Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more accurate, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct subject–verb agreement, avoid contradictory distances, and give one or two specific supporting details linked logically (use linking words like "however" or "but"). Keep answers under five sentences.

예시: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. The neighbourhood mainly has low-rise houses and small shops. However, there are high-rise towers about 40 kilometres away in Egypt's new capital, which I sometimes visit for work and sightseeing.

제안: Make your sentence structure clearer and correct grammar (e.g., use infinitive "to be" and plural forms). Begin with a direct answer, then give a linked reason and specific example. Use linking words such as "unless" and "for example" correctly, and avoid repetition.

예시: Not usually. I only photograph buildings if they are historic or have impressive architecture. For example, I took pictures of an old mosque last year because of its intricate decoration and unique dome.

제안: Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural agreement, and give specific reasons why you want to visit. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the tallest building in Egypt's new capital. I want to see its observation deck because it offers panoramic views of the city, and I have heard the facade is illuminated with colourful lights at night, which would be spectacular to photograph.

× No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home.

Sentence is correct: the negative form with 'there aren't any' correctly expresses absence of plural countable nouns. No change needed.

× The area around my home are all low rise buildings.

✓ The area around my home is all low-rise buildings.

Subject 'The area' is singular and requires singular verb 'is' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'low rise' should be hyphenated as 'low-rise' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: use 'is' for singular subjects and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× The tall buildings are 40 kilometers away, which is in the iconic buildings in the new in Egypt's new capital which is 30 kilometers away.

✓ The tall buildings are 40 kilometers away; they are in the iconic area of Egypt's new capital, which is 30 kilometers away.

Original sentence has article misuse, incorrect relative clause structure, and redundant words. Use 'the iconic area' or 'an iconic development' and link clauses clearly. Replace 'which is in the iconic buildings in the new in Egypt's new capital' with a clear clause, and avoid repeating 'new'. Use semicolon or a conjunction for clarity.

× No, I don't often take photos of building unless there are historical or has a majestic or superior architecture.

✓ No, I don't often take photos of buildings unless they are historical or have majestic or impressive architecture.

Errors: countable noun 'building' should be plural 'buildings'; after 'unless' the clause must be complete with subject and verb ('they are'/'they have'); 'has' is incorrect for plural subject; 'superior architecture' is awkward — use 'impressive' instead. Also 'historical' should be 'historical' or 'historic' depending on meaning. Suggestion: match plural nouns and ensure verbs agree with the subject.

× Other than that, all the same buildings are all the same to me so it's not worth to take pictures of unless they are iconic.

✓ Other than that, the buildings all look the same to me, so it's not worth taking pictures of them unless they are iconic.

Problems: redundant 'all' and awkward phrasing 'it's not worth to take pictures' (correct form is 'it's not worth taking pictures' or 'it's not worth taking photos of them'). Also add object 'them' after 'pictures of'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'worth' and include the object.

× Yes, there is a there is a building I would like to visit.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit.

Redundant repetition 'there is a there is a' — remove duplicate. The corrected sentence uses 'there is' once to introduce the building.

× It's the tallest buildings in the world.

✓ It's the tallest building in the world.

Mismatch between subject and complement: 'It' (singular) should refer to 'building' singular. Use 'building' (singular) with 'tallest'. If speaking of multiple buildings, change pronoun and verb accordingly. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches pronoun.

× It's located in the Egypt's new capital.

✓ It's located in Egypt's new capital.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before a possessive noun phrase like 'Egypt's new capital'. Use 'in Egypt's new capital'. Suggestion: avoid 'the' before possessive forms.

× I've heard it's a very huge, very tall and at night they light up with different colours, which is superior and I would like to fit someday.

✓ I've heard it's very large and very tall, and at night it lights up with different colours, which is impressive, and I would like to visit someday.

Multiple issues addressed: 'huge' is fine but 'a very huge' is awkward — use 'very large' or just 'huge'; subject-verb agreement: 'they light up' conflicts with singular 'it' (the building) — use 'it lights up'; 'which is superior' is unnatural when praising appearance — 'which is impressive' fits better; 'I would like to fit' is incorrect verb choice — use 'visit'. Suggestion: keep subject consistent, choose appropriate adjectives, and use correct verbs for intention ('visit').