Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体自然且信息具体，但可更简洁并注意句子内的小错误（如“a 10 minutes”应为"a 10-minute"或"10 minutes'"）。可用一两句直接主题句再加一两句细节，避免冗长。可用连接词如“also”或“for example”更顺畅地衔接细节。

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home, mainly apartment blocks and an office tower about a 10-minute walk away. For example, a new glass-clad high-rise overlooks the park and has shops on the ground floor, which makes living nearby very convenient.

제안: 内容有意思且有观点，但存在语法和用词问题（如“reveals us”应为"reveals places' history and culture"或"reveals to us"；"capturing all churches and more than skyscrapers"表达不清）。应更准确地表达比较关系并简化句子，用连接词如“because”或“for example”来组织信息。

예시: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially when I travel, because architecture reveals a place's history and culture. For example, I prefer photographing churches rather than skyscrapers to contrast their styles, and I usually edit my photos afterwards to highlight interesting details.

제안: 回答清楚且有理由，但有拼写/用词错误（“sale like”应为"sail-like"或"sail-shaped"），可把观点压缩为最多三句并加入连接词如“so”或“and”使逻辑更紧凑。增加一两个具体期待的细节会更好。

예시: Yes, I'd love to visit the Sydney Opera House because of its iconic sail-like architecture and cultural importance. I'd take a guided tour to learn about its history and engineering, and I hope to see a live performance there to experience the renowned acoustics.

제안: 思路明确并给出理由与例子，但存在拼写/表达错误（如"St. level"不清晰，建议改为"street level"），句子较长可拆分为两到三句以提高流畅度。用连接词如"also"或"for example"自然衔接，同时注意词汇准确性。

예시: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because higher floors often offer spectacular views and a greater sense of openness than street level. For example, waking up to a city skyline or a distant mountain can be uplifting, and tall buildings often provide handy amenities like gyms and 24-hour security.

× ...because architecture reveals us places, history and culture.

✓ ...because architecture reveals to us places, history and culture.

原句中動詞 reveal 後直接接 us 顯得不自然且語法不正確。reveal 通常用法為 reveal something (to somebody) 或 reveal somebody/something。此處需使用介詞 to 引出受詞。建議：使用 reveal to sb sth 或者把語序改為 architecture reveals places, history and culture to us。

× ...because of its iconic sale like architecture and cultural significance.

✓ ...because of its iconic sail‑like architecture and cultural significance.

原句用 sale like 顯然是拼寫或詞選錯誤。正確表達應為 sail-like（帆狀的）來形容歌劇院外形。建議：注意單詞拼寫，遇複合形容詞用連字符（sail-like）。

× ...an office tower about a 10 minutes walk away.

✓ ...an office tower about a 10-minute walk away.

原句中 10 minutes 與單位 walk 組合時需用單數形式並加連字符表示時間長度作定語（a 10-minute walk）。建議：數字＋單位作形容詞時通常用單數並加連字符。

× For example, a new glass clad high rise apartment building overlooks the park and has convenient shops on the ground floor, which makes living nearby quite practical.

✓ For example, a new glass-clad high-rise apartment building overlooks the park and has convenient shops on the ground floor, which make living nearby quite practical.

關係代詞 which 代指前面複數名詞短語（shops on the ground floor）時，動詞應用複數 make。但也可理解為整個情況 (the presence of shops) makes，若想明確指 shops 則用 make。本處根據原句意改為 make。建議：確定 which 所指的先行詞是單數還是複數，動詞與之一致；同時注意複合形容詞 glass-clad, high-rise 的連字符。

× I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel, because architecture reveals us places, history and culture.

✓ I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel, because architecture reveals to us places, history and culture.

重複指出 reveal 用法錯誤，並強調時態應用現在時描述習慣性動作是正確的。建議：保持現在簡單時以表達習慣性行為，並修正動詞結構（參見前述 reveal 用法）。

× I enjoy capturing all churches and more than skyscrapers to contrast their styles, and I often edit the images afterwards to emphasize interesting details and unique perspectives.

✓ I enjoy capturing old churches more than skyscrapers to contrast their styles, and I often edit the images afterwards to emphasize interesting details and unique perspectives.

原句中的 all churches and more than skyscrapers 語序和詞選混亂，likely 意圖為比起摩天大樓更喜歡拍老教堂，因此改為 capturing old churches more than skyscrapers。建議：確定比較結構（A more than B）和形容詞修飾名詞的位置。

× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views from higher floors are often spectacular and provide a sense of openness that is hard to find at St. level.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views from higher floors are often spectacular and provide a sense of openness that is hard to find at street level.

原句中 St. level 為不正確或縮寫錯誤，正確表達應為 street level（街面高度）。建議：避免不明縮寫，使用完整單詞以免造成誤解。