Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more specific and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the dish, then give a brief reason and one specific detail (flavour, texture, or when you eat it). Avoid repetition like "I like it very much." Keep to 2–3 sentences max and use linking words if adding details.

예시: My favourite food is kachi, a traditional rice-and-vegetable dish. I enjoy it because it has a rich, spicy flavour and a soft, comforting texture, so I often eat it at family gatherings.

제안: Give a clear, structured answer: start with the food name, then explain why you liked it and add a specific memory or context. Use linking words (because, so, when) and avoid hesitations or unclear fragments. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: When I was young, I loved pani puri because it was fun to eat and very flavourful. I often had it near my school with friends, so it reminds me of happy afternoons.

제안: Answer directly, then expand with a short reason and a specific example. Use linking words like "but" or "however" if contrasting. Avoid vague phrases like "I usually eat foods"; be precise about what you mean and keep sentences short and coherent.

예시: Not usually — I mainly eat the same types of food year-round. However, I sometimes prefer lighter salads and cold drinks in summer and heartier soups in winter when I crave warmth.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating whether your favourite has changed, then explain with reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, however, now) to make it coherent. Avoid repeating phrases like "it depends" several times.

예시: My favourite food hasn't really changed because I never had a single favourite; it depends on my mood. For example, as a child I liked street snacks, but now I enjoy both snacks and home-cooked meals depending on what I feel like eating.

× My favorite food is Kachi, I like it very much.

✓ My favorite food is Kachi. I like it very much.

Two independent clauses were joined with a comma, creating a comma splice. Use a period or conjunction. Also no article change needed. Suggestion: separate into two sentences or use 'and' to connect them.

× When I was young, I liked Fujika Belpuri Pani Puri very much because when? Schools. MMM. To.

✓ When I was young, I liked Fujika Belpuri Pani Puri very much because it was available at school.

The original has fragments and unclear phrasing. Convert fragments into a complete clause that explains the reason. Ensure subject and verb are present and the clause logically follows 'because'.

× No, I did not eat eat different foods at different times of the year.

✓ No, I do not eat different foods at different times of the year.

The question asks about general habitual behavior (present), so use the simple present, not past. Also there is a repeated word 'eat'. Suggestion: use 'do not eat' for habitual negatives.

× I usually eat foods. And depends on my cravings.

✓ I usually eat different foods, and it depends on my cravings.

Fragments: 'And depends on my cravings' lacks subject. Combine into one sentence with subject 'it' referring to choice of food, or rephrase: 'My choices depend on my cravings.' Ensure complete clause with subject and verb.

× I did not have any particular favorite food.

✓ I did not have any particular favorite food when I was a child.

The sentence is grammatical but context asks about change since childhood; adding 'when I was a child' clarifies time. If answering in present about past state, simple past 'did not have' is correct. Suggestion: include time phrase for clarity.

× It depends. It always depends on my mood.

✓ It depends; it always depends on my mood.

Repeated sentences are grammatical but can be combined. Use consistent present tense 'depends' for general truth. Suggestion: combine or shorten to avoid repetition: 'It always depends on my mood.'

× Whatever I feel like eating, whatever I crave.

✓ I eat whatever I feel like eating and whatever I crave.

Fragments lacking finite verb. To be a complete sentence, include a main verb such as 'I eat'. Maintain present tense for habitual action. Suggestion: use a single concise sentence: 'I eat whatever I crave.'