Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较自然但存在语法和用词小错误，句子稍长且有重复信息。可改进点：1) 用更准确的词（例如把 integrations 改为 ingredients 或 varieties）；2) 把长句分成主题句和两三句支持句，避免冗长；3) 使用衔接词使逻辑更清晰，例如 Firstly, Also 等；4) 提供更具体细节，比如你最喜欢的配料或一次难忘的吃火锅经历。

예시: My favourite food is hot pot. I like it because the broth is spicy and full of flavour, and there are many different ingredients to choose from, such as beef slices, tofu and leafy vegetables. Also, hot pot is a social meal — I usually go with friends and we chat while cooking and sharing food.

제안: 时态使用不一致（当谈童年时应使用过去式），部分表达重复且可更具体。可改进点：1) 使用过去时（preferred, made me feel happy）；2) 用更具体的细节（例如最喜欢的糖果或记忆中的场景）；3) 控制句子长度，第一句做主题句，后续用1-2句支持。

예시: When I was young I preferred sweet treats like strawberry candies and chocolate biscuits because they tasted delicious and made me happy. I remember eating them as an after-school snack while doing homework, and my parents would sometimes buy them as a reward.

제안: 回答清晰且有对比，但个别词汇不够自然（例如 'Liang mian' 可译为 'cold noodles'，'sauce' 用法不当）。可改进点：1) 用更地道的表达（cold noodles, broths 或 stews）；2) 加入具体例子或频率信息使内容更丰富；3) 使用连接词如 In summer/ In winter 已做得很好，可再加一两句扩展。

예시: Yes. Because Chongqing has very hot summers and cold winters, I choose different foods. In summer I often eat cold dishes like cold noodles and salads to feel refreshed. In winter I prefer hot dishes such as hearty soups, spicy stews or hot pot to keep warm.

제안: 内容逻辑清晰，但有时态和语法错误（如 like -> liked，I'm grow up -> as I've grown up），以及词汇搭配问题（nutritious and balance -> nutritious and balanced）。可改进点：1) 修正时态和语法；2) 用具体改变举例（例如减少零食，增加鱼和蔬菜）；3) 保持句子简洁并用连接词衔接原因和结果。

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I liked sweets and junk food such as candy and chips, but as I have grown up I've realized health is more important. Now I try to eat more nutritious, balanced meals with plenty of vegetables, lean protein like fish, and much less sugar.

× I often go with my friend so we can relax and have a good chat while sharing food.

✓ I often go with my friends so we can relax and have a good chat while sharing food.

句子本身動詞形式沒問題，但原句中的 'my friend' 與語境（通常與多人一起吃火鍋）和後文'sharing food' 不太一致，且更常見的表達是 'my friends'（複數）。若原意真為單人，則不必改。但如要保持自然，用複數較合適。

× When I was young, I prefer sweet treats such as candies and strawberries because they tasted delicious and make me feel happy.

✓ When I was young, I preferred sweet treats such as candies and strawberries because they tasted delicious and made me feel happy.

這句是在談過去的習慣或狀態，應使用過去式 'preferred' 與 'made' 而不是現在式 'prefer'、'make'。時態不一致會引起混淆，應全部使用過去式。

× I often ate them as snacks after school, and my parents would sometimes buy them as a special treat.

✓ I often ate them as snacks after school, and my parents would sometimes buy them as a special treat.

此句其實語法正確，主語與動詞一致，時態也一致，無需修改。此處列出是為遵守只修正符合清單的錯誤，但實際上該句無錯誤。

× Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because Chongqing is very hot in summer and cold in winter.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because Chongqing is very hot in summer and cold in winter.

句子時態與內容一致，沒有語法錯誤。保留原句。

× In summer, I often eat cold light dishes such as Liang mian and salads, while in winter I prefer hot meals like soup, sauce and even hot pot to keep warm.

✓ In summer, I often eat light cold dishes such as liangmian and salads, while in winter I prefer hot meals like soup, sauces and even hot pot to keep warm.

原句中 'cold light dishes' 的詞序不自然，應為 'light cold dishes' 或直接 'cold dishes'；'Liang mian'（涼麵）一般不需要大寫或可連成一詞 'liangmian'；'sauce' 應為複數 'sauces'（多種調味料/湯料）。這些改動使表達更自然且與名詞數一致。

× Yes, when I was a child I like eating sweet and junk food such as candy and chips.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked eating sweets and junk food such as candy and chips.

描述過去時的喜好應使用過去式 'liked'。此外 'sweet' 作為可數零食應用複數 'sweets'。保持時態一致能使句子清晰。

× But as I'm grow up I realize that health is more important.

✓ But as I grew up I realized that health was more important.

此處描述過去隨成長而轉變的認知，應使用過去式 'grew up' 和 'realized'，且後半句也可用過去式 'was' 或若表達現在仍然成立則 'is'。如果想表達現在仍然認為健康更重要，可改為 'I have realized that health is more important.'。

× So nowadays I try to eat more nutritious and balance meals with plenty of vegetables and less sugar.

✓ So nowadays I try to eat more nutritious and balanced meals with plenty of vegetables and less sugar.

原句中 'balance' 應為形容詞 'balanced' 來修飾 'meals'。此外 'nutritious and balanced' 兩形容詞並列需保持形態一致。