Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and clear which is good, but it's very short. To improve, add a brief reason and a specific detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: My favorite food is biryani because I love the rich blend of spices and tender meat. For example, I enjoy it most when it’s made with basmati rice and slow-cooked lamb, which gives it a deep, aromatic flavour.

제안: The answer is confusing and repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence about favourite childhood foods, then give 1–2 specific examples with short reasons. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' and avoid repetition.

예시: When I was young, I liked a variety of foods. For example, I often ate biryani because my family made it on special days, and I also enjoyed burgers because they were convenient and tasty.

제안: You answer the question and give seasonal examples, but there is hesitation and repetition. Make sentences more fluent and specific: use linking phrases ('in summer,' 'in spring') and give one clear example per season with a brief reason.

예시: Yes, I do. In summer I usually eat oily fish like ilsha with water rice because it helps me feel full and is widely available. In spring I eat fresh strawberries and other fruits because they are in season and taste better then.

제안: The response shows some change but has grammar errors and repetition. State clearly whether your favourite has changed, give a reason for the change, and use one linking word like 'however' or 'now'. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I loved mangoes because they were sweet and abundant, however now I prefer pizza because I enjoy trying different toppings and it’s popular where I live.

× A sense of diversity can be seen that when I answer this question to be specific, biryani Biryani is one of the most prominent food in in my prominent food in my choice list, Burger is also burger is also in my choice list.

✓ When I answer this question specifically, a sense of diversity can be seen: biryani is one of my top choices, and burger is also on my list.

This original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors (ID 26). It repeats phrases, has word order problems, and uses redundant fragments (e.g., 'biryani Biryani', 'in in', 'prominent food in my choice list'). To fix it, combine ideas into clear clauses, remove repetition, correct word order ('one of my top choices' instead of 'one of the most prominent food in in my prominent food in my choice list'), and use proper punctuation to separate items in a list. Suggestion: State the main point first, avoid repetitions, and use straightforward list structure like 'X is one of my top choices, and Y is also on my list.'

× I eat different foods at different times of the year. More specifically in summer time I eat I eat some kinds of some kinds of fish like ilsha and water rice.

✓ I eat different foods at different times of the year. More specifically, in summer I eat some kinds of fish like ilsha and dishes such as watery rice.

The issues here are repetition and awkward phrasing, falling under sentence structure errors (ID 26) and wording. The original repeats phrases ('I eat I eat', 'some kinds of some kinds of') and uses the nonstandard term 'water rice'. Correct by removing repetitions, placing the time phrase correctly ('in summer' not 'in summer time'), and using a clearer noun phrase ('dishes such as watery rice' or 'watered rice' depending on intended meaning). Suggestion: Avoid repeating clauses, place time expressions after commas, and use standard food names or short explanations if a regional term is used.

× When it when it comes to spring spring season, I eat many kinds of food like strawberry.

✓ When it comes to the spring season, I eat many kinds of foods such as strawberries.

This sentence has repetition and singular/plural mismatch issues (IDs 26 and 1). 'When it when it comes to spring spring season' repeats words; 'many kinds of food like strawberry' mixes plural quantifier with singular noun. Fix by removing duplicates and matching plural forms ('many kinds of foods' or 'many kinds of food' with 'strawberries'). Suggestion: Use 'strawberries' for plural, and avoid repeating words; 'When it comes to the spring season' is a correct time clause.

× Well, when I when I was a child, I were I ate, I ate a lot of mango.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I ate a lot of mangoes.

The original mixes past tense forms and has subject-verb agreement errors (IDs 5 and 27). 'I were' is incorrect because 'were' is not the correct past form for the first person singular; the correct past form is 'was' or simply use the past tense verb 'ate'. Also 'mango' should be plural ('mangoes') when referring to 'a lot of'. Remove repetitions ('when I when I', 'I were I ate, I ate'). Suggestion: Use a single clear past-tense clause: 'When I was a child, I ate a lot of mangoes.'

× But right now I eat a pizza, which is, which is a delicious food in my country.

✓ But right now I eat pizza, which is a popular delicious food in my country.

This sentence has article misuse and repetition issues (IDs 22 and 26). Saying 'I eat a pizza' suggests a single pizza rather than the food in general; use the uncountable/general form 'pizza' when speaking about a type of food. The phrase 'which is, which is' is repetitive. Clarify by using 'popular' or 'popular and delicious' if intended. Suggestion: For general favorite foods, omit the article: 'I eat pizza' or 'My favorite now is pizza.' Remove repeated fragments and use clear adjectives.