Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, clear topic sentence about whether tall buildings are near your home, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., types of buildings, how close they are, why you notice them). Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Keep your answer to 2–4 sentences and use simple linking words like "and" or "because."

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. Most of them are apartment blocks about 15 stories high, and I can see them from my window. I often notice their glass facades because they reflect the sunlight, which makes them look striking in the evening.

제안: Answer directly whether you take photos, then give a clear reason and one example. Use simple, correct sentence structure and relevant vocabulary (e.g., "photograph," "architecture," "angles"). Avoid vague or confusing phrases. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

예시: Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially when their architecture looks interesting. For example, I like to photograph unusual angles or decorative details because they show the designer's style.

제안: Give a clear answer saying whether there is a building you'd like to visit, then describe that building with specific details (location, style, why it attracts you). Use linking words (e.g., "because," "for example") and avoid fillers like "uh." Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, there is a building near my house that I would like to visit. It has a very beautiful, ornate facade with carved stone and colorful tiles, and I want to see the interior because the architecture looks like a historical theatre.

× Absolutely. It's my near my home.

✓ Absolutely. It's near my home.

The extra possessive 'my' is redundant and creates an article/type error. Remove the first 'my' to form the correct expression 'It's near my home.' Suggestion: say 'It's near my home' or 'It's close to my home.'

× I follow those buildings that is very tall.

✓ I follow those buildings that are very tall.

The relative clause refers to 'buildings' (plural), so the verb must be plural 'are' not 'is'. Also 'follow' is odd here—if the student means 'I like to look at' or 'I pass by', use those verbs. Suggestion: 'I like those buildings that are very tall.'

× We like to interesting when we see all the building because we can call building or something like that.

✓ We find it interesting when we see all the buildings because we can point out the buildings or something like that.

The phrase 'like to interesting' is incorrect: 'interesting' is an adjective and needs a structure like 'find it interesting' or 'are interested.' Also 'the building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'all.' 'Call building' is unclear; 'point out the buildings' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'find it interesting' or 'are interested' and match plural nouns.

× And yeah, it's the apartment or building very tall, maybe 1515.

✓ And yeah, it's an apartment building that is very tall, maybe about 15 stories.

Missing article 'an' before a noun phrase 'apartment building.' Also '1515' is unclear—likely '15' or '15 stories.' Rephrase to 'an apartment building that is very tall, maybe about 15 stories.' Suggestion: include the correct article and clarify the number.

× Yeah, I think for me, I, I prefer to look at my eye then take a picture because I think it's very unique with Earth to learn something like you in the floor in the very.

✓ Yeah, I think I prefer to look with my eyes first, then take a picture, because I think it's more meaningful to observe first and learn from what I see.

This sentence has multiple structure problems and unclear phrases. 'Look at my eye' is incorrect; use 'look with my eyes' or simply 'look.' 'Then' instead of 'then take a picture' requires ordering: 'look first, then take a picture.' Phrases like 'unique with Earth to learn something like you in the floor in the very' are ungrammatical and unclear; rephrase to express the intended idea (observing before photographing helps learning). Suggestion: simplify into two clauses: observe first, then photograph, and explain why.

× Thing is near my house like to once building there is very beautiful and the the uh the architecture is created, the building is very beautiful and look like to the uh performer.

✓ There is a building near my house that is very beautiful; the architecture is impressive and the building looks like a performance venue.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated fillers ('the the uh the') and unclear verbs ('architecture is created'). Use a clear relative clause: 'There is a building near my house that is very beautiful.' 'Architecture is impressive' or 'the architecture is striking' are correct; 'look like to the performer' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'looks like a performance venue' or 'like a theater.' Suggestion: remove fillers, use clear clauses and appropriate nouns ('venue', 'theater').