Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar, and include specific details (ingredients, taste, occasions). Use a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and a linking word. Avoid repetition and keep to maximum 4–5 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is Mohinga, which is a traditional Burmese breakfast dish. It is a fish-based soup served with rice noodles and flavored with ginger, lemongrass and turmeric, so it tastes fragrant and slightly spicy. Because it is light yet nutritious, I often eat it in the morning before work. Overall, Mohinga is comforting and reminds me of home.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and then add one specific example from childhood with a reason and a linking word. Avoid filler phrases and repeat words.

예시: When I was young, I didn’t have a single favourite; I enjoyed many dishes. For example, I especially liked sweet rice and fried bananas because my grandmother cooked them for special family gatherings. As a result, those snacks bring back warm memories for me.

제안: Answer directly whether your diet changes seasonally, then give one or two clear examples with linking words. Pronounce and name dishes accurately and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: Not really; my diet stays similar throughout the year. However, I do try seasonal dishes occasionally, such as hot soups in the rainy season and lighter salads in summer. For instance, I enjoy Chinese rice noodle soup during colder months, but I usually return to Burmese favourites for comfort.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence answering the question, then briefly explain why or give an example of any small change. Use one linking word to connect idea and avoid repetition.

예시: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed since I was a child. I have always loved Mohinga because it reminds me of family breakfasts, and although I sometimes try new cuisines, I always come back to it.

× My favorite food is Mahinka is Burmese food is super tasty and very very good for morning breakfast is our national food.

✓ My favorite food is Mahinka. It is a Burmese dish; it is very tasty and good for breakfast, and it is our national food.

The original sentence has several article and sentence structure issues (Grammar Problem Type IDs 22 and 26). Separate ideas into sentences, add appropriate articles ('a Burmese dish') and linking words, and avoid repeating 'is'. Use punctuation to clarify meaning. Suggestion: split into shorter sentences and include 'a' before countable noun 'Burmese dish'.

× Also it's made with fish soup and with noodle.

✓ Also it's made with fish soup and noodles.

The phrase 'with noodle' is incorrect: 'noodle' should be plural or countable with an article (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). Use 'noodles' for the general food. Remove the extra 'with' to make the sentence natural. Suggestion: use 'noodles' or 'a noodle' depending on meaning.

× It's super super healthy and it's good.

✓ It's very healthy and delicious.

Repetition 'super super' is informal and 'good' is vague. This sentence is grammatically acceptable but can be improved (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). Use more appropriate adjectives: 'healthy' and 'delicious'.

× I don't have like some specific food that when I was young, like when I was little, I don't have like special.

✓ I didn't have any specific favorite food when I was young; I loved all kinds of food.

The original uses present tense and awkward pronouns/phrases for a past context (Grammar Problem Type ID 12 and 5). Use past tense 'didn't have' for a past time frame and replace 'some specific'/'like special' with 'any specific favorite' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple past when referring to childhood.

× I love all the food.

✓ I loved all kinds of food.

Context refers to childhood, so use past tense 'loved' rather than present 'love' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Also 'all the food' is awkward; 'all kinds of food' is more natural. Suggestion: match tense to the time reference.

× Yeah, not really.

✓ Not really.

This is a short answer; it's acceptable. No grammatical change needed; keep concise. (Grammar Problem Type ID 6)

× I'm try Chinese cuisine.

✓ I try Chinese cuisine.

'I'm try' mixes present continuous and base verb incorrectly; correct is either 'I'm trying' or 'I try' depending on meaning (Grammar Problem Type IDs 8 and 26). If meaning is habitual, use 'I try Chinese cuisine'; if currently attempting, use 'I'm trying Chinese cuisine'.

× It's called lousy fun and time food.

✓ It's called loh sha fun and tamarind food.

The original seems to mispronounce or misspell dish names; this is a lexical issue rather than grammar. If referring to specific dishes, use correct names. Ensure correct spelling and spacing. (Grammar Problem Type ID 12)

× Sometime it's pretty good.

✓ Sometimes it's pretty good.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb of frequency) instead of 'Sometime' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Suggestion: place adverb before verb for clarity.

× But marry Burmese.

✓ But mainly Burmese.

'Marry' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'mainly' (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Use the adverb 'mainly' to indicate preference.

× Uh, Burmese food is my comfortable food 'cause I when I was.

✓ Burmese food is my comfort food because I grew up with it.

Original has fragmented clause and wrong word choice: 'comfortable food' should be 'comfort food', and the clause 'I when I was' is incomplete (Grammar Problem Type IDs 16 and 26). Use 'because' and complete the reason with past tense to match context.

× Umm, not really.

✓ Not really.

This short reply is acceptable; no tense change needed. Keep concise. (Grammar Problem Type ID 6)

× My favorite food is all the time my favorite food one I'm not changing my.

✓ My favorite food has always been the same; it hasn't changed.

Original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'has always been' to indicate a continuing state from past to present and present perfect negative 'hasn't changed' to express no change (Grammar Problem Type IDs 6 and 26). Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct tense for continuity.