Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use a clear topic sentence, avoid contradictory statements and unnecessary fillers. Mention 1–2 favourite foods, give brief reasons and keep within 3–4 coherent sentences. Use linking words (for example, 'however', 'because') to show contrast between taste and health.

예시: My favourite foods are biryani and grilled chicken because I enjoy their rich flavours and spices. However, I also often eat fast food because it is convenient when I am busy. I know fast food is not very healthy, so I try to balance it with home-cooked meals.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences, then give specific examples and a reason or memory. Avoid grammatical errors and redundant phrases. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'when' to organise details.

예시: When I was young, I preferred traditional (desi) foods and simple healthy dishes. For example, my family often ate salads, lentils and grilled chicken, which I liked because they tasted fresh and kept me energetic. I also remember enjoying meals cooked by my grandmother on weekends.

제안: Answer directly, then provide a specific example and a short reason. Use correct tense and connectives (e.g. 'for instance', 'in summer'). Keep sentences concise and avoid trailing off.

예시: Yes, I change what I eat depending on the season. For instance, in winter I prefer hearty soups and stews, while in summer I eat lighter salads and fruit. Recently, I tried a Chinese dish that I really enjoyed because of its bold flavours.

제안: Give a clear comparison between past and present preferences with one or two reasons for the change. Use linking words like 'but', 'now' or 'since' and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide concrete examples of foods you preferred then and now.

예시: My favourite foods have changed since childhood. As a child I enjoyed many fast foods and snacks, but now I prefer healthy options such as salads, grilled vegetables and lean protein because I want to maintain my health. For example, I often choose a chicken salad instead of fast food when I am out.

× I was thrilled. I like many dishes like mango, like biryani and chicken kalai and all of that.

✓ I am thrilled. I like many dishes such as mangoes, biryani and chicken kalia.

The student used past tense 'was' incorrectly when expressing a current feeling; replace with present tense 'am'. Also pluralize 'mango' to 'mangoes' for general reference. Use 'such as' instead of repeated 'like' for clarity and correct spelling 'kalia'. Maintain present simple for general likes.

× So then I now only like fast food.

✓ Now I only like fast food.

Redundant temporal markers 'so then I now' should be simplified to 'Now' to correctly express current preference in present simple tense.

× I know this is not healthy for your health, but I really like fast food.

✓ I know this is not healthy, but I really like fast food.

Using 'your health' is incorrect when referring to the general idea; use 'this is not healthy' or 'not healthy for me' to match the speaker. Also 'not healthy' is sufficient without repeating 'for your health'.

× Then I was young I love I beloved desi foods and healthy foods like salad and chicken meat and all of that.

✓ When I was young I loved traditional desi foods and healthy dishes like salads and chicken.

The original mixes tenses and redundant words ('I love I beloved'). Use past tense 'loved' for past preference, reorder to start with 'When I was young', use 'traditional' instead of 'desi' if preferred but keep 'desi' acceptable; pluralize 'salad' to 'salads' and use 'chicken' rather than 'chicken meat'.

× I prefer to you try one time and meat.

✓ I recommend you try it once; the meat is good.

Sentence is ungrammatical and pronouns misplaced. Use 'I recommend you try it once' or 'You should try it once'. Clarify what 'meat' refers to and correct verb 'prefer' to 'recommend' for giving suggestion.

× And you also and is also good.

✓ It is also good for you.

Original lacks clear subject-verb structure. Rephrase to 'It is also good for you' to express that the food is beneficial or tasty for the listener.

× Yes, I like different foods because it's change your taste and I actually recently I tried new cuisine Chinese dish and it's really was very delicious and like yummy so I'm.

✓ Yes, I like different foods because they change your taste, and recently I tried a new Chinese dish; it was really delicious and very tasty.

Mix of tenses and pronoun agreement errors: 'it's change your taste' should be 'they change your taste' (plural subject 'foods'). Remove redundant 'I actually recently I'. Use past tense 'tried' and 'it was' for the recently eaten dish. Replace colloquial 'yummy so I'm' with concise 'very tasty'.

× As I was still I like many foods like fast foods.

✓ Even then I liked many foods, including fast food.

Tense inconsistency: 'As I was still' is unclear; use 'Even then' or 'Back then' and past tense 'liked' to describe past preferences. 'Fast food' is uncountable here.

× So then now I like only healthy foods and salads because it's maintain your health and good for your health.

✓ Now I only like healthy foods and salads because they help maintain good health.

Use present simple 'like' for current preference. Replace 'it's maintain your health' with 'they help maintain good health' for correct subject-verb agreement and wording. Avoid repeating 'good for your health'.

× Salad is good for your health and it's like different and natural.

✓ Salads are good for your health; they are natural and varied.

Use plural 'Salads' to speak generally, and plural pronoun 'they'. 'Different' is vague; 'varied' or 'a variety of' is clearer. Maintain parallel adjectives 'natural and varied'.

× Natural food is very good for your health. So I like so I prefer.

✓ Natural food is very good for your health, so I prefer it.

Combine sentences to fix fragment 'So I like so I prefer.' Provide clear object 'it' after 'prefer' to complete the sentence and link the idea logically.