Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and directly answer the question first (Yes/No + brief reason), avoid redundancy, and use correct tense and articles. Add one linking phrase and a specific detail to enrich the reply. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because my phone has limited storage. However, if I did take pictures, I would prefer photographing flowers and natural scenes because I find their colors and details more interesting.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct small grammatical errors (use definite/indefinite articles, tense, and remove extra words). Add a linking word and a specific reason why you want to visit, and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, there is a new tower built near my city about three months ago. I would like to visit its bell tower because from the top you can see sweeping views of the city and nearby mountains, which would be great for photography and relaxing on a clear day.

× No, I don't take photos of the buildings.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings.

Using the definite article 'the' implies specific buildings known to speaker and listener; here the student speaks generally about buildings in general, so omit the article. Suggestion: use 'buildings' for general statements about a category.

× I don't have enough storage capacity on my mobile phone right now so I don't take photos of irrelevant things.

✓ I don't have enough storage capacity on my mobile phone right now, so I don't take photos of irrelevant things.

The sentence is grammatically correct in tense but needs a comma before 'so' to join clauses clearly. Suggestion: include appropriate punctuation to improve clarity.

× But if I had to, I will always take photos of flowers, nature, which is my favorite thing to look at.

✓ But if I had to, I would always take photos of flowers and nature, which are my favorite things to look at.

Conditional clause 'if I had to' is a second conditional and requires 'would' (not 'will') in the main clause. Also 'nature' and 'flowers' are plural concepts so use 'are' and plural noun phrase 'favorite things'. Use 'and' instead of a comma to list two items. Suggestion: match conditional structures (if + past => would + base) and ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects.

× There's a building constructed like 3 months ago near my city.

✓ There's a building constructed about three months ago near my city.

Use 'about' rather than 'like' for approximate time in formal English. Spell out small numbers in speech-writing as appropriate: 'three months'. The tense 'constructed ... ago' is acceptable because 'ago' anchors past time; keep past participle 'constructed' with the time expression. Suggestion: use 'about' for approximations and write numbers clearly.

× It is a big tower and I have learned that when you reach the on top of the bell tower you could see the amazing view of our city as well as the mountains.

✓ It is a big tower, and I have learned that when you reach the top of the bell tower you can see an amazing view of our city as well as the mountains.

Remove the extra article 'the' before 'on top' and use 'reach the top' not 'reach the on top'. Use 'can' to express general ability rather than 'could' which suggests conditional or past. Use the indefinite article 'an amazing view'. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: correct prepositional phrasing to 'reach the top' and choose appropriate modal 'can' for general statements.