Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is very short and includes a filler ("Uh"). To improve, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. For example, say why you take photos (interest in architecture, hobby) and mention when or what kinds of buildings you prefer. Keep it natural and avoid fillers.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I’m interested in architecture and design. For example, I like capturing old churches and modern glass facades when I travel, as they show different styles and moods.

제안: Your answer answers the question but is too brief. Expand with a reason and a brief detail using a linking word. Explain what attracts you to that building (collection, architecture, a specific exhibit) and when you might go. This adds content and shows coherence.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Art Museum because I’m fascinated by the Impressionist collection it houses. For instance, I hope to see a few famous paintings next summer and also admire the museum’s historic architecture.

× Yes, I take photos of buildings. Uh.

✓ Yes, I do. I take photos of buildings.

The original response includes an unnecessary filler 'Uh' and a slightly awkward full answer. The question 'Do you take photos of buildings?' is a yes/no question; a natural response is a short answer plus clarification: 'Yes, I do.' followed by 'I take photos of buildings.' This fixes sentence structure by providing a complete, concise short answer and removing the filler. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I do.' for short answers to yes/no questions and avoid fillers like 'Uh' in speaking tests. ID:26

× I want to visit the Art Museum.

✓ I want to visit the art museum.

The phrase 'the Art Museum' capitalizes 'Art Museum' as if it were a proper noun; unless referring to a specific institution named 'Art Museum', 'art museum' is a common noun and should be lowercase with the definite article 'the'. This is an article/capitalization matter related to 'there be' and article usage; per the listed types, choose 'There be issue' (ID:3) to indicate incorrect article/reference. Suggestion: use 'the art museum' when speaking generally about visiting an art museum, or use the official name (for example, 'the Art Museum of XYZ') if it is a proper noun. ID:3