Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + short description). Use correct singular/plural and simple nouns (e.g., 'high-rise apartments'), avoid repetition, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Yes. There are several high-rise apartment buildings near my home. For example, a 20‑storey residential tower stands about five minutes away, and it has shops on the ground floor.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then add a concise reason and a specific example. Use correct verb forms and articles, and linking words such as 'but' or 'however' to connect ideas. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Not usually. However, I sometimes photograph one particular building on my way to college because it has an unusual façade; for instance, its glass panels reflect the sky in interesting patterns.

제안: Answer directly then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'for example'). Correct grammar for countable nouns and use 'building' or 'buildings' consistently. Keep sentences clear and avoid vague phrases like 'and some.'

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a nearby historic library because its external architecture is remarkable and the interior has ornate woodwork. For example, I want to see the vaulted ceilings and the old reading rooms to understand how the building was designed.

× I live in the cities where a different apartment with a high res apartment.

✓ I live in a city where the apartments are high-rise.

The original sentence has incorrect article and noun forms and an unclear structure. 'Cities' should be singular 'a city' to match 'I live in'; 'a different apartment with a high res apartment' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'the apartments are high-rise' to describe the buildings. Suggestion: decide singular/plural consistently and use a clear noun phrase (e.g., 'high-rise apartments').

× It consists of high res apartments and there is one apartment near my home.

✓ It consists of high-rise apartments, and there is one apartment near my home.

Missing hyphenation and consistent adjective form: 'high res' is informal and should be 'high-rise'. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' connecting two independent clauses. Maintain consistent terminology.

× Actually I don't want to take photos of building, but sometimes when I walk to my college, when I arrived there, there is one most beautiful design buildings.

✓ Actually I don't usually take photos of buildings, but sometimes when I walk to my college I see a very beautifully designed building.

Multiple problems: 'photos of building' needs plural 'buildings' or 'a building'; tense and time expressions are inconsistent ('when I walk' present vs 'when I arrived' past). 'one most beautiful design buildings' is ungrammatical; use 'a very beautifully designed building'. Use consistent present tense for habitual actions.

× I take the photos of that building only.

✓ I only take photos of that building.

Word order: place adverb 'only' before the verb phrase or before 'photos' depending on emphasis. Also drop article 'the' before 'photos' when speaking generally. Use present simple for habitual action.

× Yes, there is one most beautiful buildings which have a great architecture view from a different directions when we look from the different perspectives.

✓ Yes, there is one very beautiful building which has great architectural views from different directions when we look at it from different perspectives.

Mix of singular/plural: 'one' must be followed by singular 'building', and verb must agree: 'has' not 'have'. 'most beautiful' is awkward; use 'very beautiful' or 'one of the most beautiful'. 'architecture view' should be 'architectural views'. Also use 'look at it' and remove redundant 'the'.

× So I want to visit that buildings, I want to see inside interior design of that buildings and the structure inside that and some.

✓ So I want to visit that building; I want to see its interior design and the internal structure.

'that buildings' is plural but 'that' indicates singular; use 'that building'. Use possessive pronoun 'its' for 'interior design'. 'the structure inside that and some' is vague; rephrase to 'the internal structure'. Keep sentences concise and consistent in number and pronoun use.