Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sai thì. Cụ thể: (1) Nói trực tiếp câu chủ đề một câu ngắn (ví dụ: “My favourite food is bánh mì.”). (2) Thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ với liên từ để giải thích lý do (because/so/therefore) và chi tiết cụ thể (when I eat it, who eats it, giá cả). (3) Sử dụng thì đúng (present simple) và sửa lỗi phát âm từ mượn nếu cần.

예시: My favourite food is bánh mì. I often eat it for breakfast because it’s quick and affordable. For example, when I’m in a hurry to go to work or school, I usually grab a bánh mì from a street stall because it’s cheap and tasty.

제안: Cần sử dụng thì quá khứ một cách rõ ràng và trình bày ý mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ở quá khứ (I liked…). (2) Tránh dùng cụm từ mơ hồ (‘every like truthful’ không rõ nghĩa) — thay bằng mô tả cụ thể (e.g., fried chicken and french fries). (3) Thêm lý do hoặc cảm xúc ngắn gọn với liên từ (because/so) và kiểm soát số câu không quá 5 câu.

예시: When I was young, I liked fried chicken and French fries. I loved them because they tasted crunchy and salty. I often had them as a treat and I usually drank Coca‑Cola with my meal.

제안: Cần rõ ràng về mùa hoặc thời điểm trong năm và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Cụ thể: (1) Nêu trực tiếp câu chủ đề (Yes/No, then elaboration). (2) Nêu ví dụ cụ thể cho từng thời điểm (e.g., during holidays, in winter, during exams). (3) Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (for example/so/when) và sửa từ sai (bunny → bánh mì/sandwich).

예시: Yes, I do. For example, during festivals or holidays I usually eat special dishes like sticky rice or noodles. When I’m busy with exams I often eat quick meals such as sandwiches or bánh mì because they are convenient.

제안: Cần dùng thì chính xác và tránh câu không rõ nghĩa. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời rõ ràng (Yes, it has/No, it hasn’t) với câu giải thích ở thì hiện tại hoàn thành/simple past. (2) Tránh từ không đúng nghĩa (‘drink food’, ‘drug food’) — thay bằng cụm rõ ràng (fast food, processed food). (3) Đưa lý do cụ thể về sức khỏe hoặc khẩu vị và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I preferred fast food like burgers and fries, but since I turned 18 I prefer traditional Vietnamese dishes because they are tastier and healthier than processed fast food.

× My favorite food is one way, this is a Vietnamese traditional food or banh MI is very delicious.

✓ My favorite food is banh mi, a traditional Vietnamese dish, and it is very delicious.

The original sentence has run-on structure and awkward phrasing. Combine ideas with commas and conjunctions, use consistent noun phrase 'banh mi' and add 'a' for 'a traditional Vietnamese dish'. This clarifies meaning and corrects sentence structure. Suggestion: Break ideas into clearer clauses and use articles for countable nouns.

× I can eat when I don't have many time to to eat breakfast and when I don't know what I eat in the morning I will eat banh MI and Bani is very cheap for student and worker.

✓ I can eat it when I don't have much time for breakfast, and when I don't know what to eat in the morning I will eat banh mi because it is very cheap for students and workers.

Errors: 'many time' should be 'much time' (uncountable), missing object 'it' for 'eat', extra 'to', incorrect infinitive structure 'what I eat' should be 'what to eat', capitalization consistency, 'Bani' typo, missing articles and plural forms 'students' and 'workers'. Suggestions: Use 'much' with uncountable nouns, include objects for verbs, and use infinitive 'what to eat' for purpose.

× When I was young every like truthful because it's a very delicious and I always smell watering when I saw it.

✓ When I was young I liked it very much because it was very delicious, and my mouth would water whenever I saw it.

Problems: 'every like truthful' is nonsensical; verb tense and form incorrect ('like' should be 'liked'), adjective/adverb order and choice wrong, 'smell watering' incorrect collocation; 'when I saw it' needs past habitual meaning 'whenever I saw it'. Suggestions: Use past tense 'liked', correct collocations like 'mouth would water' or 'my mouth watered', and 'whenever' for habitual past.

× I like the state of a chicken and French fries and I always drink Coca-Cola.

✓ I liked fried chicken and French fries, and I always drank Coca-Cola.

Tense inconsistency: question asked about childhood, so use past tense 'liked' and 'drank'. 'the state of a chicken' is unclear; replace with 'fried chicken' or the intended dish. Suggestions: Match tense to context and use clear noun phrases.

× I eat all of a type of food like I eat or noodles when near test that holiday or I eat or Bunny or sandwich when I go to school for quickly and.

✓ I eat many kinds of food: for example, I eat noodles during holiday seasons or before tests, and I eat buns or sandwiches when I go to school because they are quick.

Problems: word order and phrasing ('all of a type of food'), incorrect connectors, 'Bunny' likely 'bun', 'for quickly' incorrect adverb placement. Suggestions: Use 'many kinds of food' and give clear examples; place adverbs correctly and use 'because' for reason.

× Yes, it changed a lot when I was young.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot since I was young.

The original mixes past reference with present relevance. Use present perfect 'has changed' plus 'since' to show change from childhood to now. Suggestion: Use present perfect for actions that started in past and continue to present relevance.

× I only love drink food, but when I 18 years old I love Vietnamese traditional food such As for All Bomba, One Way Gundam and so on.

✓ I only liked fast food before, but when I was 18 years old I started to like Vietnamese traditional food such as pho, banh mi, and so on.

Errors: 'love drink food' unclear; likely 'fast food'. Tense mismatch: use past 'liked' for former habit, and 'started to like' for change at age 18. 'such As for All Bomba, One Way Gundam' are incorrect names; replace with plausible examples 'pho, banh mi'. Suggestions: Use clear vocabulary and correct past tense forms, and provide accurate examples.

× Because it be it's very, uh, delicious and healthier than drug food.

✓ Because it is very delicious and healthier than fast food.

Issues: 'it be it's' is ungrammatical, 'drug food' incorrect word choice; likely 'fast food'. Replace with 'it is' and comparative 'healthier than fast food'. Suggestions: Use 'is' for present statements and choose correct vocabulary.