Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and accurate: use correct words and a clear topic sentence, then add one concise specific detail. Avoid hesitations and incorrect vocabulary (e.g. "toy bellies"). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. My hometown is rural, so it’s mostly mountains and rivers; for example, there is a large river about ten minutes from town where people go fishing.

제안: Good structure and clear reasons. To improve, vary vocabulary and add a brief specific example or comparison, and use a linking word to make the answer more cohesive.

예시: Not really — I prefer photographing natural landscapes. For instance, I often take pictures of the nearby forest and river because they feel more peaceful and, compared with buildings, they offer richer textures and changing light.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb forms and prepositions), and give one specific reason or detail. Avoid filler sounds and combine ideas smoothly with linking words.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Gyeongbokgung Palace. It’s a historic site, so I want to take photos there and, ideally, wear traditional Korean clothing with my friends to get authentic pictures.

제안: Answer directly and correct awkward phrases. Keep it concise, use a linking phrase to add a reason, and include one specific detail to support your preference.

예시: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building. I prefer a detached house with a large yard because my puppy can run and play there, and I’d enjoy more privacy and outdoor space.

× Nope, not at all. Uh, my hometown is totally a countryside, so there's no toy bellies. There are just lots of mountains and rivers and some natural landscapes that are.

✓ No, not at all. My hometown is totally a countryside area, so there aren't any tall buildings. There are just lots of mountains, rivers, and natural landscapes.

Multiple issues: 'a countryside' is incorrect determiner use for an uncountable/area noun (Article errors/word choice) and should be 'a countryside area' or 'a rural area'; 'toy bellies' is a mispronunciation/misspelling of 'tall buildings' and must be corrected; 'there's' with plural 'tall buildings' causes subject-verb agreement error, so use 'there aren't any tall buildings'; the trailing clause 'some natural landscapes that are' is incomplete and redundant, so revise to 'natural landscapes'. Suggest speaking slowly and checking vocabulary, and ensure plural nouns match verb forms (there + plural => there are/aren't).

× No, I don't like taking photos of buildings. I prefer photographing natural landscapes, for example mountains and forests and rivers, because they feel more peaceful and offer more variety in texture.

✓ No, I don't like taking photos of buildings. I prefer photographing natural landscapes, for example mountains, forests, and rivers, because they feel more peaceful and offer more variety in texture.

Mainly punctuation and listing: add commas to separate list items (style) and include Oxford comma for clarity. Tense and verb forms are correct. Suggest using clear list punctuation and natural collocations ('variety in texture' is acceptable but 'variety of textures' sounds more natural).

× Uh, I'd like to visit Gangbukkong, which is a historical building and I want to take a picture and wearing Korean traditional clothes with my friends.

✓ Uh, I'd like to visit Gangbuk-gong, which is a historical building. I want to take pictures and wear traditional Korean clothes with my friends.

Several issues: run-on sentence and incorrect verb form 'wearing' after 'want to' (should be base form 'wear'); 'take a picture and wear' pairs better as plural 'pictures' and parallel verbs. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggest using parallel verb structures after 'want to' (want to take, want to wear) and avoid run-on sentences by using conjunctions correctly or splitting sentences. Note: corrected place name formatting 'Gangbuk-gong'.

× No, not other. I've never wanted to live in a tall building. Umm, I prefer a detached house with a large yard so that my little puppy can run around and play with me.

✓ No, not really. I've never wanted to live in a tall building. I prefer a detached house with a large yard so that my little puppy can run around and play with me.

'Not other' is incorrect; 'not really' or 'no' is appropriate. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct. Suggest using natural conversational responses ('not really') and checking common phrases. Also keep tense and pronouns consistent; here 'my little puppy' and 'play with me' are fine.