Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak more fluently with correct grammar and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common grammar mistakes (e.g., use “don’t have any” or “there aren’t any,” say “we live in a village,” and use plural/singular consistently). Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. We live in a small village where most houses are single-storey. For example, my own house has only three rooms and a kitchen, so the area feels low-rise and quiet.

제안: Use correct verb forms and clearer time expressions, reduce hesitations and repetition. Begin with a topic sentence, then give a specific example with linking words (e.g., “for example,” “last year”). Use past tense consistently when talking about past trips. Vary vocabulary (“photograph” or “take photos of,” “tall buildings,” “skyscrapers”).

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings. For example, when I visited Dubai last year, I photographed many skyscrapers, including the Burj Khalifa and several other very tall towers. I like capturing their shapes and the way they reflect light.

제안: Be more specific and use correct names and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence naming one or two buildings you want to visit, then explain why using linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example”). Avoid guessing names; if unsure, say the city or type of building. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, there are several buildings I would like to visit. For example, I want to see the Colosseum in Rome because it is an important historical site. I would also like to visit modern landmarks like the Burj Khalifa to compare modern architecture with ancient structures.

× No, we have not any tall building near my home.

✓ No, we do not have any tall buildings near my home.

The student used 'have not' which is nonstandard; in negative present simple use 'do not have'. Also 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'any' and general meaning. Use 'do not' + base verb for negation with plural noun: 'do not have any tall buildings'.

× We uh, live in village all, uh, the house in this village, uh, building from uh, one floor, uh, it's just uh, four or three rooms with kitchen.

✓ We live in a village; the houses here are one storey, with just three or four rooms and a kitchen.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'village' (use 'a village'), awkward order and plurality: 'the house in this village' should be plural 'the houses here' or 'the house in this village is'. 'Building from one floor' is incorrect; use 'one storey' or 'one-floor buildings'. Also word order for rooms should be 'three or four rooms and a kitchen'. Simplify into clearer sentences for fluency.

× Yes, I love take photo for buildings.

✓ Yes, I love taking photos of buildings.

After 'love' when speaking about a general activity use the gerund form 'taking'. Also use plural 'photos' and preposition 'of' to indicate the object of the photographs: 'taking photos of buildings'.

× For example, when I go to Dubai in uh, last year, I take photo for many, many building in there like Burj Khalifa and uh, another uh uh, taller building in this city.

✓ For example, when I went to Dubai last year, I took photos of many buildings there, like the Burj Khalifa and other tall buildings in the city.

This sentence refers to a past event so 'go' and 'take' must be in past tense: 'went' and 'took'. Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings'. Use 'there' (no 'in there') and include the definite article 'the' with 'Burj Khalifa'. 'Another taller building' is unclear; 'other tall buildings' is better.

× Yes, sure, there are many building I want to visit like Burg Pizza, uh, uh, evil.

✓ Yes, sure, there are many buildings I want to visit, like the Burj Al Arab and the Eiffel Tower.

Use plural 'buildings'. Proper nouns need correct forms and articles: 'Burj Al Arab' or 'Burj Khalifa' and 'the Eiffel Tower' with definite article. Also original names 'Burg Pizza' and 'evil' seem to be mispronunciations; correct the names.

× Also, uh, some building in Roma, uh, some this building are traditional or uh history building and others modern building.

✓ Also, some buildings in Rome are traditional or historic, and others are modern buildings.

Use plural 'buildings'. 'Roma' in English is 'Rome'. 'Some this building are' is ungrammatical; use 'some buildings are'. Use adjective 'historic' (or 'historical') and plural 'modern buildings'. Include verb 'are' for both clauses to maintain parallel structure.