Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法ミス、不自然な言い回し、繰り返しが多く、文の構造が崩れています。まずは簡潔なトピック文を作り、その後で理由や具体例を1つ加えてください。接続詞（because, so, however）を使って論理を明確にし、動詞の時制と形（例えば "I hardly take"）を正しく使いましょう。練習方法としては、質問ごとに①短い主張②理由③具体例の順で英語で2〜3回声に出して練習すると流暢性と正確さが同時に改善します。

예시: I don't usually take photos of buildings because I'm not very interested in architecture. For example, when I go out I prefer photographing people and street scenes, so I rarely focus on individual buildings.

제안: 回答は意図が明確で良いですが、文法（"I'm have interested"）と冗長表現が見られます。トピック文で直接答え（Yes/No + which one）を示し、その後に理由と具体例を続けてください。接続語（because, so, for example）を使い、単語の選択（"facility"は博物館には不自然なので単に "museums" や具体的な名前を使う）を改善しましょう。練習では博物館のどんな展示を見たいか具体的に1〜2点挙げると内容が豊かになります。

예시: Yes. I'd like to visit a history museum because I'm interested in history and religion. For example, I'd love to see exhibits about ancient civilizations to learn more about their beliefs and daily life.

× Well, though I'm into taking pictures these days, I hardly taking I I'm hardly taking pictures of buildings because I don't have any interested in buildings, uh, with, uh, specific buildings, I I.

✓ Well, though I'm into taking pictures these days, I hardly take pictures of buildings because I'm not interested in buildings, especially specific ones.

The student incorrectly used the progressive/gerund form 'taking' after 'hardly' where the simple present 'take' is required for habitual actions (Verb + -ing form error). Also 'have any interested' is ungrammatical; the correct adjective phrase is 'not interested in'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits (I hardly take...), and use 'interested in' with the adjective 'interested' describing the subject's feeling. Additional note: remove filler words for clarity and reorder 'specific buildings' to 'specific ones' to avoid repetition.

× Well, I I would like to visit a museum because I'm have interested in history and religion.

✓ Well, I would like to visit a museum because I'm interested in history and religion.

The sentence contains an incorrect verb form 'I'm have interested' which mixes present continuous 'I'm' with a present perfect/ adjective incorrectly. The correct form is the adjective 'interested' linked with the verb 'be' in present simple: 'I'm interested' or 'I am interested'. Suggestion: Use 'I'm interested in...' to express current interests; remove the extra auxiliary 'have'. This fixes tense and verb form so it matches the statement of current interest.

× To deepen my knowledge, I would like to visit these facilities. Facilities such as.

✓ To deepen my knowledge, I would like to visit such facilities as museums and historical sites.

The original is a sentence fragment and repeats 'Facilities' awkwardly. This is a sentence structure error: 'Facilities such as.' is incomplete. Suggestion: Combine into one full sentence and give examples after 'such as' to complete the thought. Also ensure the plural noun matches the example nouns 'museums and historical sites'.