Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と語彙の正確さを改善してください。ここでの“NATO”はおそらく“natto”（納豆）を指しているはずなので、単語の発音とつづりを正しく使うことが重要です。また、話の構成を明確にして、主題文の後に理由や具体例を2つ以内で述べ、冗長な表現を避けてください。例：主語文→理由→具体例（短く）。さらに、「on the rice」より自然な表現は“with rice”や“on rice”です。

예시: My favourite food is natto. I like it because it is healthy and has a strong, unique flavour. For example, I usually eat it with hot rice for breakfast, which makes me feel energetic.

제안: 文法と流暢さに注意してください。過去の好みを述べるときは過去形を一貫して使い、冗長なフレーズや繰り返しを避けます。また、“it's really oily”は現在形なので過去の経験に合わせて“they were quite greasy”などに直すと自然です。最後の文は意味が曖昧なので、状況（例：運動の後に食べると美味しく感じた）を明確に述べてください。

예시: When I was younger, I loved fast food, especially hamburgers and chicken nuggets. They were quite greasy, but they tasted great after playing sports, so eating them felt like a reward.

제안: 語彙の正確さと文法を改善してください。例えば“it's it always be sell supermarket and convenience store”は不自然なので“they are always sold in supermarkets and convenience stores”と直します。“Salman”はおそらく“salmon”の誤りです。季節の食べ物について話す際は、季節→特定の料理→入手方法や理由を短く述べる構成にしてください。

예시: Yes. In spring I often eat sakura mochi because they are sold in supermarkets and convenience stores during the cherry blossom season. In summer I like to eat grilled salmon, which is very popular in Japan and perfect for hot weather.

제안: 発音の訂正と自然な表現を使ってください。“NATO”→“natto”。また、理由を簡潔に述べて会話を豊かにしましょう。現在完了形や現在形の混同を避け、最後の文は“I don't get bored with it”のように自然な表現にしてください。

예시: No, my favourite food hasn't changed — I still love natto. I think I never get bored of it because it is healthy and I enjoy the sticky texture and salty flavour.

× My favorite food is NATO. NATO is really nice and it is healthy as well. When I eat it on the rice it feels really happy.

✓ My favorite food is natto. Natto is really tasty and healthy as well. When I eat it with rice, I feel really happy.

'NATO' is a proper noun referring to an international organization; the student meant 'natto' (fermented soybeans). 'Nice' is grammatically acceptable but 'tasty' is more natural for food. Use 'with rice' not 'on the rice' to indicate accompaniment. Change 'it feels really happy' to 'I feel really happy' because feelings are experienced by the person eating, not the food. Also change 'feels' to 'feel' to agree with subject 'I'. Suggestion: Learn correct food vocabulary and prepositional phrases for accompaniment (use 'with' + food). Use first person for personal feelings.

× When I was younger I would love fast food, especially hamburger and chicken Nuggets.

✓ When I was younger, I loved fast food, especially hamburgers and chicken nuggets.

Use simple past 'loved' to describe habitual past preference. 'Would love' is incorrect here for past habitual state. Use plural forms 'hamburgers' and 'chicken nuggets' when speaking generally. Capitalization: 'Nuggets' should be lowercase. Suggestion: Use simple past for past habits or 'used to'.

× I loved it, but it's really oily.

✓ I loved it, but it was really oily.

The speaker is referring to past experience, so the second clause should be in past tense 'was' not present 'is'. 'It' correctly refers to the food. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent within past narratives.

× But after sports, when I was when I ate, it's really happy.

✓ But after sports, when I ate it, I felt really happy.

Original sentence has extra words 'when I was' and mixes tenses and subjects. Remove the redundant 'when I was'. Use past tense 'felt' because the event is in the past. Use 'I' as the experiencer of the feeling. Suggestion: Simplify clauses and ensure correct subject and tense.

× Yes uh, for example, in spring I always eat sakura mochi. It's it always be sell supermarket and convenience store.

✓ Yes, for example, in spring I always eat sakura mochi. It is always sold at supermarkets and convenience stores.

'It's it always be sell' is ungrammatical. Use passive present simple 'is sold' to describe availability. Use plural 'supermarkets' and 'convenience stores' and include the preposition 'at'. Suggestion: Use 'is sold at' for where items are available and correct plural nouns.

× In summer I always eat Salman. Salman is really nice. It's really popular in Japan even 4.

✓ In summer I always eat salmon. Salmon is really tasty. It's very popular in Japan, especially during summer.

'Salman' is a misspelling of 'salmon'. 'Nice' is better expressed as 'tasty' for food. The phrase 'even 4' is unclear; likely the speaker meant 'even more' or 'especially' or 'particularly during summer'. I replaced it with a clearer phrase. Suggestion: Check spelling for food items and avoid numeric fragments; use clear adverbs like 'very' or 'especially'.

× No, actually I love NATO now, but when I was a child I loved NATO too. Uh, I don't know why I'm not get bored.

✓ No, actually I love natto now, and when I was a child I loved natto too. I don't know why I don't get bored of it.

Use 'natto' not 'NATO'. Keep tense consistent: 'love' (present) and 'loved' (past) are fine. The phrase 'I'm not get bored' is ungrammatical — use 'I don't get bored' or 'I don't get bored of it.' Suggestion: Use correct present simple negative 'do not' + base verb and include 'of it' after 'bored' when referring to something.