Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating your current favourite or that it changes, then give one specific reason and a short example. Use correct tense and avoid repetition.

예시: I don't have one single favourite food because it has changed over time. Since I started travelling as a child, I often try local dishes wherever I go, so what I like depends on the country I'm visiting — for example, I loved pasta in Italy and sushi in Japan.

제안: Answer with correct tense and a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail or example. Use linking words for coherence and correct vocabulary (e.g., vegetables, salad).

예시: When I was younger, I enjoyed eating vegetables because my mother always made fresh salads. For instance, she would mix lettuce, cucumber and tomatoes and dress them with lemon and olive oil, which made me like healthy food.

제안: Focus on seasonality or travel as the reason. Begin with a topic sentence (Yes/No), then explain briefly with one or two specific examples. Reduce hesitations and grammar errors (e.g., 'Japan' not 'Japanese').

예시: Yes, I often eat different foods at different times, mostly because I travel. For example, in summer I enjoy cold Mediterranean salads in Italy, while in winter I prefer hearty stews I tried in Egypt.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then add a specific contrast between past and present favourites. Use correct tense and a linking phrase to show change over time.

예시: Yes, it has changed over time. As a child I preferred simple home-cooked vegetables, but after travelling to many countries I now enjoy a variety of international dishes such as sushi and pasta.

× I travel since I was a child.

✓ I have been traveling since I was a child.

This sentence uses 'since' to refer to a starting point in the past continuing to the present, so the present perfect continuous (have been + -ing) or present perfect simple (have + past participle) is required. Using simple present 'travel' is incorrect for an action that began in the past and continues. Suggestion: use 'I have been traveling since I was a child.' or 'I have traveled since I was a child.'

× When I was younger, I really enjoy vegetable 'cause my mom's always make me a fresh salads and the other things.

✓ When I was younger, I really enjoyed vegetables because my mom always made me fresh salads and other things.

The first clause refers to a past time ('When I was younger'), so the verb should be in the past tense ('enjoyed'). 'Vegetable' needs plural 'vegetables' to match general reference. 'Because' is the correct conjunction instead of informal 'cause. 'My mom's always make' is incorrect: 'my mom always made' matches past time. 'A fresh salads' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'fresh salads' or 'a fresh salad'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and correct noun/plural forms.

× I do eat different food because I love traveling.

✓ I do eat different foods because I love traveling.

The noun 'food' in this context should be plural 'foods' to indicate different kinds of food. The structure 'do eat' is not incorrect but unnecessary; 'I eat different foods' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'foods' when referring to various types and avoid unnecessary auxiliary 'do' unless for emphasis.

× I've been to Japanes, I've been to Italy, I've been trying all of the local dishes all across the world.

✓ I've been to Japan, I've been to Italy, and I've tried all kinds of local dishes around the world.

Country name 'Japanese' is the adjective; the correct country name is 'Japan'. 'I've been trying' conflicts with 'I've been to' listing completed visits; use 'I've tried' (present perfect simple) to indicate experience. 'All of the local dishes all across the world' is wordy and slightly ungrammatical; 'all kinds of local dishes around the world' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct country names and consistent tense for experiences ('I've tried').

× I've been to Egyptian, I've been to Japanese, I've been to Italy, I've been trying all of the local dishes all across the world.

✓ I've been to Egypt, I've been to Japan, I've been to Italy, and I've tried local dishes all across the world.

This repeats issues: use proper country nouns ('Egypt', 'Japan') rather than adjectives ('Egyptian', 'Japanese') and use 'tried' instead of 'been trying' to list experiences. Keep parallel structure when listing experiences. Suggestion: ensure correct country names and consistent verb forms.

× Yes, it has changed over time because I'm traveling since I was a kid.

✓ Yes, it has changed over time because I have been traveling since I was a kid.

The clause 'since I was a kid' indicates an action that started in the past and continues, so present perfect continuous 'have been traveling' is required rather than simple present 'I'm traveling'. Using 'I'm traveling since...' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'I have been traveling since...' to show action continuing from past to present.

× I travel since I was a child.

✓ I have been traveling since I was a child.

Duplicate of earlier but focusing on preposition/time expression: 'since' requires perfect tense to link past starting point to present. Suggestion: use present perfect continuous or present perfect simple with 'since'.

× my mom's always make me a fresh salads

✓ my mom always made me fresh salads

'Mom's' here was likely contracted but resulted in incorrect subject-verb agreement. For past context, use 'my mom always made'. Also remove the article 'a' before plural 'salads'. Suggestion: avoid contractions that cause ambiguity and ensure verb agrees with tense and subject.

× a fresh salads

✓ fresh salads

The phrase uses singular article 'a' with plural noun 'salads', which is incorrect. Use 'a fresh salad' (singular) or 'fresh salads' (plural) according to meaning. Suggestion: match articles with noun number.

× I've been trying all of the local dishes all across the world.

✓ I've tried local dishes all across the world.

Present perfect continuous 'have been trying' suggests ongoing action; when speaking of past experiences at different trips, present perfect simple 'have tried' is more appropriate. Also remove redundant 'all of' and 'all across' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'I've tried' to list experiences and keep phrasing concise.