Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 응답이 질문에 직접 답하고는 있으나 문법과 표현에서 오류가 있고 어색합니다. 더 자연스럽게 말하려면 짧은 주제 문장으로 시작한 뒤 한 두 개의 구체적 이유를 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어 단수/복수, 형용사 사용과 관사(a/the) 등을 바로잡고, 'rural city' 대신 'rural area' 또는 'small town' 같은 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요. 또한 문장을 두세 개로 나눠 말하면 명확해집니다.

예시: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small rural town, so most buildings are low and spread out. Because it's mainly countryside, you can see lots of open fields and houses rather than skyscrapers.

제안: 답변은 의도를 보여주지만 어휘 선택과 문장 구조에 큰 오류가 있습니다. 'take a photo with buildings' 대신 'take photos of buildings'를 사용하고, 의미가 불명확한 단어('bottle')는 제거하세요. 경험을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 정확히 쓰고, 한두 문장으로 구체적 예시(언제, 어디서, 왜)를 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 정리하세요.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy their shapes and details. For example, when I was in Taipei I took pictures of the Twin Towers because their design looked impressive in the evening light.

제안: 응답에는 방문하고 싶은 건물에 대한 의도가 있으나 명확한 목표와 문장 구성이 부족합니다. 건물 이름과 이유를 정확히 말하고(예: 63 Building), 문법적 오류를 고치세요. 'popular readings'와 'load the tower' 같은 잘못된 표현을 피하고, 이유와 감정을 linking word(so, because, therefore)를 사용해 한두 문장으로 정리하세요.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the 63 Building in Seoul because it is very tall and offers great views of the city. I often go there to enjoy the observation deck and take photos of the skyline because the view is really impressive.

× No, not at all because my hometown is rural cities so it is located in countryside.

✓ No, not at all. My hometown is a rural city, so it is located in the countryside.

The original sentence mixes plural and singular nouns and lacks proper sentence boundaries. Use 'a rural city' (singular) or 'rural cities' consistently; 'countryside' needs the definite article 'the'. Split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: divide clauses with a period, use 'a rural city' and 'the countryside'.

× Yes, I like take a photo with buildings because it's a nice bottle.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of buildings because they look nice.

After 'like' use the -ing form ('taking'). 'Take a photo with buildings' is awkward; use 'photos of buildings'. 'It's a nice bottle' is incorrect and likely a wrong word; replace with 'they look nice' or 'they are nice'.

× So what? I was in Taipei.

✓ I was in Taipei.

The phrase 'So what?' is inappropriate in this context and sounds rude; remove it. The sentence 'I was in Taipei.' is correct past tense to state a past visit.

× I take a twin building, take a photo.

✓ I took a photo of the Twin Towers (or a pair of twin buildings).

Use past tense 'took' to match 'I was in Taipei.' Also use correct preposition 'of' for photographing something. Clarify 'twin building' as 'twin buildings' or 'Twin Towers' if specific.

× Yes, I like uh, popular readings because it's so high and nice view, so I often visit 63 building and load the tower.

✓ Yes, I like popular buildings because they are so tall and have nice views, so I often visit the 63 Building and Lotte Tower.

'Popular readings' is wrong word choice; use 'popular buildings'. Use 'tall' for height, and 'have nice views' for clarity. Use plural agreement 'they are'. Use definite article 'the' with building names and correct proper nouns: '63 Building' and 'Lotte Tower' (not 'load the tower').

× That's so cool.

✓ That's so cool.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It is an appropriate informal response.