注意完成句子并修正语法，如时态和代词结构。4) 控制在最多5句内。示例练习：写三句说明你为什么喜欢饺子，并练习朗读以保持流利与完整。
예시: I like dumplings because they come in many varieties. For example, my family fills them with pork, vegetables or sometimes a coin for good luck. I especially enjoy making dumplings with my family because it’s a fun tradition that brings us together.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答内容具体且相关，但存在时态和数的一致性错误，以及少量词汇搭配问题。建议：1) 开头用正确过去时（I liked）作为主题句。2) 用连接词（for example, and）保持连贯，但避免冗长。3) 改正搭配（get high grades / win competitions）。4) 保持句子简短完整并注意发音练习。
예시: I liked sweets when I was a child. For example, my parents often gave me candy or chocolate as a reward when I got good grades. I also always looked forward to eating birthday cake at parties.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答结构清晰且有季节对比，但有语法与表达小错误（time → times; I'd like → I like; 多余介词）。建议：1) 用正确的名词复数或短语（different times of the year）。2) 使用连接词（for example, while）使对比更明确。3) 简化句子并保持自然表达。
예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in winter I prefer hot pot or soup to keep warm, while in summer I like cold noodles or salads. Also, during special holidays such as the Spring Festival, my family eats dumplings together.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答能传达意思但语法错误较多且有用词不当（sorcery food 不合适），表达不够自然。建议：1) 使用正确过去时或现在完成时（has changed / changed）。2) 用恰当词汇描述口味变化（savory foods, spicy dishes）。3) 用连接词说明原因或对比（because, but now）。4) 保持句子完整，避免拼写与结构错误。
예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I enjoyed sweets like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer savory and spicy dishes such as noodles with spicy sauce.
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