Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体较好，内容直接且有细节，但存在表达不够准确和冗余问题。建议：1) 改正语法错误并避免重复，例如将“more than office towers and shopping centers”改为更清晰的描述；2) 简化句子结构，控制在3–4句内；3) 使用连接词使信息更连贯（例如 “for example”, “which” 的使用要准确）。

예시: Yes. I live in the central business district, so there are many tall buildings nearby, including one of the tallest skyscrapers in the city. For example, most of them are office towers or shopping centers, which makes the area very busy and impressive.

제안: 回答有热情且包含原因，但句子有冗长与语法问题（如“creates strong reflections to the interesting shadows”不通顺）。建议：1) 把原因分成两部分并用连词衔接；2) 用更精确的词汇描述光影效果；3) 控制句子长度，确保自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I love photographing buildings, especially on sunny days. Sunlight makes glass facades sparkle and creates strong reflections and interesting shadows, which make the photos more dramatic.

제안: 回答清晰、有具体原因和细节，结构良好。建议：1) 可加入一点个人感受或预期（例如想拍的照片或感受城市氛围）以增加个性化细节；2) 保持简短自然，不必过多重复“famous”。

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit the Empire State Building in New York City. I've often seen it in films and photos, and I'm eager to see the panoramic views from the observation deck. I also want to learn about its history and take some skyline photos at sunset.

제안: 理由明确且有具体例子，但表达上有小语法和用词问题（如“living in high floor”应为“living on a high floor”）。建议：1) 改正介词和单复数错误；2) 可补充一两句正反对比（例如高楼的优点）以显得更全面；3) 保持句子简洁流畅。

예시: Actually, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because it would be hard to evacuate quickly in an emergency. Also, living on a high floor is inconvenient when I go out often, for example carrying groceries or commuting, so I prefer a low-rise house.

× Many of them are more than office towers and shopping centers, which makes the area very busy and impressive.

✓ Many of them are more than just office towers and shopping centers, which makes the area very busy and impressive.

句子中缺少“just”會讓比較片語不完整。“more than”在此處需要與“just”或明確的內容搭配來表示“不僅僅是……”。建議在類似用法中使用“more than just + 名詞短語”來表達“非僅僅是……”。

× because sunlight makes glass sparkle and creates strong reflections to the interesting shadows that make the images more striking.

✓ because sunlight makes glass sparkle and creates strong reflections and interesting shadows that make the images more striking.

原句中使用“reflections to the interesting shadows”是不正確的介詞搭配且結構混亂。此處應使用並列結構“creates strong reflections and interesting shadows”，將兩個名詞短語並列，以保持句子流暢。建議使用並列連接（and）而非介詞短語“to the”。

× In fact, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because in an emergency it would be hard to escape quickly.

✓ In fact, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because in an emergency it would be hard to escape quickly.

句子時態本身合適（使用虛擬或條件語氣表示偏好與假設情況），但可注意“wouldn't like to live”在表達一般偏好時可改為“I wouldn't want to live”更自然。本項指出為時態/語氣的微調建議，而非必須改錯。建議以“I wouldn't want to live”來表達更口語、自然的偏好。

× Also, living in high floor is inconvenient when I need to go out often, for example carrying groceries or commuting.

✓ Also, living on a high floor is inconvenient when I need to go out often, for example carrying groceries or commuting.

英文中表示位於樓層應使用介詞“on a high floor”而不是“in high floor”。此外需加不定冠詞“a”。建議記住“live on the first/second floor / on a high floor”。

× So I prefer a low rise house.

✓ So I prefer a low-rise house.

“low rise”作複合形容詞形容房子時應以連字符連接為“low-rise”。另外在口語中也可說“I prefer a low-rise building/house”或“I prefer a low-rise home”。建議在使用複合形容詞時加連字符以示一致性。