Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接、有条理并减少犹豫语（如 uh, umm）。开头先给出明确的总述，然后用连接词补充具体例子并说明个人感受。可以把细节限定在最多两到三项，以保持简洁。注意复数和冠词用法（e.g. 'on weekends' 而非 'in the weekends'）。

예시: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, a large shopping center and a hospital are nearby, and there are also several office blocks. However, I dislike how crowded it gets on weekends because it makes going out inconvenient.

제안: 回答要语法准确并避免重复。先给出明确立场，然后用一两句具体原因支持，用连接词如 'because' 或 'so'。改正语法错误（如 'I don't like taking photos'；'if we stand in a different direction'）。避免空泛表达，给出更具体的情景或例子。

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because the view often changes depending on the angle. Instead, I prefer to remember interesting buildings in my mind or sketch them in a notebook.

제안: 回答时用正确的词汇和时态表达愿望与原因。明确指出想去的建筑名称（应该是 'the Eiffel Tower in Paris'），并说明何时、为何产生兴趣。使用连接词如 'because' 或 'since' 增强逻辑。句子保持简短且具体。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris. I first saw a picture of it in a book when I was in high school, and since then I've wanted to see its structure and the view from the top.

제안: 回答要更连贯并补充明确原因。开头表明立场，然后用有逻辑的两个支持点并用连接词连接（例如 'because'，'also'）。避免未完成的句子，注意时态和语法（如 'I lived in the village' 应为 'I'd rather live in a village because it is quieter'）。可以举一两个具体担忧（例如安全、噪音）。

예시: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I worry about safety during earthquakes. Also, I prefer the peace and space of a village, which feels quieter and more relaxing.

× Yes, uh, there are so many tall buildings around my apartment, uh, including the, uh, shopping center, uh, and the hospital, uh, and the office, umm, but I don't like that it's very busy in the weekends.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings around my apartment, including a shopping center, a hospital, and some offices, but I don't like that it's very busy on weekends.

错误类型：可数名词单复数及冠词使用。原句中“the shopping center/the hospital/the office”在泛指时不应使用定冠词或单数形式；此外 “in the weekends” 应为正确介词短语“on weekends”。建议使用复数或不定冠词来泛指多个场所，并使用固定搭配“on weekends”。

× I don't like take photos of buildings.

✓ I don't like taking photos of buildings.

错误类型：动词+ -ing形式。动词“like”后接动名词（doing），而非不带to的不定式。应改为“like taking”。

× if we stand on the different direction, we will see the different views of the building.

✓ if we stand in different directions, we will see different views of the building.

错误类型：介词和复数形式。固定搭配为“stand in a direction”或“stand in different directions”表示从不同方向看；同时“the different views” 在泛指时可去定冠词或用复数“different views”。建议使用“in different directions”并将“different views”用复数形式且去掉定冠词。

× I think we can, uh, remember it in our mind instead of our phone.

✓ I think we can remember it in our minds instead of on our phones.

错误类型：代词及介词使用。短语应为“in our minds”（复数mind或用mind的复数形式表示每个人的脑中）且“on our phones”为常用搭配（记在手机上）。建议用复数形式并改正介词。

× Yes, I would like to visit the Paris Tour of France. I remembered my first picture appeared in my brain is in my Senior High School. I read it from the book, so I would like to go there.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Tour Eiffel in Paris. I remember the first image appeared in my mind when I was in senior high school. I read about it in a book, so I would like to go there.

错误类型：时态与词汇使用。原句中“remembered”与上下文意图（现在仍记得）应使用现在时“remember”；“appeared in my brain is in my Senior High School”句子结构混乱，应改为“appeared in my mind when I was in senior high school”。另外“Paris Tour of France”是不自然表达，应使用“Tour Eiffel”或“the Eiffel Tower”。最后“read it from the book”应为“read about it in a book”。建议调整时态并使用自然表达。

× To be honest, I don't want to live in a tall building. First of all, I think it's not very safe if the earthquake happened and then uh, I think if we are, I lived in the uh, village, it should be more quiet and.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to live in a tall building. First of all, I don't think it's very safe if an earthquake happens. Also, if I lived in a village, it would be quieter.

错误类型：时态和从句结构。条件句使用时态不当，应使用一般现在时（if an earthquake happens）或虚拟语气（If I lived... would be）。原句混用时态并且主语不一致（we vs I），且“more quiet”应为比较级“quieter”。建议统一主语为“I”，调整条件句时态并使用比较级。