Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct minor grammar, and add one clear reason with a linking phrase. Avoid repetition (don’t repeat “biryani” too many times) and keep to at most 4–5 sentences.

예시: I love biryani because it’s a traditional dish that reminds me of home and family. For example, my mother makes a spicy, tender chicken biryani that always brings us together at celebrations. Besides the flavor, I enjoy the mix of aromatic spices and fluffy rice, which makes it very comforting.

제안: Fix grammar and unclear phrase (“be the size” is incorrect). State a clear topic sentence, give a reason or a brief example, and use linking words. Keep sentences coherent and avoid small grammar mistakes.

예시: When I was young I loved pizza, especially pepperoni. My mother often made simple pizzas at home, and I always asked her to add extra cheese because I loved the gooey texture. Because of that, pizza was my favorite comfort food growing up.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure, use linking words (for example, 'in summer' and 'in winter'), and give one specific example per season. Keep answers natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In summer I prefer light meals and salads, such as watermelon and cucumber, because they help me stay hydrated. In winter I enjoy heavier dishes with meat, like roasted beef stews, to keep warm.

제안: Correct minor grammar in the opening sentence and shorten slightly. State the change clearly, give a reason, and provide a brief example of current preferences. Use a linking word like 'however' to contrast childhood and now.

예시: My favourite food has changed since childhood. As a child I loved pasta and cheesy meals; however, now I prefer spicier dishes and enjoy a variety of beef and chicken recipes. I also like trying new cuisines because I appreciate bolder flavors and different cooking styles.

× My favorite food is biryani and of course it's the traditional food in our country and just remind me of my family.

✓ My favorite food is biryani, and of course it's a traditional food in our country and it just reminds me of my family.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'traditional food' and incorrect verb form 'remind'. Use 'a' because biryani is one of many traditional foods. Use 'reminds' (third person singular) to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also add a comma and 'it' to improve sentence flow. Grammar problem type ID:22

× My mom used to eat biryani and it's the best biryani ever.

✓ My mom used to make biryani, and it's the best biryani ever.

The meaning intends that the mother prepared biryani, so the verb should be 'make' rather than 'eat'. This is a lexical choice error related to pronoun/reference of action. Replace 'eat' with 'make' to convey correct meaning. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I just love the spices, the tenderness, the chicken, everything about it.

✓ I just love the spices, the tenderness, the chicken — everything about it.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but benefits from punctuation to show list completeness. No major preposition error; keep as is but add punctuation. (If forced to classify, punctuation/structure improved.) Grammar problem type ID:11

× When I was young I loved to be the size, especially the pepperoni flavor.

✓ When I was young I loved pizza, especially the pepperoni flavor.

'Loved to be the size' is incorrect and likely a misphrase. Replace with 'loved pizza' to fit meaning. Maintain past tense 'loved' to match 'when I was young'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× My mom used to made it for me and it was so tasty and simple and I remember I insisted her to add some cheese.

✓ My mom used to make it for me; it was so tasty and simple, and I remember I insisted that she add some cheese.

'Used to' should be followed by the base verb 'make', not past 'made'. The verb 'insisted' requires a clause 'insisted that she add' or 'insisted on her adding'; 'insisted her to add' is ungrammatical. Use 'insisted that she add' to keep past narrative. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I just love cheese.

✓ I just loved cheese.

Context is past-tense narrative 'When I was young'; change 'love' to past 'loved' for tense consistency. This is a pronoun/verb tense consistency issue. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes I different meals during different season like doing summer I used to eat light meals and salads like the watermelon.

✓ Yes. I eat different meals during different seasons. For example, during summer I eat light meals and salads like watermelon.

Original sentence has missing verbs and incorrect structure: 'I different meals' lacks a verb, 'season' should be plural 'seasons', 'doing summer' is incorrect. Correct by supplying verbs and proper noun forms and maintain present habitual tense for general habit. Replace 'the watermelon' with 'watermelon' (no article) when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It really helps me to keep hydrating throughout the day.

✓ It really helps me stay hydrated throughout the day.

Use 'stay hydrated' rather than 'keep hydrating'. 'Keep hydrating' implies continuing the action of drinking; 'stay hydrated' is the natural idiom. Also use 'stay' + adjective rather than 'keep' + present participle. Grammar problem type ID:11

× But during winter I'm more into the meat.

✓ But during winter I'm more into meat.

Use 'meat' without the definite article when speaking generally. Tense 'I'm' (I am) is fine for current habitual preference. Adjust article. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Is my favorite food has changed since childhood.

✓ Has my favorite food changed since childhood?

Original word order is incorrect for a question. Use auxiliary 'Has' + subject + past participle 'changed' to form correct present perfect question. Also add question mark. Grammar problem type ID:26

× When I was young, I used to love pastas and other cheesy meals, but now I prefer spicy dishes and I enjoy beef and chicken recipes.

✓ When I was young, I used to love pasta and other cheesy meals, but now I prefer spicy dishes and enjoy beef and chicken recipes.

Use uncountable 'pasta' rather than plural 'pastas' when referring generally. 'Used to love' is correct past habit. Remove redundant 'I' before 'enjoy' for better flow. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I also like trying new cuisines because I appreciate bolder flavor.

✓ I also like trying new cuisines because I appreciate bolder flavors.

'Flavor' should be plural 'flavors' when speaking generally. Alternatively 'bolder flavor' could be 'bolder flavor profiles', but plural 'flavors' is simplest. This fixes adjective-noun agreement and countability. Grammar problem type ID:13