Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が通じますが、文法と語順、語彙の選択を改善すると自然に聞こえます。具体的には、短いトピック文で直接答えた後に、理由を述べるとよいです。また、冠詞や複数形（a rural area / fields）を正しく使い、接続詞で文を滑らかに繋げてください。

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a rural area, so my house is surrounded by small houses and fields used for crops.

제안: 内容は理解できますが、不自然な表現と語彙の誤用（a lot of hotel）があります。理由を述べる際は具体例を加え、正しい名詞や動詞の形を使ってください。接続詞で文を繋げ、冗長を避けましょう。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings. Japan has many unique and historic structures, so I like to photograph them to remember my visits, especially old temples and modern architecture.

제안: 回答は明確ですが、建物名の発音や表現が少し不自然です（おそらく『Kinkaku-ji』）。トピック文で直接答え、その後に理由や特徴を具体的に述べてください。繋ぎの語（because / which / so）を適切に使い分けると自然です。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Kinkaku-ji in Kyoto. It’s a famous golden pavilion and a major landmark, so I want to see its beautiful reflection in the pond and learn about its history.

제안: 理由は分かりやすいですが、文法ミスと語順の改善が必要です（leave→live、a small house、evacuateの使い方）。簡潔なトピック文の後に、具体的な理由と結果（安全対策など）を述べてください。

예시: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building. Because Japan has frequent earthquakes, I prefer a small, low-rise house where I feel safer and can evacuate more quickly if necessary.

× No there are not because I live in rural area so my house is surrounded by small buildings and field for crops.

✓ No, there are not, because I live in a rural area, so my house is surrounded by small buildings and fields for crops.

The sentence omits the indefinite article before 'rural area' and uses singular 'field' when plural 'fields' matches 'small buildings' and implies multiple crop areas. Also commas improve clarity. Suggestion: use 'a rural area' and pluralize 'field' to 'fields' to match the context.

× Yes, I often take a photo of buildings because in Japan there are many rare buildings, so I want to take a lot of hotel to remember it.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings because in Japan there are many unique buildings, so I want to take a lot of photos to remember them.

The original uses singular 'a photo' with 'often' (plural 'photos' is natural) and misuses 'hotel' instead of 'photos'. Also 'rare' is better as 'unique' for buildings; pronoun 'it' should match plural 'photos' so 'them'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and ensure the pronoun agrees in number.

× Yes, there is. I want to visit King Kakuji which is located in Kyoto and it is a landmark for searching in Kyoto, so I'd like to visit there.

✓ Yes, there is. I want to visit Kinkaku-ji, which is located in Kyoto; it is a famous landmark in Kyoto, so I'd like to visit it.

'King Kakuji' appears to be a misspelling of 'Kinkaku-ji'. 'For searching in Kyoto' is incorrect; use 'a famous landmark in Kyoto'. Also 'visit there' is redundant; use 'visit it' or 'visit there' with clearer structure. Suggestion: use correct proper noun spelling and appropriate prepositions ('landmark in Kyoto') and correct pronoun reference.

× No, I don't want to leave in a tall building because in Japan there are many earthquakes every year, so I want to live in small house to evacuate.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because in Japan there are many earthquakes every year, so I want to live in a small house to evacuate easily.

The original uses 'leave' instead of 'live' (word choice error) and omits articles 'a' before 'small house'. Also add 'easily' to clarify purpose of evacuating. Suggestion: use correct verb 'live', include the indefinite article before singular countable nouns, and add an adverb to clarify intent.